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Posted: 12 years ago
Creative update! Virat's idea of keeping manvi through bracelet was nice!
Waiting eagerly to know about kidnapped manvi!
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
loved the way virat was trying to romance with maanvi
hope he finds her soon
thanks a lot for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely
virat idea of giving manvi braclet was a good idea
curious for next part
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MeenalKhare99

lovely

virat idea of giving manvi braclet was a good idea
curious for next part
update soon



thanks 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww superb update really loved it. Aww virman little romance 😳 haww manvi got kidnapped nd i hope yeh karank ka hi kaam hoga. Bt i knw virat will find her sn haina. Update next part sn thanx for the pm tc
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: virmanfan013

aww superb update really loved it. Aww virman little romance 😳 haww manvi got kidnapped nd i hope yeh karank ka hi kaam hoga. Bt i knw virat will find her sn haina. Update next part sn thanx for the pm tc



awww thanks...!! i dnt think so you have to wait for long...cz im gonna update in some mins..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Devan.monalisa

Creative update! Virat's idea of keeping manvi through bracelet was nice!

Waiting eagerly to know about kidnapped manvi!


thanks... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hellooo TASians...!! so this time ...im regular as ever ... 😆 ok so ..dnt misunderstand me to be lavanya di ...cz im laveniya...!!! di is on her trip to goa...so she had said me to update an part for u all so here im to give you all the next part...!! you must have seen me lancing around with cmmnts on di's work...!! i had one account even ..but gawddd knws what happened to it...!! my story also vanished ..!! uhhh just chuck tht crap...hope im soon back...with sumthing...until then...
here's an update ...


Virman : Tere Aane Se...


Part 21...

Rescue team was there...n the tracing was started ...the procedure was taking tym...

N here maanvi...

" virat ..pls mujhe bacha lo ...pls virat mujhe yaha bahut darr lag raha hai..." She continued crying...

N suddenly the lights wer on...she was happy tht there was light...as she ws scared of darkness...

A voice came from back ...

"Vo tumhe bachane nhi aayega ...usey toh apni jaan ki parvah hai..."

She turned to find a figure...n she quickly remembered him ...he ws the one who chated with her...whn she ws waiting for virat to finish meeting...she saw him as a savior n ran towards him...

M : karan ...!! Thank god tum aa gaye...plss karan mujhe yaha se le chalo pls...😭

K : uhhh? tumhe le chalu?? