VIRMAN: KISMAT KA KHEL (completed)

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Posted: 10 years ago
 hy guys i have read lot of story on virman and liked them so thought of writing a new story
it is my first story so please forgive me if there is any mistake also if you do not like  just stop reading it
INTRODUCTION"
the characters are same as in the show but the story is a little bit different . in my story virman are seperated nd living seperately . virika have a daughter mansi and they are living happily .

                                            

 i will send pm to all who are interested so just comment and like
               πŸ‘INDEXπŸ‘
PART 1:page 2
PART 2:page 3
PART 3;page 6
PART 4:page 8
PART 5:page 10
 PART 6:page 12                 
PART 7: page 14
PART 8: page 18
PART 9: page 20
PART 10: page 22
PART 11: page 26
PART 12: page 28
PART 13: page 33
PART 14: page 36
PART 15: page 39
PART 16: page 41
PART 17: page 44
PART 18: page 46
PART 19: page 48
EPILOGUE :page 51
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Posted: 10 years ago
seems interesting
plz update soon
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lets c wht happens...do pm.me.whnever u update

interesting storyline it is
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it's interesting...
waiting for ur update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice concept
do cont soon
nd plzzz pm me also πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
interesting
continue soon
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thank you guys i will update soon 
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PART 1:
                          VADHERA HOUSE
a new morning in the vadhera house a little voice calling '"chachu" is spreading in the whole house cute little princess entes virats room and she just splash a bucket full of water on virat 
virat- what is this! mansi ye aapne kya kiya?
mansi- kya chachu mein tabse aapko utha rhi thi par aap uth nhi rhe the
virat- but aapne mere upar pani kyon dala?
mansi- aap ki help karne ke liye
suddenly then jeevika enters virats room
jeevika-mansi aap yaha kya kar rhe ho
mansi- maa mein na yha chachu to uthne ke liye aayi thi aaj  unka music concert hein na
jeevika- oh! mein to bhul hi gyi thi.soory virat 
virat- bhabhi agar aap nhi bhi aati to yeh hai na meri dushman mujhe pareshaan karne ke liye
mansi- chachu do not call me your dushman
virat- aap meri dushman hi ho mansi 
mansi- that is not fair chachu ek to mene aapki help ki aur mujh par hi gussa ho rhe ho
virat- help kon si
mansi- uf chachu aaj aapka concert hai na to mene aapki help ki 
jeevika- she is right virat
virat- bhabhi aaj agar mera concert nhi bhi hota to bhi na yeh mujhe aise hi pareshaan karti.
mansi- haa haa mein to sirf yahi karti hu na 
they both start fighting then jevika
jeevika(laughs)-kya mansi aap bhi na chachu ko pareshaan karti ho
then jeevika leaves. 
mansi-bahut ho gya chachu now just come fast
virat- order de rhi ho  ya bata rhi ho
mansi-order de rhi hu.
then suddenly jeevika call mansi and she went outside.
virat just thinking of manvi and said
virat- mavi dekha bilkul tumahari hi tahar hai he tumhari chutki 
suddenly tears come out from his eyes
virat- kyon chali gyi manvi tum mujhe chod kar kar .😭 
                      IN THE BREAKFAST TABLE
dadaji- virat aaj bhi late ho gya hai pta nhi kya hoga iska
sb-babuji isliye to mein sabse kah rhi hu ki virat ki shadi kara do .
viren- kya badi maa aap bhir wahi baat bol rhe ho virat bol chuka hai na ki use shadi nhi karni hai.
suddenly virat came 
all starts for breakfast 
virat ki nazar manvi ki chair par gyi usko khali dekh kar virat ko wo sare moments yad aane lage 
virat(in mind)- manvi tumahari chair aaj bhi khali padi hai taki hum tumhe yaad kar sake.
after breakfast all went to their room
IN VIRIKA'S ROOM
jeevika is looking at manvi's picture and crying suddenly viren came 
viren- jeevika mere coat me button nhi hai
jeevika did not respond.
viren-jeevika tum kya kar rhi ho (goes near her) 
viren- jeevika mere coat me button nhi hai
then he saw jeevika crying
viren-jeevika tum ro kyun rhi ho
jeevika -kuch nhi virenji mannu ki yad aa gyi 
viren- jeevika mein janta hu.
jeevika -virenji manvi aur virat ne kitna bada sacrifice kiya na humhare liye
viren- haa jeevika mein un dono ka yeh sacrifice kabhi nhi bhul sakta
jeevika- viren ji kal rakshabandhan hai mujhe mannu ki bahut yad rhi hai
suddenly mansi came and her mamma crying
mansi- papa mamma ko kya rone ki bimari hai
viren- aise nhi bolte beta
mansi-nhi mein jab bhi dekti hu wo sirf roti rhti hai
jeevika- haa sirf mujhe hi rona aata hai aapo nhi aata hai na
mansi- haa
viren- bas karo mansi aap jayo school ke liye ready hona hai
it has been 6 years since manvi left vadhera house and 6 years since mansi birth. gahr mein sab log happy the sirf virat ko chod kar jo aaj bhi manvi ko miss karta hai
manvi ki absence mansi ne puri kar di woh apne chachu ki bahut care krti hai.
PRECAP- introduction of manvi and past relevation
i now guys its too  boring but please forgive me if you find  any mistake or do not like it 
Edited by MeenalKhare99 - 10 years ago
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i will update my next part soon but please those who want pm just sent  me a buddy request Edited by MeenalKhare99 - 10 years ago
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nice update since six year
she left him and family
why what was the reasons
update soon