VENOMOUS DESIRE#5 UPDATED EPI 03 PG 123 ON 10-10-19 - Page 65

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Posted: 9 years ago
haven't commented from last soo many chaps sorry for that
i m offically off
the new track is awesome
major shatru wala...maan mom n veer are tracking him
n they are behind geet n baby
n maan dont know anything
lost in his angels
waiting for next update 
n willl try to comment now regularly
but seriously all are awesome update
read now only
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Posted: 9 years ago
part 77
nice part...
Sasha is being used as a pawn?
what did her father do?
cont soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice👏👏



sashas father spoiled maans parents life😡



sasha is ready to spoil maaneets life😡



hope veer find culprit soon😕



maaneet moments r nice😳



precap is scary😲



update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update dear...but precap is scaring...hope geet will be fine...continueee sooonnn ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Vibrant Update

Sahana  tells Sash about her father and Veer confirms that the tea cup has the poison as the milk had .
Maan and Geet's relationship is truely magical
precap Geet gets attack ...I just hope nothing happens to her pregancy

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Posted: 9 years ago
Geeet maan ke saath saath veer ke upar bhi bossing 
Kr rhi h 
Shasha abhi tk mari nhi yhin h 
Ufff irritating shasha 
Wating for nxt
Gewt ke upar attact 
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TEASER OF VENOMOUS DESIRE (28-10-14)

 

Both Maaneet entered the Singhania Mansion.Maan looking around him cautiously while Geet with full dimpled smile.Maan made her walk slowly holding her baby bump.

Before they would enter Pammi said angrily,"Stop right there Geet!"

Maan sighed expecting this only.Sanjay was happy and looking at Geet standing holding her baby bump his eyes twinkled.

Maan spoke,"Listen chachiji...!"

But Pammi cut him and spoke softly,"I said stop right there son!"

Maan was taken aback hearing the word son from Pammi's lips.He stood there with stunned belief.Pammi smiled and ordered her servant from her eyes.The servant went inside and came back with the plate of litted lamp.Maan was stunned once again seeing the litted lamp plate.

Pammi stood and did arti of Geet and said,"First time u r stepping inside our house since u got married.Welcome home beta!"

Geet had tears immediately seeing her aunt welcoming her with a happy face.Geet ran towards her aunt and hugged her tight.Maan who came to the present world immediately followed her behind to cocoon her.

But Pammi cocooned her tightly and said,"Careful beta!U r carrying a child inside u.If u be rough and tough then ur baby gets hurt beta!"

Geet cutely nodded no vigorously and hugged her aunt more tighter.Pammi chuckled and immediately made her sit on the sofa.

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Geet stood in the dark store room trying to search for something when she felt someone walk past her.She turned feeling conscious and widened her eyes with alarm.No one was there which she felt after few seconds and turned towards the object for which she was trying to search.Few seconds after once again she felt someone behind her.She felt the person's hot breath.Before she get to know who is the person when she turned then the place was empty.Now Geet was hell scared and started moving the boxes vigorously when she felt a long string struck to her hand.She tried to free her hand but she cant.But she dint see the end of the thread struck to the chandelier.

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Maan entered the store room and chuckled looking at his innocent pouty wify who was pouting seeing a thread stuck around her hand.He frowned looking the sight and his eyes followed the thread.His frown deepened but it dint last long as his face struck with the horror.The chandelier was above Geet's head and if the thread is freed then the pointed metal rod can pierce Geet's head.His eyes widen with shock and saw her struggle.

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Cling!

Sanjay who was sitting in the study was shocked hearing the sound of glass break and ran towards the sound while Pammi who was working in kitchen too was shocked hearing the glass break sound and she too ran towards the sound.When both Pammi and Sanjay entered then they saw the sight with shock...


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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
scary teaser cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
maan get shock to see pammi behaviour 
geet finally got her maika 😛😛
kon hay room par 
chalooo acha hay maan aa gaya time par phwee
but kya huya hoga 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice teaser dear don't scare us with this type of teasers dear