Awesome ...π it's too Good π the precap looks exciting n can't wait for the next update π
thank u..π
Awesome ...π it's too Good π the precap looks exciting n can't wait for the next update π
Originally posted by: lwrimaforever
lovely update di π thanks for pm π please update the next part very soon & pm me π³
awesome update titali...
omg madhu getting possesive ha...and wht about RK he too started to like her...nw waiting for next meeting...
Originally posted by: aakriti18
Awesome titli di !!
as i had told u b4...i luv it :Dso both r attracted to each other ;) nice :Dluvd wht rishab said in the end...very nicely written..interesting precap ;)plz update soon :)
Originally posted by: bahnni.mj
loving the updates titli...keep up the good workππΌ
Phew! read the missed parts in one go!π & also gave you a looong review π€£ as I promised you yesterday! This is just wonderful! πSomething really worth reading! From next update onwards, I'm gonna be the first to comment! πComing to the recent chapter, I knew it Madhu is falling for him, unknowingly.π The way she behaved with that kinky girl in the club. R.K. was just doing his job! But Madhu..π she is keen to know more about him! Can't wait to read the next!πFirst chapter , Rishabh got in to his profession unwillingly but he continued it making more money. Felt bad about him as he had to do kinda ''service'' when he was in is teens.π Second chapter it was hilarious when Madhu was trying to call him!π Finally they had their phone conversation! The photo was damn hot! βΊοΈI'm not sure about Madhu, but I was staring at the screen for a long time! Their meeting was awesome! I literally jumped for the next chapter after I read the pre cap! ππI know it's for fake, but they are hugging somehow! In the third chapter! wow! they are complementing each other about their dresses. πAahan! Madhu named him as Vivian Dsena! πPerfect! Loved that part where RK says I am your ''Y''.π€£ Madhu was mesmerized with his dimplewala smile! βΊοΈOMG I can imagine the cute dimples of Vivian! Both were attracted to each other! Now that's a good sign.π You made Jane appear here?? π²I know you are a twilight freak!π€£ & she was eyeing RK. Madhu was kinda insecure about them!π Insecure about the man she hired! Ahaan Madhu!! πBut she is totally unaware of her budding love towards him. πThat's why even I was blushed reading about their hug, even it was fake. πThe prologue was awesome! πInteresting from the very first line. Madhu's characteristics, totally different from the real show. πI like that. Another one impressed me that you added catchy titles for the each & every chapter. π Keep doing it! ππΌFirst of all I would like to apologize for reading this story too late. You started this when I was on my vacations & after I came back I was busy with our story! I told you nah that I want to read this in a relaxed mind, not in a hurry.π So I found some quality time to read this amazing story.πComing to the story, this is one of the most interesting FFs I've ever read here. πThis one is completely different from the real show. πThat's why I like it so much!π³ & good you didn't make Madhu a crying bucket! πI've heard about gigolos before, but first time reading a story related to a gigolo. π³
awsum update...Madhu reacted as if he is her real bfπ...good sign thoughπ...thnks for the pm nd continue soon...
So both r feelin something towards eachother...dats nice...awwsome titli...
Originally posted by: Rishabala_luv
fantastic!!
midblowing!!superb!!mindblowing!!perfect!!jaw dropping updt bella!!loved it alot!!!! can u belive it??i'm bewildered reading ur updt!!mainly that precap takes my breath away!!uff!!! u killed me bella!! ur edward is no more!rishab!!! my god!! madhu!! oh my god!!titli!! oh my oh my god!!bas!! jaldi updt karo!!love strted!!!! uhhooo!! love is in the air!!!
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