Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES
Wow wow wow.. Fantastic story Sonali di ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️. Short but nicely investigated, fast paced ⭐️ ⭐️. What I love the most about your stories is the classic touch along with the casual scenes⭐️⭐️.. This time I don't pay attention to the minor loopholes😛. Just enjoyed it thoroughly 😛. The duo 😳..Daya sir just rocked ⭐️. Thank you so much for it Di. Wish to see many more from you 🤗.
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⭐️a fast paced n suspense filled story⭐️
😃was a lovely reading😃
but it was tooo short.. come up with a bit longer nxt time
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Originally posted by: debasree04
Read ur story - ACP on terrorist hitlist...idea is very good...i like the way u involved Asha & Sudhakar with present team...u r successful to create throughout suspense/thrill but the climax is not so good...actually i expected more thrill in the climax...overall its very good 👏
Keep writing 👍🏼
I will read rest of the stories soon 😊
And please make a content of ur story in first post of first page...it will be easier for everyone to find out the stories 😊
Zindagi ke Rang
Rangon se bhari iss duniya ke hum ho chuke hain aadi,
Laal, Peela, Haara, Gulabi, kitni hain rangon ki aabadi?
Khubsoorat lagta hain rangon se bhara jaag saara,
Par beena rangoon ke sochiye toh kaisa hoga nazara?
Kaise dekh paayenge hum aakash mein bikhri kalakari?
Suraj ki lali say saaji nisarg ki adbhoot chitrakari!
Dekh naa payenge hum vo tilmilate taaron ka Khel,
Raat ke Andhere ka Jhilmilati Roshni say mail!
Kaise kar payenge hum apne pyaar ka izhaar?
Beena rangon ke prem patra kitna fikka lagega yaar!
Shaanti ka sandesh Pahunchana hoga kitna Shramsadhya?
Pratikatmak sambhashan ka hoga hi nahi Astitva!
Par berang si iss duniya ka bhi toh hota hain ek Rang,
Fir who kala ho ya safed, who hota toh hain sang!
Magar jab rang hote hain saath, duniya tab hi lagti hain Khoobsurat
Aur saare rang milkar dete hain Hume yahi Nasihat!
1000 episodes of mystery, 1000 episodes of fun
1000 episodes since we met ACP Pradyuman
His calm and active mind made quick actions
The crime rate is limited with his exceptional decisions
Not only did he crack the cases most twirled
But also saved people from entering the crime world
To support him, he had a team most diligent
With officer that are sharp and valiant
Second in command is Sr. Insp. Abhijeet
A sharp shooter with equally sharp intellect
Abhijeet has a troubled past
But a wonderful friend who hold fast
This friend is Sr. Insp Daya
A tough cop with heart of gold
His slaps are always effective on criminals
But for his team he is Mr. Reliable
Fredericks is a Sub Inspector
Most benevolent and jovial amongst all the officers
All the other officers are equally smart and diligent
Who keep the pride of CID on escalation
Its 1000 times now since we have met them
But each time it feels we should meet again
Celebrating 1000 episodes with happiness and cheer
Wishing to be tuned to the show forever and forever
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