OS: Jealous? Who? Me? Part 2!

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OS. JEALOUS? WHO? ME? PART II

 

 

 

   Hi all fellow yedis, Kalpana is back with a one shot! This is another one of my future waala one shot! It is based after 1 year of Rantara's marriage. Have fun and like and review!

 

    

    Aaji smiled as Antara entered her room bringing tea with her. She served Aaji her tea and went to arrange Aaji's cupboard. Aaji observed her while she sipped her tea. After arranging the cupboard Antara sat on the bed and started arranging Aaji's medicines kept in a box and took out the ones Aaji had to eat now. As soon as that was done, Daya Mai's voice was heard shouting for her morning tea. Antara scrambled off the bed to make the tea. Aaji shook her head. Kitna kaam karti hai meri Antara! Shaadi ke baad se poore ghar ko sambhaala hai isne! Us more or less ki tarah nahi ki poora time make up hi karte raho! Antara Raghu ki patni baad mein hai aur is ghar ki bahu pehle! Daya ka bhi dheere dheere dil jeet liya! Jo Daya Antara se nafrat karti thi aaj wahi Daya uske haath ka khaana khaaye baghair nahi rehti! Haan! Daya dikhaati nahi hai lekin mereko pata hai ki Antara ne Daya ke dil mein bhi jagah bana li! Lekin in sab mein mere Chintu ka kya? Aaji frowned. Har waqt yeh Antara ghar aur gharwaalon ki pasand napasand mein lagi rehti hai ki use Raghu ke liye samay hi nahi milta! Aur woh yeda Raghu bhi mooh kholke Antara ko bolta nahi hai chal baahar ghoomne chalte hain. Arre! Shaadi hoke sirf ek saal hua hain! Aur yeh dono baahar ghoomne ki bajaay Daya ke aage peeche ghoom rahe hai! Ek yeda hai jo Daya Mai ka har kaam sambhaalta hai aur ek yedi hai jo Daya Mai ka ghar sambhaalti hai! In sab mein dono ke paas ek duje ke liye waqt hi nahi hai! Mereko Antara se is baare mein baat karni padegi!

 

 

     It was Chai time in the evening which meant time for Raghu to come home for Tea! Antara sat in Aaji's room cutting vegetables for the dinner and listening to Aaji chatter about something. Suddenly Aaji stopped her chatter and asked Antara a question, "Tujhe akkal hai kya re?" Antara frowned while still cutting the veggies, "Matlab?" Meanwhile Raghu who was just passing by the room, stopped as he heard Aaji's question. Yeh Aaji Miss Call ko kyun daant rahi hai? He frowned and listened to their conversation. Aaji continued speaking, "Arre! Porgi! Tu poora ghar sambhaalti hai! Sabka khayaal rakhti hai par mere Chintu ke baare mein socha hai?" Antara smiled shyly, "Sochti hun na! Har waqt sochti hun!" Raghu grinned at her response. Aaji slapped her forehead, "Ae Yedi! Aise nahi re! Mera matlab hai ki yeh sab zimmedaariyaan toh zindagi bhar rahengi! Par yeh waqt waapis kabhi nahi aayega! Raghu ke saath ghoom fir, baahar dekh, picture ke liye jaa, kitna kuch hai karne ko! Aur tu hai ki ghar par baithi hai!" Antara shook her head, "Par mujhe ghar ke kaam karne mein mazaa aata hai Aaji!" Aaji rolled her eyes, "Theek hai! Toh fir tu yehi sab kaam karti baith! Aur Raghu kisi aur ladki ke peeche lag jaayega! Aisi ladki jo usko time de! Teri tarah nai jo ghar ke andar padi rahe! Phir nai aana mere paas rote hue!" Antara rolled her eyes. Yeh Aaji bhi na! Kitni filmi hai! Meanwhile, Raghu shook his head. Yeh Aaji soch bhi kaise sakti hai ki main kisi aur ke baare mein sochunga! Antara replied, "Aaji! Mujhe apne pyaar aur Raghu par poora bharosa hai! Woh kisi aur ke baare mein kabhi nahi sochega! Mujhe bhagwaan ki baaton par shaq ho sakta hai par Raghu ke pyaar par nahi!" Raghu grinned. Dekha Aaji! Meri Miss Call kabhi bhi mere par shaq nahi kar sakti! Dekha humaari pyaar ki taaqat ko? Ae Miss Call! I Love you Re! Then he heard something which shocked him. Antara winked at Aaji and mumbled, "Waise bhi Raghu par shaq karne ka sawaal hi nahi aata!" Aaji frowned and Antara giggled, "Kyunki poori duniya mein sirf main hi usse pyaar kar sakti hun! Kitna attitude dikhaata hai, sabko daraata hai, Romance ka R bhi nahi maaloom, ise kaun ladki pyaar karegi?" She started laughing wile Aaji shook her head. Raghu narrowed his eyes. Kya boli tu Miss Call? Mujhse pyaar karega kaun? Tereko ab sabak sikhaana padhega! He nodded and walked away.

