OS :Waqt K Ajeb Khel update page 2 10.11.13 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice one darling..
Yaar aaj kal sab aise emotional write up kyun likhte hai.. 😭
Very well wriiten as always..loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 1
awesomely scripted yaar just way beyond i had tears in my eyes thinking of all this what if this only happen in show too... i want u to continues this story i really loved it & loved Pari too she is awesome just like her mum... wanted to see Kush & Suhani's pair as Kush is bit Golu just like Ram but he is adorable so plz make it that way...

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Posted: 10 years ago
moina agr next part nhi diya na bahut bahut bahut tang karungi πŸ˜†πŸ˜•
chalo jaldi de do plsss
current track se itna pareshan h sab..uff...thank god bacha liya tumne 
exactly jo m padna chahti thi
plsss gudiya isse continue kro 
uff maanlo ek baar jaan
ye kitni acchi h m bata nhi sakti
uff rula diya na πŸ˜‘
love u πŸ€—
ab wait kr rhi hun...chalo de do jaldi meri miss writer 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update...
awww priya chali gyi
aur ram ne roka bhi nhi😑
thanks for the pmπŸ€—
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update yaarπŸ‘ continue we like it πŸ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago
continue from last scene..


Priya lovingly caressing her kids head... all kids r in deep sleep.. priya close her eyes and leans back.. her back side is rested on headboard...every moment she spent with ram flashes in front of her eyes... she is feeling totally broken and shattered.. she never imagine that in this life time she will be separated from ram because of a another woman... it is so strange once upon a time their relationship was so strong  that  no one able to take them apart... But now their r separated... this thought makes her heart winced in pain.. a long tears runs from corner of her eyes... " kyun ram, kyun aise kya aapne kyun itna taklif diya aapne?? Ek bar srif mujhe kehete aap mai kuch bina pucche apke life se bohat dur chale jati... kaise jioungi main aapke bina.. kaise kategi meri zindegi aapk bina... Aap k bina jinse accha tha ki mai mar jati... kaise bataou mai aap ko kya han aap meri liya...ek bar aap mujhe ruk sakte the ... aap to bol sakte the jo mai sochti hun wo sab galat han.. par aapne kuch nahi bola... kuch bhi nahi... kya ram sach mai mujhe aab aap pyaar nahi karte???  A tears fall into paris face.. pari lazily opens her eyes... she looks at her mom.. her mom is crying silently.. her heart  ache  in pain.. she cant see her mom like this.. she carefully sits beside her mom... she puts jer hand on her mom shoulder and says .
" mom aap ro kyun rahi ho? Plz mom roh mat mai aap ko aise nahi dekh sakti.. plz mom chup ho jao.. dad aur pihu di hamare shate nahi han to kyun hun aa, mai myra kush han aap k shate.. "
priya hugs her daughter tightly and weeps in her shoulder.. pari tightly holding her mom.. she knows her mom is now totally broken... she promise herself that she will brings her mom simile again... pari separates herself from priya.. she cups her mom face... tugging her hair behind her ear... and wipes her tears pari says...
" plz mom aap roh mat.. aap hum logo k strength  han.. agar aap aise toot jayenge to hum logo ko kaun samahlenge...  aur mai janti hun meri mom duniya k sabse strong and best mom han kabhi har nahi manti han... mom jo hamara han wo cheez hamse koi bhi chin nahi payegi.. ek din dad aur pihu di ko realize hoga ki dono kitna galat the... aur aise bhi mom kal se hum sab ek new life start karne wale han.. jaha hum ko hazaro pareshani face karna padega... aur hum ai pareshani tab face kar paungi jab hum aap k smiling face dekhungi... aap k smile hum logo k ladne k takat degi to plz mom no crying any more.."
pari kisses her mom forehead... priya smile in her teary eyes .. she takes her daughter hand in her palm and says..
"meri pari boaht badi aur samjdar ho gaya.. I love u beta..."
priya kisses on her hand..
"I love u too mom" pari reply..

