OS-RAYA's special day in my way

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Posted: 2013-08-01T22:11:12Z
I am back with my weekend OS..
I am very much disappointed with yesterday's   episode ..
May be something special is waiting for us as Priya every time reminds RAM about the special day..but my expectation was so high though I know it's a BT serial  but Tuesday increased my expectation and the precap  of Raya'S dance took it to the peak ..but again dissatisfaction ..
Ok so here I tried to describe raya's special day in my way..plz comments 

Starting with same scene with Priya's entry
Priya entered the function area and saw Ram 
She went to stand beside RAM and asked him
Priya: time kya huya?( I felt Priya wore the same watch which was gifted by RAM at ayesha's marriage day)
Ram: 8:30 baje 
Priya: aur aaj  date kya hai?
Ram:  date yaar main janta hu aapata hai priya aaj kuch   special  date hai ,par mujhe nehi yaad aaraha hai  ..plz tumhi bata dona yaar 
Priya:  pura din  tha aapke paas aapko yaad nehi  aaya aj kya special hai,actually na aapne try hi nehi kiya hoga
Forget it
And left the place 
Priya was  walking in the dance floor slowly and RAM caught her hand from behind 
Priya faced him with her surprised look
Ram  gave her his special wink  and requested her to dance with him ..
As Priya could not deny her love's call went close to Ram ,and placed her right palm on RAM's left..Ram rested his right hand on Priya's back and starred others,then at Priya ..sweet eyelock moment with a bg song 

Ishq Ki.. Saazishein
Ishq Ki.. Baaziyaan
Haara Main Khel Ke
Do Dilon Ka Juaa

Kyun Tune Meri Fursat Ki
Kyun Dil Mein Itni Harqat Ki
Ishaq Mein Itni Barqat Ki
Ye Tune Kya Kiya..

Suddenly Priya kept her hand on her waist,..and RAM asked: r u ok?
Priya answered yes ..but 
When nutz stood on the stage to announce the novel cost behind this auction something clicked on Ram's mind and he went to priya 
Priya was standing at a corner with Neha ..
As Neha saw her fatty is coming to them ..Neha went from thre to give Priya and Ram privacy as she well known about the special day '
Ram:   Priya tum thik to  ho na..
Priya : after the dance Priya is haapy inside but doesn't feel to show her satisfied face to Mr.Kapoor 
So with her annoyed face she told ' ha mujhe kya huyi hai ..I am fine ..
Ram: hmmm..par mujhe aab ghar jana hai '
Priya : kyun aapko kya huya ? aapki behen ki party hai ..aap auction me part nehi le raha hai kya?
Ram: nehi ..as I feel to rest for sometime ( ram knows the trick to create panic  in Priya)
Priya forgets about her all annoying mood- aap thik to hayna ,,chaliye hum ghar chalet hai 
They reached at KM
Km is empty now as all family members are at hotel to attend the party..
Priya started to climb the stairs ,,..
Ram: tum jao main aa rehi hu ..5min me ..
Priya: aare aab aap kaha jaa rahe hai'u were not feeling well that's why we left the party so soon and now u r going somewhere else
Ram: bas aa raha hu'tum jaa payogi na aakeli..
Priya: hm I will manage ..
After few minutes Priya reached their bedroom..green Kingdome for king ( king of cuteness and expression for me   ) and queen ( queen of beuty,, simple but elegant  for me Embarrassed )
 Priya just opened the door 
And yes to her surprised the room was full with candles ..
Not in a huge quantity like before 7years.but the concept of decoration was same.already ram reached there  to, keeping his hand on her belly softly and keeping his chin at her shoulder he whispered in Priya 's ears
Ram: tumhe kya lagti hai Priya k..main aaj k din bhul jayunga?
It was  a special day for us Priya ..5 saal se main isdin ko yaad karta tha ..aur aab jab tum mere pass ho to main kaise is date ko bhul sakta hu 
Now Priya becomes happy 
She leans on ram's chest and said
Wo..aap bhule nehi ..sirf meri patience ki test le rahe the..
Ram: nehi darling aapko surprise dena chahta tha..agar subah aapko bata deta to ye surprise rehta kya?
Ok aabhi room k andar bhi to chalo ..
They sat on their bed..priya kept her head on Ram's shoulder and Ram also kept his head on Priya's 
Priya: aur pata hai aaj jab ready hone k time pe maine aapse puchi k kaunsi saree pehnu ..apne bina dekhe hi keh diya k blue wali pehen lo
Ram: are wo to Vikram k wajai se ..ullu k patte..
Apne aapko to apni biwi se bacha nehi sakte hai aur mujhe marne ka plan karta rehta hai 
Priya : par mujhe achi lagi 
Ram :kya?with his surprised look
Priya: are us time apne mujhe darling kaha than a wo..and blushing 
Ram: wo ..with his satisfied grin ..wo jab main tumhe darling bulata hu to tumhe achhi lagti hai 

