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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: .pia_12.

Awesome start loved the part.
CONTINUE SOON...


Thank you 😛 I am so happy that u people loved it 😃 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Hey Parus ...Good starting yaar ...

Loved the concept and you have writtune beautifully ...



I am happy to see the comments of Expert writers like u luvsakshi 😛 😳 Will continue soon.. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: sampa123

vry nice start..cntinue soon n next time pm me pls.. flash back hoga kia is ff ma?


Thanks for the comment.. 🤗 i didn't think about including Fb scenes yet. 😊 will try too include it too.. 😳 ok. I will send the PM next time 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anupam_dil

hey what a precap yaar🤣🤣...continue soon



Thank you 😃 will update soon 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvbalh

thanku for this lovely ss, starting is too good brilliant what precap! ram on internet search how to get pregnant fast lol.. hilarious



Thank you luvbalh.. 😳 . Will try to make the next part funny 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1...
awww its awesome loved the first part & intro of story too. intesrting this story will start with RaYa's new happiness in getting perants soon... awww awesome wanna read next soon plz post it asap u can... waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: leena04

Part 1...
awww its awesome loved the first part & intro of story too. intesrting this story will start with RaYa's new happiness in getting perants soon... awww awesome wanna read next soon plz post it asap u can... waiting...



Thanks leena... 😛 😛 Try to update next part ASAP... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Here is the next part.. Do read and enjoy ... 😉 😛