ram is sitting on his favorite chair.. he is holding a wine glass... he is lost in his thought.. his ego and his heart is clashing with each other... his ego is saying that he does not do anything wrong but his heart is saying that he hurts priya badly... mixed emotion is running through his heart.. he does not able to understands what should he do now... pihu is standing near the door.. she  knows that very well how much her dad loves her mom but now she is so selfish that she does not want that her mom come back in this house again.. she goes near ram.. and knees in front of him... ram is looking at his daughter.. " dad mai janti hun aap bohat hurt aur gussa han mom k upar? Aur hona bhi chahiya... juhi ma jo hum logo k liya kiya sayed wo mom kabhi samaj nahi payegi... aap mom ko thoda time de jiya.. jab mom k gussa thanda ho jayegi khud ya aa jayegi.. I m sorry to say dad agar mom nhi aaya to samjhongi mom k life meri aur apki koi importance nahi han aab... dad mai aap ko itna sad aur hurt nahi dek sakti..plz aab sab kuch time k upar chod dijiya.. sab kuch thik ho jayege.. juhi ma han na sab kuch thik kar denge... " pihu stands up and holds his dad hands and pulls him " uthiya dad aise beithe rehene se kuch nahi hoga, aap sho jayia bohat raat ho gaya... Pihu makes his dad lay on the bed..he covers her dad with duvet.. switching off the light pihu leaves the room...

priya lazily opens her eyes.. her life her kids still sleeping on her lap.. pari head is rested above her belly and her arms is encircle on around  her waist... shusheni is lying beside her... priya carefully keeps her kid head on the pillow and gets up from the bed... she opens her suitcase and takes a beautiful golden color cotton saree...  taking her bath she comes out from the washroom.. the clock is showing 6.30 am .. she goes to the kitchen..she makes breakfast for her kids...

standing near the bed priya calls her children " pari myra kush shunai bacche uth jao subha hoga..." no one is willing to opens their eyes.. priya again calls them " uth tum log shuba hogaya college jana han ya nai.. shuhani uth jab aap hospital jana han na tujhe .. kush baccha uth ja aab..." all the kids lazily opens their eyes.. rubbing her eyes myra says itna jaldi subha ho gaya.. looking at her children priya smile and says han subha ho gaya aur tum logo k college jane k time bhi ho gaya aab uth jao.. pari gets up and jumps to her mom lap.. she hugs priya tightly and says "good morning mom, mom u r looking so beautiful" priya smile and says " ho gaya aab uth, uth k fresh ho jaha college k liya late ho rahi han tum dono" pari gets ups and headed towards washroom... myra follows pari and says " pari washroom mai " jada time mat lagan a tu, mujhe washroom use karna han.." pari reply " oye mai pehle uth to mujhe jitna time lagega washroom mai mai lagaoungi... tu khada rahe han ya... " mom dekhna pari mujhe tang kar rahi han" myra shout... " pari kyun tu meri bacche k tang kar rahi han?? Priya shouts.. pari show her tongue to myra and lock the washroom door... sitting on the bed kush is rubbing his eyes... good morning mom he yawn and says ... good morning bacche priya smilingly reply at him... gets down from the bed kush says mom meri chai kaha han, tea pia bina mai fresh nahi hoti hun" " ewww kush tujhe aise gandhi adat kabse lagi han, jab tak fresh na ho jati tab tak koi chai tai nahi milegi" priya reply
"no mom plz mujhe ek cup te do phir fresh ho jaoungi, aur kal se pakka fresh ohk tea pioungi plz aaj de do plz" kush makes a puppy face... priya smile broadly looking at her son and says.. ohk but srif aaj de rahi hun but kal se frsh honese pehle no tea, to hall mai jake beith mai ati hun" kush  moves towards the hall room..
priya goes near shuhani who is still sleeping peacefully.. she caresses her head and softly calls her.. " gudiya subha ho gay auth ja" a cute smile spread in shuhanis face.. she puts her head on priya s lap and says, finally aap meri pass han.. kabse iss din ka wait kiya maine jab aap mujhe itne pyaarse uthenge... I miss u mam.. aap ka datna aap ka hasna, aap ka pyar karna.. aap k support bohat miss kiya mai itne saal... suhanish eyes becomes wet... mam kya mai bhi aap ko ma bola sakti hun??
priya kisses on her forehead and says kyun nahi" tu to meri gudiya han, aaj tu na hoti to pata nahi mai kaha jati.. thinking that priya becomes sad.. shuhani sits beside priya and says " aap k gudiya hun mai job hi hun aaj mai wo srif aap k liya, agar aap nahi hoti aap k gudiya pata nahi kaha hoti.. mai aap ne ma k liya itna to kar sakti hun.. aur sach boluto mai bohat happy hun ki meri ma mei shate rahege aab"
shuhani hugs priya.. priya also hugs her back...
" mom meri chai, kahao aap, mai wait kar raha hun" kush shouts..
"fresh ho ja, hospital bhi to jana han, jaldi dining table pe aa ja.. breakfast ready han" saying this priya walking towards dinning area...

