Love- Forever |OneShot| - Page 2 | Writers Corner: Books, Stories & Poems

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice u done Great (:

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Asma

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Posted: 10 years ago

I'm speechless.

Nams this is one Nice Master Work of your..
And Thank You you made it a OS and Not SS..
This piece proves that Love has power beyond words and other worldy things..
Wonderfully Narrated

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Crazy_Arshi

@Crazy_Arshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

Beautifully written
loved itt

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Akanksha

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Posted: 10 years ago

aawww...

its was sooo beautiful nams... ^_^

true love..seriusly...

m spechless...

it really made me emotional... :')

lovedd it..seriusly loved it

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707310

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Posted: 10 years ago

her feelings was beautifully written

loved it <3

the way she decides not die coz she has a reason not too Awesome writing :D

thanks for the PM 🤣

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Nams

@..nams..

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Posted: 10 years ago

a BIG thanks to all those who have commented here! would reply to everyone soon (: thanks again!!

with love

nams! :*

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

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Posted: 10 years ago

Aww dat was surprisingly beautiful

Awesome OS :)

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

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Posted: 10 years ago

awesome one...beautifully penned down...

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-spongy-

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Posted: 10 years ago

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unres

this was a beautiful peace of work..

like truly beautiful

i was so into the OS 😳

loved it so much

it was so well thought and so many emotions 👏

beautifully penned

thanks for the PM

please do write more..

Edited by -spongy- - 10 years ago

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Yogini

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wow nams... that was soo amazing...😃

Thats what is called True love...😊

Beautifully described... 😛

Had she not shown courage on her mehendi day... she would've been guilty throughout her life... 😳

Love means to stay forever together... in every emotion... 😊

Her true love made him so strong... that he lived more than expected... great... 😉

The rush of emotions are superb... each n every word is dripping love... sugary love.. pain of love.. divine love... 👏

He didn't even wanted her to leave the world with him... wanted to give a reason... so beautiful..

Awesome job...👍🏼

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