Part 2
(They broke the hug)
Priya: Aisi kya kehna hey ki bade Introduction de rehi ho?
Ram: (Smiles)
Priya : oho!!! Bolo na Ram... Kyun . koi suspense hey?
Ram: woh ... I... I...
Priya: I???
Ram: I love you Priya!!! ...: p
Priya: (Mockingly) thank you Mr.Kapoor... And I love you too (Angrily) Khamakha meri time waste kar rehi hoon.. Aap jaavo sone... Mujhe kuch kaam hey!!!
Ram: Tum abh Kahinn nehi jaavoongi, Priya, ruk yehaan...!!!!
Priya: Abh kya hey Ram?? Aapko Jo kehna dha aapne keh diya, aur mujhe jo kehna dha mein bhi keh diya!!! Abh...
(Ram stops her)
Shhh... Meri bhaath abhi khatham nehi huwa hey Priya..!!!
(Ram and Priya looks deep into one another's eyes)
Priya: Kehna Ram.. Zindagi bhar aapko hi sunoongi mein!!!!
Ram: Priyaaa.. (Calls her name so affectionately)
(He made her sit on Bed and Keeps his hands on her waist)
Ram: Priya, jabh hum dono ek huyi dhi tabh mujhe laga ki abh mujhe kuch nehi chaahiye. Meri Zindagi tho abh har maayne mein perfect ho gayi hey, Ek Pyaara sa Parivaar, Pathni, Saas.., Sasur, Saala, Saali, Aur ithni saari khushiyyan... And I felt that I am the luckiest man on this whole world... (Pauses) ... Phir bhi Abh mujhe aisa lag reha hey ki meri Zindagi mein kuch adhoora hey.. Ek khushi jo dekhne aur sun ne se nehi mehsoos karne se hi sukoon milthi hey, Aur Mujhe patha hey, Yeh Khushi ki hakdaar sirf mein nehi, Tum bhi hey. Humara poor Parivaar bhi hey... Aur who khushi sirf thumhi mujhe de sakthi hoon...
Priya: Ram,,, Aap...
Ram: Priya, Thumhe Nehi lagta ki it's time for us to welcome a new member in our life? It's time for us to start a new chapter of our life?
(Places his hands on her belly)
Yehaan..!!! Mein chahthi hoon ki meri aur thumhaari ansh yehaan janam le... Hume saari khushiyaan dhe!!! Maa-papa hone ki ehsaas ko mehsoos karwaaye!!! Humari Parivaar ko kushiyaan dhe...
(Priya sits silent. She didn't know how to react to Ram's Words... And she couldn't name d emotion that running through her mind now... Is it Shock? Excitement? Happiness? Ya kuch aur?)
(She slowly kept her hands on Ram's, which already placed on her Tummy... Ram felt the trembling and coldness of her hand)
Ram entwined her hands with him...
Ram: Batana Priya, Mujhe thumhaari sehmathi chaahiye .. Opinion chaahiye. Aur mein chaahaathi hoon ki Humhaara bacha iss duniya mein thabh aaye jabh hum dono usse welcome karne keliye poori tarah se tayaar ho jaaye, use apnaane keliye ready ho jaaye... Mein tho abhi sse usse mehsoos karne laga hoon. Uskeliye sapna dekhnne laga hoon...
Priya: Ram... Mein... mein...
(Her body started shivering by the happy shock given by Ram's words)
Ram: Kya Priya? Thum, thummm ... U are not ready?? Ok. Then Leave it... I will wait till u gets ready for it!!! Mujhe kuch dino se lag reha dha ki Jo meri man mein hey woh thumhe batana chaahiye... Aur jabh thumhaari Laptop mein aur Mobile mein bacho ki wall paper dekhke tho mujhe laga ki shhaydh tumhaara man bhi ek bache keliye tadap rehi hogi...
Priya: Aisi bhaath nehi hey Raam..., aapko patha hey meri Zindagi ki sabse badi khush kismathi kya hey...??
Ram: Kyaaa?
Priya: Aap .. Aap hey woh!!.. Jo mujhe bhohath ache se samajhthi hey...Chaahe who mein kuch bathake, yaa naa bathake... Mein jaanthi hun khaamoshi mein bhi hum dono ki dil bhaathein kar rehi hogi... Varna ek hi bhaath dono ki mann mein ek hi time pe kaise aa jaathi?
Ram: Priya Thum bhi...??? (Widens his eyes with surprise)
Priya: Haan... Mein bhi... Aapko jo lag reha dha meri bhaare mein who sahi dhi. Ithni din se Patha nehi meri man mein bhi ek ajeeb sa chaahath bana huwaa hey. Jo humare baby keliye... Use janam dene keliye. Hum dono ki rishte ko aur masbhooth banana keliye...
Ram: Priya... I... I... can't believe ... (He smiles widely and kisses her forehead with utmost happiness and love )
Ram: phir bhi Thune abhi tak mujhe kuch batayi kyun nehi?
Priya: Meine socha shhaydh aap ready nehi hoga, humesha chahathi dhi kehne keliye... lekin patha nehi kyun mujhse nehi ho paayi.., Raam. Mein jaanthi hoon Jis din mein yehaan, Bhahu banker aayi hoon, thabse aapki Parivaar ne mujhe bhohath pyaar dhiya hey, bhehadh khushiyaan dhiya hey, mujhe apna beti maana hey sabh log yehaan, aur meri Parivaar, jo aapka humesha apna beta samjhaa hey, lekin koi humse abhi tak kuch nehi maang!!! Abh samay aa gaya hey Ram, ki unhe khushiyaan dene ki, usse se simmedaari nibhaane ki, Shaayadh humara Parivaar bhi yehi chaahthi hongi... Raam, Kya aap issme meri saath doongi..?? (Her eyes filled with tears)
Ram: Haan Priya, mein humesha teri saath hongi... har khadham par, (He kissed her palm)
Ram sits on bed. His eyes widened by joy and he placed kisses on her hands, Priya too placed a kiss on his face, ram felt the hot tear on his face. He looked at Priya, her eyes are already shed two more tears... Ram kisses over it and bit on her chin. She moaned slowly and sweetly.. He made her lie, and came top of her and removed her pallu, started nuzzling either sides of her neck, priya's hands were seductively playing on his hair... Her hold on his hair strengthened when ram's kisses and bitings became wild. He came down and sucked her cleavage and boobs. Cupped her one breast and very slowly and mildly bited her nipple ... she moaned... aaah... !!! This turned on Ram and he strongly pressed her two breasts together. Priya tried to protest and held her hand... But ram caught it and placed either side of her head... When Ram reached on her navel, and played tongue work on it Priya scratched her nails on Ram's hand and tried to get hold of the bed sheet. When Ram felt Priya's suffocation, he freed her hands... Priya breathed heavily and caught on Ram's shoulder, Ram slowly started entangling the pleats of her saree.., suddenly Reality strike Priya. She said No raam!!!! .. Aaj nehi. Infection ho jaayega... Raam suddenly turned off and said: Ok!! Priya, if u feeling discomfort I will stop here. He lied next to her and placed her head on his chest.
Priya: Sorry Raam...
Raam: Kyun? Sorry tho mujhe kehna chaahiye... aur waise bhi Zindagi tho iss ek raath se khatham thoda naa hone waala hey...
Priya lied once more closed to him and look at ram. He caught her upper lip wd his and sucked it sweetly. Priya opened her mouth a little as if she is welcoming his to hers... They kissed each other passionately and sometimes bited. When they felt tired, Ram dragged the duvet on them and started caressing her hair.. Slowly both of them fell on the spell of sleep and started floating over the dreams...
(Its morning 8.45... Ram's phone wrong, he suddenly woke up and checks the time,)
Ram: God its too late, Priya ne mujhe udaya kyun nehi?
(He picked the phone)
Ram: (Replied to the caller) haan, mein check karloonga...
Calller: ok sir,
He comes out of bed, Called Priyaaa!!!! Priyaaa aa!!!!
Priya: (from washroom) Haan Raam .., Mein fresh ho rehi hoon!!! Kuch chaahiye aapko? Meine Bansi kaka se keh diya hey aapko coffee dene keliye
Ram: Kuch nehi Priya, Thum nahaalo...
(Not soon bansi entered with a cup of coffee)
Bansi: Sabh...
Ram: haan yehaan rakh do... (He placed it on the tea poi next to the sofa and left)
Ram, (rubbed his eyes, and came sat on the sofa) (Took the laptop ... And started checking the mails that he forgot to check on previous night)
After finishing checking mails, he closed his lap, and zipped the coffee once... he checked for newspaper, but Gopal didn't keep it yet...)
He again opened his lap and connects the internet, When the Google page opened, he typed: Pregnancy and the Baby',
He opened one sight, there comes d various pictures of the Pregnant ladies with their big baby bumps, and in one side, a picture of a small baby sleeping... He stared at the baby pic and imagined Priya with the baby bump, a smile curled on his lips...
He read the report given in the sight; it was about the diet chart for the pregnant ladies and the various exercises for them to do!!
And the next half of the page is about the Babies... The precautions that should take for Baby's sake... Ram read everything carefully and bookmarked two or more good sites for his later reading)
He again typed on Google Search box: how to get pregnant fast!!!"
He openend another site... 12 tips were wrote on the sight