Priya: just nodded her head in affirmative 
Ram: ok then I will call u darling but in one condition..
Priya: biwi ko pyar se bulane k liye bhi condition
Ram: ha to main kya karu meri biwi to mujhe pyar se meri nam se bhi nehi bulati haina
Priya: hm   Mr.Kapoor to bulati hu ..
Ram: nehi jab jab tum mujhe Ram kehke  pukar gi ..tab tab main tumhe darling kehke bulayuga ..
Chalo manjur hai ye deal
Priya: rehne dijiye ..aap aur aapke darling and try to stand up
Ram again cathches her hand Priya ek chota sa dance ho jaye sirf tum aur main ..dekho 7years pehli ki ye rat to main aabhi succeed nehi kar sakta na..bad me sayad  and looks naughtily at her 
Priya with her blushing cheek ..ok chotasa dance
Ram went to select song for there song ..
He adjusted all things and came close to priya  holds her around her waist softly and priya kept her hand around his neck..but RAM adjusted a wrong song for the dance  

Hmm..., ho...
 Teri bindiya re, re aay haay, teri bindiya re '

 Ram: o ho wrong song for dance ..ok ruk jao main change karke aata hun..
Priya nehi kitna achi romantic song hai ..chalne dijiye ..hum  e thori na songs se matlab hai..
 
 Sajan bindiya le legi teri nindiya 
 Re aay haay, teri bindiya re 

Ram: haa nind kaise nehi lega mera ..har time tere jo lagati ho..
Aur mujhe to tere chizo se sakt nafrat haina..hm..tha ..
Priya: haaw Mr.Kapoor ..how mean u r ..romantic song hai ..aur aapko meri  teri bindi ki pari hai..

Tere maathe lage hain yu, jaise chanda taara
 Jiya mein chamke kabhi kabhi to, jaise koyi angaara
 Tere maathe lage hain yu 

Ram kissed her forehead on the bindi and said 'jo bhi ho aab main teri bindi ko bhi pyar karta hu ..as it shows ur presence in my life..

Sajan nindiya...
 Sajan nindiya le legi le legi le legi
 Meri bindiya 

Re aay haay, tera jhumka re '

Ram caressing her ear along with the ear rings '
Pat hain priya mujhe na tumhari ye lambi lambi ear rings bhi bohut pasand hai ..us rat k baad subah jab tum apne ear rings doond rehi thi ,mujhe bohut aacha lag raha tha..

Chain lene na dega sajan tumka
 Re aay haay mera jhumka re 

It felt special when u touched me..to find out ur earrings..

Mera gehna balam tu, tose sajke dolu
 Bhatakte hain tere hi naina, main to kuchh na bolu
 Mera gehna balam tu 

Priya just kept her head on his chest ,,
RAM holds her again softly around her waist ,,
The love birds were  standing in the same posture ..

To phir ye kya bole hai bole hai bole hai
 Tera kangna 

Suddenly Ram breaks the hug and catches her wrist ,caressing her all kangna 
Said- holi k din subah jab tum mere pass bohut hi paas aakar  chudiyan pehen rehi thi ..to man kar raha tha tum hare haatos e sab lekar main pehenayu tumhe ..coz I was feeling to do so ..
But I was nervous at all and all I was so stunned ,coz I never thought about it in my life .that was beyond my imagination..

Re aay haay, mera kangna re
 Bole re ab to chhoote na tera angna 

Priya :  I felt just like same as u ..coz that night u completed me..we became one soul ..which is inseparable for any one 
            
 Tu aayi hai sajaniya, jab se meri banke
 Thhumak thhumak chale hai jab tu, meri nas nas khanke
 Tu aayi hai sajaniya  

Ram kissed Priya 's forehead and said ..no Priya not only me completed u that night ..u also ..actually both of we completed each other 

Sajan ab to' 
 Sajan ab to chhootena chhootena chhootena
 Tera angna 

Again Priya kept her head on Ram's chest 
Ram : we became one soul on that day..and now we r inseparable..i promise u u priya I will try to do my level best for u ,for Peehu and our up coming babies

 Re aay haay
 Tera kangna re 
 Sajan ab to chhootena tera angna
 Re aay haay tera angna re

Priya: I know RAM u r the best son.best brother ,best husband,best son-in law,,best father for Peehu too ..so u will be the best father to our these baies and kept her hands on her belly along with Ram's hand
Ram: I love you darling love u very much
Priya  with her teasing voice : kya kaha aapne kuch sunayi nehi diya ..
Ram: o ..madam firse w hi baat ok chalo jab sab kuch same same ho raha hai then suruyat bhi waise hi hona chahiye na winks at her 
Priya: matlab?
Ram: matlab ki ..and catches her lips in his'



End ..
Bye bye 
Fir milungi  ..after one week 'chalo jaldi jaldi comments de do yaar ..i am still waiting '
(song and situation aapko kaise laagi..,..coz this song was picturised on my fav couple ,,on screen off screen dono me hi meri fav hai ..)to  be very honest jab main ye song ko lekar likh rehi thi ..mere dimag me amit ji ,jaya jib hi the ,,aur RAYA to humesha hi rehta hai ..

