RaYa - OS - it happened.......by chance, updated on pg 10 - Page 13

Originally posted by: Birdy91

Part-2
hehehe sorry on suhagraat... kitna wait kraa diya bichaare golu ko... vaise lovellyyy OS didi...👏

Originally posted by: leena04

Part 1
what ever Ram did was wrong but his haert is still pure he didn't any kind of harm to Priya so Ok with it... this Sid will never gonna change jab dekho har ladki ka dil toshta hi rehta hai so sad... but loved this concept & set of the story... ek kahani jo shuru hui apharan se ab iska anth kaha hota hai dekhte hain... but honestly was really nicely wriiten up u try to cover up lots of part of story let's read next & will comment later...

Originally posted by: leena04

Part 2

always loved ur Story Ujjaini really this one too... poor Ram have to wait for 2 years too get his love & say sorry to her... Priya ne bhi aacha khasa badla liya Do saaal tak ignore kiya Golu ko poor Golu kitna sehna pada 10 dino ki wajhase... but loved this story expecting more RaYa moments but sayad hi yeh aapki pehli story hogi were RaYa moments was less... but its ok story was best... loved siblings bond truly amezing i loved the whole part was feb do write more waiting...

Originally posted by: Dsudipa

sry 4 late reply, read both parts in one go, wonderful OS, finally Raya 1 ho gaye, perfect ending, thx 4 PM

Originally posted by: gupta90

very nice story  :) :)