OS-Tujhe Jeena Hai Ab Mere Bina... NOTE on page 18

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Posted: 2013-10-02T14:30:45Z
Hi guy I m Leena I m sure you all must be remember me with my first FF on this forum its "Aur Pyar Ho Gaya..." I know I yet didn't completed my that FF nor I continued it after left it in incomplete six months ago but trust me I really wanted to continue it but coulden't as I don't want any mistake in that thread as its very close to my heart & I don't want any kind of mistake in that so will update once I will got net connection in my In law's place so tab tak isie se kam chala lo...

Yaar I m really pissed of after last episode that Ram agreed to marry Juhi & more on that Pihu's "move on dad" drama made me mad I wish Pihu never was grown up I so miss our Golu & Gudiya's Rockstar Princess Goli when she was just 5 years old (I m missing Amurita so badly I wish she was always there in show as Pihu no one can be batter portray as Pihu the her... she was carbon copy of our RaYa & our Golu's mini me...) but life sometime gives us gud thing & bad things both so keeping happy gud things in mind starting this new SS... It will be of short update + short story b'coz I m gonna update via cellphone so some mistake will be also there hope u all will enjoy it...
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SS-Tujhe Jeena Hai Ab Mere Bina...
~ Intro ~
Its starts with same plot where Rajeev tries to get hold on Naina but Ram rescues her by agreeing to Pihu that he is soon gonna marry Juhi. In the reality he said it according to his plan where he wants some more time to exposes Rajeev also want to keep Naina in safe from Rajeev also for Pihu's marriage to be happen successfully... The time passes out & Ram finds out that Mandeep's parents r not gud people they r greedy for money even Mandeep as like them so Ram broke the marriage but here nothing improvement came in Priya's health even new nurse came to take care of Priya name as Shuhani... who is taking really gud care of Priya just like real daughter of here Pari & Kush misses Priya a lot. There Ram got busy to find proof against Rajeev as court's hearing date of Naina's custody case is coming near. Here still Ram needs time to get more proof against Rajeev as until the hearing date in court he got nothing against Rajeev... so by declaring to world that he is engage to Juhi & soon goona be marry to her he take the another date for hearing so he can get more time find the truth of Rajeev as he was not at all going to marry Juhi he was just acting in front of all so his plan won't get spoil...



So guys what u think should I continue this SS... as soon Priya will be waking up in next 2 part... & I assures u guys its completely RaYa Saga... so what u want me to do next as this story's future is depends on ur comments & also tell me As I have 2 story in my mind for this SS so pls help me by answerving that "do u all will be ok it Ram marry to Juhi for the sake of Naina's custody (I also hated this plot but just think to give second thought how as after this how will story get unfold) & then Priya weak up???? Do let me know with ur comments over this or I will continue this SS with other story in my mind...
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~ Link of updates ~


Promo 1 - Page 8
Part 1 - Priya is the only my wife... Page 12
NOTE - Page 18
Edited by leena04 - 2013-10-20T20:09:04Z
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Posted: 2013-10-02T19:09:03Z
wooow...welcome back dear...very nice start...kuchh bhikarna par juhi ko beech me mat aane dena...aur pihu ko ram se ek thappad jarur lagwana...baap ki badi chinta h...thodi ma ki bhi kar li hoti ye hal na hota...hamara bhi serial ka bhi aur priya ka bhi...all messes r bcz of idiot peehu...hattt...
congratulations & all  the best for new story...
love
veena
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Posted: 2013-10-02T20:49:08Z
interesting continue soon with the first part waiting for it
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Posted: 2013-10-02T21:54:10Z
If full on raya why not.
Continue.Edited by bpatil3 - 2013-10-02T21:53:38Z
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Posted: 2013-10-02T22:02:01Z
aww
leena dear
awesome start dear
too gud
cont soon
and plz pm me

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Posted: 2013-10-03T00:15:30Z
please continue it Smile
but no Ram-Juhi marriage Ouch
already show mai yehi dikha rahe hai LOL,
 koi aur tareeke se adoption case solve kariye ,pls  Smile
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Posted: 2013-10-03T01:43:07Z
Hii leena..welcome back..
Looks interesting..but plz no Ram nd Juhi's marriage..Adoption case kisi or tarah se solve karo..like Rajiv is not good toh automatically court will not give Naina's custody to him..something like this but no marriage plz.. LOL
Wow!! Full of RaYa Saga..do cont it soon..
Nd thank u so much for pm.. SmileEdited by vironikajain - 2013-10-03T01:45:25Z
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Posted: 2013-10-03T02:24:59Z
Of course u have to continue!!
N welcome back!! M not watching serial now but this seems better then serial!!
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