OS: Kabhi Alvida Naa Kehna(ch3,pg3)completed

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Gunshots were heard.Firing was taking place in the area.Suddenly,a person was at the gunpoint of Sikander.

Sikander,the brutus criminal,who killed the wife of ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte infront of him.

It was Rathod who was at the gunpoint of Sikander.A girl saw it from a distance.She saw every single happening.She was scared,very much scared.

Sikander's men were all shot dead.Their dead bodies' were being taken by the commandos',who were there as backups.Even the DIG was there,who is supporting Arjun,who is here to kill Sikander with his hands,because,Sikander killed his wife,Roshni,and,Rathod,who is here to help his best friend who was the husband of his best friend,Roshni.

''Wah re,ACP... Tune khud hi apne maut ko bulaya hai...Pehle,main tujhe marunga,phir iss Arjun ko... Sabki zindagi chheen lunga main... Ek ek karke sabki laashe iss zameen mein garh dunga,'' Sikander said to Rathod.

But,Rathod didnt move.He was determined that he and Arjun will kill Sikander,today.

''Agar himmat hai,toh,trigger daba.Dekhte hai,aaj kiski jeet hoti hai,teri ya meri aur Arjun ki.. Chala goli.. Chala... '' Rathod yelled at Sikander,forcing him to pull the trigger.

''Nahi Rathod... Hat jao samne se.Aaj iski maut mere haatho likkhi hai.Nahi chorunga iss haevaan ko,jisne meri Roshni ko chheen li..Jisne teri dost ko chheen li... Jisne humdono ki dosti ko khatam kardi... Hat jao,Rathod wahaan se...'' Arjun screamed at Rathod,ordering him to move.

Before Rathod could move,Sikander pulled the trigger and fired two bullets,one at a time.It was fired towards Rathod's direction.

''Bhaisaaa...'' a girl shouted and came infront of the bullets,which was fired for Rathod.She pushed Rathod down and the bullets pierced through her skin and entered her petite body.

Everybody froze...

The surroundings became silent.

Before,Sikander could fire another bullet,Arjun started firing at him,finishing all the bullets of his gun.Arjun fired the last bullet in Sikander's heart.That confirmed Sikander's death.

Sikander is now no more.

Arjun slumped down and let out a
heart-searing cry,

''Roshni...''

The commandos' took away Sikander's dead body.Raghu sir came forward to Arjun and hugged him tight.The DIG,finally,sighed in relief,as,Arjun completed his revenge.


On the other side,the girl who took the two bullets,was fighting for some air...Everything was becoming blurry for her.Her strength was soo going to give up.

Rathod immediately went upto that girl and placed her head on his lap.

It was none other than Zebbie Mehra,an ex-ETF officer,who was thrown out of ETF,because,she was suspected to have connections with Sikander.

Zebbie's clothes were stained with blood.Blood was oozing out from the wound.Shree immediately called the paramdeics and ambulance for help.Rathod kept his hand on the wounded spot to stop the flow of blood.

''bh..bh...ai...saa.. M...m..main... gg...gg..unehgaar nn..a..hi hu... Iss...ss...mein ssaar...rrii... dd...eettasiilllsss hai...,'' said a seriously injured Zebbie,in a broken voice.Tears came out from her eyes...

Suddenly,she closed her eyes.Her hand fell from the other side.

The ambulance came and soon she was taken to LILAVATI hospital.Others also came,including Arjun,as they were also hurt in this historic fight.

As per DIG's order,the roads were cleared,as two ambulances' were going.It was an emergency.Police jeeps were in the front of the ambulances',where as two police jeeps were behind the ambulances' as well.The ETF SUVs' were in the front,signalling an Emergency.

The hospital staffs were informed about this.

In the ambulance,where,Zebbie was,Rathod was continuously trying to wake Zebbie up,by patting her cheeks,and,the doctors's were administering the medicines.

Soon,the ambulances' arrived in the hospital.The stretchers' were brought out and were taken to the Operation Theatre,immediately.

Both the operations' started.Arjun's parents' came there.They were crying a lot.Media also has gathered outside the Hospital.Other police officers and Commandos' were told to control the media.

After an hour,the Doctor came out and briefed about Arjun's condition to everyone.

''Dekhiye,Arjun ko kuch serious nahi hua hai.Sirf,maathe pe halki si injury hai aur pure sharir mein bruises aur cuts ke nishaan hai.Right hand mein zakham bohut gehra hai.He is out of danger now.Abhi hum usse ICU mein shift kardenge,'' Doctor said.