pari and myra kisses both priyas cheek and says
 "mom hum log college ja rahi han... aate aate thoda late ho jayega, aap plz hum logo k liya wait mat karna khana time pe kha lena plz... " pari cutely says to her mom..
" kush hugs priya and says mom aap k detective baccha dono behen ko college chod k phir aapne class mai jayege to aap tension mat karna .. mai hun dono ko acche se dekh k rakhungi...
priya hearts fills with happiness to see her child so caring towards her..
"ma mai bhi chalti hun, agar kuch bhi hun to plz mujhe call kar dena, mai aa jaoungi... Aur plz jada stress mat lena, aap abhi bhi bohat weak han.." shuhani says to priya...
priya smile and says "ohk baba mai yaad rakhungi aab tum log jao bharna late ho jaogi.."
both leaves for their respective places...

evening time priya is sitting  on her bed room.. she is thinking how her life changes in one night... She is thinking  she needs to do a part time job.. she cant burden for shuhashi.. she is already doing so much favor for her...she needs to earn to run this house.. she grabs her mobile from the table and dials her friends number..
priya :" hlw shuba , main priya bol rhai hun.. kaise han tu?
subha: priya tu itne saal baad?? Kaise han aab? Teri accident k bade mai shuna tha... thi thik han na aab??
priya: haan thik hun main, tu bata an tu kaise han??
subha: thik hun yaar... ya bata kyun call kiya? Koi kam tha kya?
priya : hmm han wo mujhe teri ek favor chahiya..
subah: hana bola na..
priya: tu abhi bhi TOFLE class leti han na??
suba; haan yaa abhi bhi leti hun...
priya: mai phirse joint  karna chati hun, tu kya plz adminitration se baat kar k mujhe batayegi koi post abhi available han ki nahi?
suba: tu na thik time pe mujhe call kiya, hamare old kuch colleagues job chod diya han to kuch new teacher le rahi han.. tu ek kam kar kal aa jana office mai sir se baat karwa dungi... aur chinta mat kar tujhe ya job mil jayegi...
priya: thank u soo much yaar... tujhe pata nahi tu kitna bada help kiya han meri... to thik kal milte han bye..



here is the second part... waiting for ur feedback.. dont forget to hit the like button..
lg pakkhi maine aapna promise rakha.. i hope ki tumeh ya part bhi pasand aaye...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Pihu is so selfish she is trying to create mu between ram and priya
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Posted: 10 years ago

very beautiful...
myra pari ki ladai part bht cute h ...i loved it...
ufff is pihu ki toh 😑 iski problem kya h
grrr
next part ...pari jaldi do
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update
CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing i wish ki yahi ho jao balh me lovd itπŸ‘πŸ‘