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Posted: 11 years ago

#241

I was trying to avoid this one because it's the last update. And it's so sad to say Goodbye to this story once again :'( Unbelievable!

Anyway, I can read this again and again and again. This chapter is sheer perfection. The way Arnav confirms about Khushi's health before rejoicing the birth of his son just made me smile. It reminds me of the time when Arnav pretended to not care about her but in his heart he was always worried about her, hamesha.

And the Raizadas and Guptas..sigh. They are a family to die for. So much understanding, so much support, so much happiness. It's like they are bound to each other for eternity. You write everybody's characters and emotions so perfectly that if someone is left out, by chance, I feel like something is incomplete. So hats off to you.

Ayaan Arnav Singh Raizada Do you know how much I love you? Come on baby, Finally mein bhi mere ho jao na, please? *blushes*

Did I mention I loved Armaan? And insecure Arnav is so funny. Kya bole hum Khushi ko, Arnavji? Sanka devi?😆

Arnav doesn't know about Armaan's chipku-pan. He's not gonna leave your son alone, he'll be his favorite uncle. Watch out Arnav 😈

I love this SS. Bas keh diya!

P.S.- There is more, right? I remember an epilogue. You'll be posting that too?

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Ms Bennet

@purple_rules

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#242

*khushi ke aansoon* It is a boy!! OMG, I knw u mite think I am kidding but I had tears in my eyes the entire time I read this update! IPKKND and Arhi are very dear to my heart, and I had this wish since Arhi got married that they wud hv a child together, a biological one, not the adoption crap! I knw I may sound cruel and selfish but I hated the Aarav track! I wanted to see Arnav get all mad, overprotective and possessive abt a pregnant Khushi! Gng all crazy during the delivery time and actually saying "Aww" when he first sees his child! Thank u so much for giving me this joy and fulfilling my wish through this story of yours! I am a little sad that this SS is over but I knw u r gna be posting more awesome stuff! Looking forward to reading more!

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Aparamegha

@Aparamegha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#243

Welcome aboard Ayan Arnav Singh Raizada..what a lovely lovely chapter..

Could feel the happiness...I am sure all the IPK lovers would have loved to see a preg track but never mind this SS did fulfill our wishes...

Plzzz post the epilogue...

Edited by Aparamegha - 11 years ago

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#244

Already waiting for the epilogue.

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#245

I loved reading this story. Its so good to see the family get complete. Nice fiction.

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#246

So it is a boy... 😃 Arnav and his feelings seeing their baby.. Too emotional... Ayaan... Haiii... ❤️ Loved this series... Hope to see more from u...

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farheen75

@farheen75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#247

It was such a sweet update that I could almost taste the sweetness in my mouth... The most important moment of ones life is to hold their baby and being a mother myself I can identify with all the feelings that Arnav and Khushi felt.

Can't wait for the epilogue and thanx a lot for the pm.

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shr1234

@shr1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#248

Aww! So sweet! I have always loved how you create this wonderful Raizada family. It was nice to read how Ayaan Arnav Singh Raizada made his grand entry. Any story you repost will be fine but I'm always waiting for something fresh ;)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: IronButterfly
As far as i can remember, i have always hated how people react to the news of a new baby.
Everyone rushes to see it or ask about it but the mother who almost gives up her life in order to bring the baby to this world, is often forgotten.
The baby always gets the priority.
It was beautiful to see how Arnav waited for a reassurance. His priority will always be Khushi.

Amazing how the baby has changed him perspective towards life. He's a new man all together. This change is for the good.

His reaction to the baby is so tender and raw. This is love at first sight happening.

Loved how the entire family came together.

I actually hadnt thought about that - the baby taking precedence over the mother bit - but for me it was just that while writing for Arnav, its just logical and goes with the flow that Khushi will take precedence always...I mean I try writing for a character from his/her perspective and here it just came with the flow...a good observation though :)

Thank You so much for your comment! :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: _disha_
Awww .. so Ayaan Arnav Singh Raizada has finally graced us with his presence !❤️

Such a beautiful SS ..and especially this last chapter... was so well written.
I loved it how you made it a point to speak a little of almost each family member and their reactions to Chottay's very own chotte's arrival.

As per your query about future stories... i would love to read an SS ... ( also an update of TTLG if possible would be great ) !

Ps ; An epilogue of Unbelievable would be lovely to read.

Thank You so much! :)

Glad you liked it! I try hard to reach out to every character and present his/her say and I am glad you like it :)

About TTLG...I am trying to write it but as I already mentioned in the R&T thread, I am having difficulties writing these days but I hope to get back in the groove soon. Thanks for waiting :)

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