 

 

    Raghu reached his room and made a call, "Hello Ruksana!" After speaking for a while, Raghu pocketed the phone and smirked. Miss Call! Aaj tera yeh Raghu tujhe mazaa chakhaayega!

 

 

    It was late night when Antara entered the house. She had gone in the evening to visit her mother and brother. As she walked towards her and Raghu's room, she heard giggling coming from the terrace. She frowned; Ab, is waqt, kaun hai?

 

 

  Raghu, standing on the terrace, noticed Antara entering the house and signaled to Rukku who started laughing and giggling.

 

 

   Antara marched upstairs to the terrace and as she neared the area where Raghu used to stay before their marriage she saw Raghu and Rukku laughing over something. Antara smiled and walked closer only to stop short as Rukku while laughing leaned over Raghu and almost hugged him. Antara narrowed her eyes. Yeh chal kya raha hai yahaan? She hid behind the nearby pillar and stared at the laughing duo.

 

 

   Raghu slyly looked over at where Antara was standing and smirked. He winked at Rukku and Rukku started speaking. "Raghu! Tu kitna mazaakiya hai yaar! Kaash main tujhse shaadi kar paati! Tere jaisa banda duniya mein milna bahut mushkil hai re!" "Achcha!", Raghu replied but glanced at Antara sideways. Antara frowned at Rukku's words. Rukku continued speaking, "Haan re! Tu kitna sweet hai! Handsome hai! Aur kitna samajhdaar bhi hai! Tu mere se shaadi kyun nahi kiya re?" Raghu shook his head, "Arre! Rukku! Kya karein? Mereko Miss Call se pyaar ho gaya tha re! Varna main tereseich shaadi karta!" Antara fumed in anger when Aaji's words said in the evening flashed in her head. Aaji sahi kehti hai! Mujhe Raghu ko time dena chaahiye warna yeh Rukku jaisi ladkiyaan mere Raghu ko mujhse door kar dengi! She made a crying face but then nodded in determination. Main Raghu ko door jaane nahi doongi! Iss Rukku ki toh!

 

 

    Raghu and Rukku were still talking when Antara came and pulled Rukku away from Raghu. "Mere Raghu se door raho!", Antara spat out. Rukku and Raghu glanced at each other and burst out laughing. Antara looked at them in confusion. Raghu quieted down and mumbled, "Jalan hui?" Antara glared at him, "Haan! Hui! Par mujhe yeh bataao ki tum iske saath flirt kyun kar rahe the?" Raghu rolled his eyes while Rukku sneaked away, "Main tereko bata raha tha ki mere pe bhi ladkiyaan mar sakti hai! Kya keh rahi thi tu Aaji se? Haan! Raghu se kaun pyaar kar sakta hai nai?" Antara blushed and looked away. Raghu folded his arms and stared at her sternly. Antara pouted and held her ears in her hands, "Sorry!" she gave him a miserable expression, "Aage se aisa nahi bolungi! Lekin tumne bhi toh aaj jyaada hi kar diya!" Raghu smiled at her, "Sahi boli tu! Chal teri bhi nai! Aur meri bhi nai! Dono ne galti ki aur dono ne maafi maangi!" Antara smiled at him and hugged him. Raghu hugged back. After a while they moved away and Antara tried to walk away when Raghu caught her hand, "Ae Miss Call! Ek kiss toh deti ja!" Antara turned, blushed, pulled her hand off and ran away while Raghu was left behind smirking.

 

  

 

THE END

 

Kaisa laga? I know that it is not as awesome as my other works but the current track is not inspiring me to write better. But do leave a review!

 

And this is my last one shot till November. I have got exams on my head. So will write if something inspires me or else it will be a not show till November end!

But my parodies will continue!

 

Take care and enjoy the weekend!

Kalpana

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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOW yaar LOVED IT!!!! and rukku and raghu played prank?? 
Anyways GOOD LUCK for your exams! Do Well!  
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lovely...very nice


merai b exams hain didu :p
exams k bad ap likhna aur mai padthi rahungi apki awesome writing :D
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Thanks!
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Originally posted by: nafees5

lovely...very nice


merai b exams hain didu :p
exams k bad ap likhna aur mai padthi rahungi apki awesome writing :D

Ok! Chalega!😃
Thanks for the review!
And best of luck for your exams!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice os yaar
loved it
it was good seeing antara becoming jealous and possessive of raghu
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nice os and best of luck for exam
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Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer


Ok! Chalega!😃
Thanks for the review!
And best of luck for your exams!

kya chalega ?
best of luck to u too..:)
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Originally posted by: srujanahpvr

nice os yaar

loved it
it was good seeing antara becoming jealous and possessive of raghu

Thank you!
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Originally posted by: richurachna

nice os and best of luck for exam

Thank you!