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Hey everyone I just watched the show on this weekend and couldn't get it of my mind. Here's a small piece. Hope you guys like it.Please do tellShould I post the second part.
Please leave your comments. It's my first attempt
He was drunk. He told machmach he couldn't handle it yet machmach was adamant. Little did Raghu know his Ajji was behind all this.
After two drinks he was full on drunk.
He went for a walk in the breeze to clear his mind which were full of thoughts of Antara. Every person that crossed him looked to him like Antara his antara.
On his way back home he crossed the navrang mandap. He was shocked and surprised to hear ghugroos.
Raghu yeh awaaz kaisi. Maine kaha tha mujhe nahi peeve yeh machmach nahi mana.
He peeked into the hall and saw Antara dancing lost in her own world. Mesmerised by her beauty, her grace her innocence Raghu was drawn towards like a moth is drawn towards the fire.
Antara lost her balance and collided into raghu. She held Raghu's shoulders for support. She was feeling breathless and kept looking at Raghu in fear. Raghu too couldn't get his eyes of her . So beautiful how amazing he kept on thinking.
Raghu: tu inta ache naachti hai kaha se seeks tune???
Antara woh bad aise hi( not knowing what to say)
Raghu tu tho atom bomb nikali reh. Tu tho saachi andar se bhi barfi hai jaise Ajji boli thi. Tu Saba Tina dhyana rakhti hai. Sabse pyaar se bolti hai to mujhse kyun ladai karti hai.
Tu ton us kaki ko bhi pyaar se bolti hai re.mujhse kyun nahi. Main inta bura nahi hoon. Tu ton sab jaanti gain ab. Main Asia kyun hoon. Kya tu mujhe aise hi pyaar nahi kar sakti?? Bol Antara kyun nahi main ton tujhse Babur pyaar karat hoon tujhse diktat nahi kya??? Woh English mein bole to I love you antaara. Apni jaan se bhi zyada.
Antara was shocked.mtears flowed through her eyes she didn't know what to say or do. The guy who was soo rude to her loved her. She wasn't sure if this was Raghu speaking or the drinks.
Suddenly it thundered and started to rain. Raghu regained his senses and simply walked away...
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