Arhi SS | Who Knew? #2 COMPLETED *Awarded* - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazingly well written as always!!!!!!!!!!!!
I loved the childhood connection that you brought in...LOVELY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
Fabulous SS...Very beautifully written...

Enjoyed reading...It was fun filled, romantic story...Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
very beautiful story! i loved reading it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
this was absolutely mindblowing!!

Loved the humor! Khushi is just her crazy self and I loved her a lot! And Arnav is different from the one in the show.. but he is nicer..

I just loved some of the lines.. and I am so tempted to use 'is it working then?' if someone says to me 'I know what you are trying to do'.. Nobody says that to me though 😉

But seriously, this was really fantastic..

Oh, and I kind of guessed what they were upto on that night in Goa, but I just thought it would be a bicyle or probably something more kiddish... 😊

Do you have an index of your work by the way? I'd love to read more of it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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now that was an amazin SS...gud work
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
A beautiful ending to a beautiful story. I am happy that
your SS got the award. You truly were worthy of the award.
You are an amazing writer and hope to see many
works of yours in the future.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was so lovely, beautifully written story. Khushi's crazy ideas, Arnav's obedience to her craziness was so adorable. It's good that they didn't get married in a big hury, instead they allowed themselves time to know eachother better. Connection to their childhood was so touching.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Just read again...still laughing with happy tears in my eyes. What a great story... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
very nice light, but super funny short story. enjoyed it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh boy! What a fun read, you was telling that if you made smile at least you job is done, your job is WELLDONE. I was smiling whole time and had happy tears too.
You brought the childhood connection with the reference of sunset as a goodbye of known old friend who WILL show up next day without fail. That spirit of hope I loved it, for Christmas Eve I was thinking of reading some light hearted fiction, I bet I selected the best.
Merry Christmas and happy new year.

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