All heaved a sigh of relief.

Suddenly,another doctor came outside from the OT,in a panicky situation.

''Doctor... Ms.Mehra ki halat bohut bigarti hi jarahi hai.Pulse kam hota jaraha hai.She is sinking.Blood ke bahav rukhne ka naam hi nahi lerahi hai.Jaldi aiye,Doctor..''

''Chalo jaldi.Sister,prepare for the electric shock,right away,'' Doctor ordered the Nurse.

Rathod went numb after hearing this.He grabbed the doctor's collar and threatened him,

''Zebbie ko kuch bhi nahi hona chaiye.Agar usse ek tinke ka bhi kharoch aya,toh,tumhara murder kardunga...''Edited by zebbie0504 - 10 years ago

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JeeLeZaraa thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wonderful!
Was really emotional but I really liked it
Update soon
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Continuation from last part.

''Zebbie ko kuch bhi nahi hona chaiye.Agar usse ek tinke ka bhi kharoch aya,toh,tumhara murder kardunga.Pure hospital ko jalake rakh mein mila dunga...''

the Doc was really scared by Rathod's anger.

Chotu and Shree,with lots of difficulty,freed Rathod's hands from the Doctor's neck.

DIG ordered the Doctor to go inside.

''Usse kuch nahi hona chaiye...Kuch bhi nahi nahi...,'' Rathod mumbled silently and broke down.He slumped down on the floor and started to cry loudly.Everybody could sense his pain.First,he lost his best friend,Roshni.He couldnt save her.
But,now,he was going to lose his baby sister,Zebbie... He will save her,at any cost.

Ayesha went upto Rathod and hugged him tightly,to assure him that nothing will happen to Zebbie.

Everybody started praying for Arjun and Zebbie's recovery.

After two hours,the Doctors' came out,opening their masks.

Rathod went upto them asked about her.Everybody were eqully curious to know about Zebbie's health.

''Dekhiye,Ms.Mehra ki halat is very critical.Bachne ki ummeed bohut hi kam hai.Dono goliyaan dil ko chhuke guzri hai,jismein se ek goli unke dil ko thori si cheer chuki hai,jiske karan bohut hi zyada internal bleeding hui hai.Abhi hum unhe artificial life support mein rakkha hai,baki sab Uparwale ke haath mein.Aap log Bhagwan se Prarthna karein.Ab dawaaise zyada unhe aapsab ki duaon ki sakht zarurat hai,'' Doc said and went away.

Rathod slumped down again,in shock.He was in terrible shock.Everybody was really worried for Zebbie,Rathod and Arjun.

''Ab samajh aya,ki,Zebbie hum sabko kyun nahi batana chahti thi,ki,she is Rathod sir's sister.Sir ko bachane keliye,usne hi goli apne seene pe leli.Aur,humne kya kia? Uspe humsab ne inzaam lagaya ki woh Sikander ki help kar rahi thi.Balki woh toh Sikander ki gang join isiliye karhi thi,taaki humein pata chalsake ki kab woh Sikander Arjun sir aur Rathod sir pe hamla karega...Kitni selfless hai yeh larki... Apni jaan ko baazi pe lagake,Rathod sir ki jaan bachayi..Bhagwan,please hum sabko maaf kardo.Hum sabse jo galti hui hai,Zebbie ko vishwas naa karke,uss galti ki sazaa Zebbie ko mat do.Usse jaldi se thik kardo,please Bhagwan...'' Shree said to Chotu and both of them prayed for Zebbie.

Not only both of them,even the hospital staff joined them to pray for Zebbie's recovery.

Precap: Zebbie,alive or dead?
Anika_PreRish thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part one updated.
Comment karo,lambi wali.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superbbb tedddyyy!!!

u cant die!!! remember that thing!!!
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wow
very nice update
finally Sikky is dead
Zebbie ko kuch nai hona chahiye
very nice writing
superb
continue soon ðŸ˜Š
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awesome os
aww such a emotional story
nice title
lovely
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such an emotional update di..
apne toh rula diya di..
apko kuch nahi hona chahiye,,
loved the update so so much..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Super zaibee ðŸ˜Š.
tumne emotional kar diya dear 
Continue soon n plz it is a request koi tragic end mat karna 
Beautifully written n emotional os 
Continue soon ðŸ˜Š

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itna rula dia..
aur bolti hai lambi commen karo...
jaoo nai karti~!!😭😭😭
pehle ro lene do..!!😭😭
beautiful os!!
m just lovin it..update soon!