(He just went through the introduction part: "Trying to get pregnant can be a lot of fun - you've always got an excuse to snuggle up with your partner and have some loving'. But while lots of people think that getting pregnant will just take a matter of days, it can actually take a long time.


If your body has been used to the pill, patches or implants it can take time for it to get back into the swing of things.

It can be frustrating, we know. So we've done a little research to find out how to get pregnant fast. From changing your diet to trying different sex positions, there are numerous ways that you can boost your chances of getting pregnant.

So if you want to know how to get pregnant fast, get reading these top 12 tips!")
He excitedly clicked the link...
  • "Healthy diet
  • Dont stress"
Each topic contains a detailed explanation, before opening it, He thought, it will be best to read it with Priya, He bookmarked the sight.., and closed the laptop..) Priya came out of Washroom...
Ram: kyun aaj badi dher kar dhi? Fresh hone mein..,
Priya: Woh ... aisi dino mein auratho ki apni body cleaning mein syaada vakth tho lagegi.. (She looked at Ram...) Baapre,, aapne abhi thak aise khadi hey, meine socha aap neeche jaakar fresh ho gayi hongi.. time dekho Ram..!!! aapne kya kar reha dha abh thak!!!
Ram smiled wickedly...
Ram: woh... kuch nehi Priya, mein bas mails check kar reha dha!!! Aur paper bhi aaya abhi tak!!!
Priya: Haan .., aaj paper boy nehi aaya, issliye gopla Gaya hey paper lane... aap jaavo, tabh thak ready ho jaayiye... this is shame ram!! Aapne abhi thak Brush bhi nehi kiya... (She laughs)
Ram: Haan, haan, syaada hasna math mein jaathi hoon, (he took the towel and went to wash room)
Priya: goluuu... her lips curled to smile...
Ram called her from washroom..
Priyaaa aa!!! Priya.
Priya: haan... bolnaa ramm... kya chaahiye
Ram: Priya ek bhaath poochoon?
Priya (by combing her hair)
Poocho!!!!
Ram: Priya aaj Teri konsa day chal rehi hey hey Periods ki?
Priya: (suddenly replied) Six... (Paused) Par aap yeh sabh kyun pooch rehi hey abh??
Ram: kuch nehi Priya!!!
Priya Then remembered their last night Convo and Blushed looking at herself on Mirror...

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Edited by parus - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely story and lovely prt...loved the besgaram ram...had always wanted a pure raya luv stry without any haddis and villans...abd here i get one...just loved it...continue soon...thnx fr the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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read the part it was good ram is so understanding but ram is so naughty also he is teasing priya and thanx for the pm waiting for the next part

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