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ZAIDI

@Miss.Zaidi

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Posted: 10 years ago

mints ... i gave the detailed cmntwa on pg 2 & my bkwaas on pg 5 :-P :-D B-) ... dono parhna ok :-)

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afsha

@-afsha-

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome OS

I would love 2nd part with La being there and seeing what Khushi has made of her self

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meera30

@meera30

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Posted: 10 years ago

Comment updated here

PS: How could I forget - he kept the band all these years!!! Now if that isn't a guy to fall hard and fast for, then who is!!

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anumadduri

@anumadduri

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Posted: 10 years ago

Absolutely spellbound !!!!! Fantastic love story ... This gave me such a warm feeling in the heart !!!!

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484026

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: meera30
And in some small way, this makes you feel better when you think about your own crush that didn't feel the same way about you - haven't we all been there sometime or the other?

Cant agree more!!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 10 years ago

awww he knew her in college

and he wanted to be her friend but didnt get the chance

but he did now

not only that but he confessed his love for her and proposed

now thats some love for sure

awww so cute right

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hadiqua

@adrastiathena

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Posted: 10 years ago

loved it! 👏 i really liked how u portrayed khushi as a strong girl..and proposing with the friendship band!! 😳 ..that was a hit !..loved it and love u more for the PMs 😉

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

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Posted: 10 years ago

Welcome back Mints...

So good to see you back...

Really lovely OS...Loved it.

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933191

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Posted: 10 years ago

That was a sweet OS...Lavanya was totally mean and I am glad Arnav was able to make up in the end.

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

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Posted: 10 years ago

Mints, welcome back! :)

This was such a beautifully crafted OS! While the start intrigued me, the flashback portion had me all shattered for Khushi and the ending simply gave me all the warm and fuzsies! Love in this case was inevitable! You proved the notion that if something is meant to happen it will happen no matter what, absolutely right ! :)

And so Khushi meets the object of her affection after 10 years, after she has made herself an independent, accomplished and confident woman, she is no longer the nervous and shy teenager, she used to be. It was great to see Arnav being completely under her spell, not that he was affected any less all those years ago but now in the present they are both in a better time and space to be with each other and value each other as well! Arnav's regret at not being able to right the wrong all those year ago, his way of approaching Khushi in the present and finally his way of proposing to Khushi was Outstanding!

Loved it! :-)

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