ShraNal OS/FF - Beautiful Stranger

ShraNal OS/FF - Beautiful Stranger


Apologies! This isn't novel either 😳


Living alone in the beautiful Goa always kept me craving for a company. I had always heard about the beautiful churches in the state & I decided I'll visit them every weekend.
My weekly visit to St. Sebastian Church every Sunday got a very beautiful reason soon.

Every Sunday I'd reach early morning to pray & see her pretty face. Seeing her singing the canticle with a beautiful smile would give me goosebumps. But I never understood why her face always turned serious whenever our eyes met. I'd smile & she'd rudely look away.

One day I made a stern decision that I will talk to her . She was sitting with her eyes shut hard in prayers. I sat next to her. God knows what went wrong with me & I told her , "You are the most beautiful girl I have ever seen."

She turned red & was fuming with anger but soon her anger turned into gloominess , I can never forget that sadness in her innocent eyes , "Stay away stranger. Just stay away."

Her words shook. I was definitely in love with her.

Next week I wrote a letter expressing my feelings , telling how much I love her. I made that pass to her. She read the letter & her face reflected a mixture of grief & horror. She looked at me helplessly.

The next Sunday , she wasn't there. I felt a huge void inside me. A little kid came running to me & gave a letter with a rose.

"I love you too , stranger. But we can't have a love story.

-Shraddha"

Why did she say that? Why?

Months passed by & she didn't put up. The same boy came running to me with crutches in his hands. He handed me the crutches & a letter.

"Stranger.
I'd be no more when you'd be reading this. I was suffering from gangrene & was a handicap. I always knew I'd die. When you came to my life , I felt something I had not felt ever before. I fell in love with you as soon as I saw you. I didn't want you to be heartbroken , thus left you with silence.

-Shraddha."

This was my love story , where the girl I loved & who loved me , died without even knowing my name.

Criticism , likes , comments are highly appreciated 😳
I'd love to write non-ff oneshot but need time , an OS on ongoing track is definitely on cards 😊

Shubhika ❤️

its beautiful bt sad :-( i loved it <3 u are an amazing writer :-D
would love to read more of ur stories <3
keep posting ;-)

Originally posted by: Lumzz

its beautiful bt sad :-( i loved it <3 u are an amazing writer :-D
would love to read more of ur stories <3
keep posting ;-)

Thank you so much dear 🤗

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Mummyyy

thanks for the story...just amazing...awww...that cut sooo deep. fell in love as strangers and never had the chance to take it forward...so sad...ur an amazing writer please, please continue writing more. just sad and too beautiful especially the ending part😭 Edited by najialuv88 - 10 years ago

Awesome story!!⭐️

Originally posted by: shubhika124

What

No taker for this one? 😭


Mummyyy

Originally posted by: -Red-Rose-

Oh.don't be sad..actually i missed it yesterday..sorry!!!

Edited by najialuv88 - 10 years ago

Originally posted by: najialuv88

thanks for the story...just amazing...awww...that cut sooo deep. fell in love as strangers and never had the chance to take it forward...so sad...ur an amazing writer please, please continue writing more. just sad and too beautiful especially the ending part😭

Thank you so so much Jumoke 🤗
Im overwhelmed ☺️

Originally posted by: -Red-Rose-

Awesome story!!⭐️

You write so beautifully!!👏👏

these are my fav lines..❤️❤️

I was definitely in love with her
This was my love story , where the girl I loved & who loved me , died without even knowing my name.

Thank you so much Im super glad you liked 🤗