I will update my ff on Sunday sayad'
 

Edited by BALHLOVER - 2013-08-01T22:25:03Z
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Posted: 2013-08-01T22:54:32Z
awesome update Clap
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Posted: 2013-08-01T23:04:18Z
Originally posted by gupta90


awesome update Clap
 thank u dear ..
thank u a lot Big smile
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Posted: 2013-08-01T23:11:00Z
Awesome update...
hayy ye bindiya to hmari nidiya bhi chura le gai..Tongue
oye hoy mast update jaan...
aut aaj ka din ban gya...
maza aa gya...
oye hoy sb kuch same same..
candle ...dance bhi mast hai
haila phir se chup kr diya priya ko Embarrassed
hope show mein bhi kuch aisa dekhne mil jaae Day Dreaming

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Posted: 2013-08-01T23:23:01Z
Originally posted by Mini1991


Awesome update...
hayy ye bindiya to hmari nidiya bhi chura le gai..Tongue
oye hoy mast update jaan...
aut aaj ka din ban gya...
maza aa gya...
oye hoy sb kuch same same..
candle ...dance bhi mast hai
haila phir se chup kr diya priya ko Embarrassed
hope show mein bhi kuch aisa dekhne mil jaae Day Dreaming

 haye jaanu  aa gayi tu..
thank u  yaar 
ye meri fav song hai 
hmm..RAM ko pata hai na Priya ko kaise chup karna hai ..

kash monday aisa kuch ho jaye yaar  main bhi yehi soch rehi hu  
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Posted: 2013-08-01T23:28:16Z
Originally posted by BALHLOVER


Originally posted by Mini1991


Awesome update...
hayy ye bindiya to hmari nidiya bhi chura le gai..Tongue
oye hoy mast update jaan...
aut aaj ka din ban gya...
maza aa gya...
oye hoy sb kuch same same..
candle ...dance bhi mast hai
haila phir se chup kr diya priya ko Embarrassed
hope show mein bhi kuch aisa dekhne mil jaae Day Dreaming


haye jaanu aa gayi tu..
thank u yaar
ye meri fav song hai
hmm..RAM ko pata hai na Priya ko kaise chup karna hai ..

kash monday aisa kuch ho jaye yaar main bhi yehi soch rehi hu

Welcome jaanu...Hug
are kaise nhi aati meri jaanu ka os hai..
oye hoy tumhara fav song...
ehm ehm big b jo hai es song mein...
are aapne to soch bhi liya aur os likh bhu diya...Tongue
chalo dekhte hai monday kya hota hai...
hope kuch mast episode mileWinkEdited by Mini1991 - 2013-08-01T23:50:53Z
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Posted: 2013-08-01T23:31:23Z
Originally posted by Mini1991


Originally posted by BALHLOVER


Originally posted by Mini1991


Awesome update...
hayy ye bindiya to hmari nidiya bhi chura le gai..Tongue
oye hoy mast update jaan...
aut aaj ka din ban gya...
maza aa gya...
oye hoy sb kuch same same..
candle ...dance bhi mast hai
haila phir se chup kr diya priya ko Embarrassed
hope show mein bhi kuch aisa dekhne mil jaae Day Dreaming


haye jaanu aa gayi tu..
thank u yaar
ye meri fav song hai
hmm..RAM ko pata hai na Priya ko kaise chup karna hai ..

kash monday aisa kuch ho jaye yaar main bhi yehi soch rehi hu

Welcome jaanu...Hug
are kaise nhi aati meri jaanu ka os hai..
oye hoy tumhara fav song...
ehm ehm big b jo hai es song mein...[<":



are aapne to soch bhi liya aur os likh bhu diya...Tongue
chalo dekhte hai monday kya hota hai...
hope kuch mast episode mileWink
 yes jaanu u r correct Big b jo hai ..aur JAYA ji bhi.. Embarrassed
  ekta meri idea le sakti thi  WinkWinkWink
 sayad isbarr acha hi hoga ..nehi to ye din yaad karna hi bekar hai  


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Posted: 2013-08-01T23:59:17Z
Originally posted by tulshan1989


Awesome update
 thank u dear 
Big smile
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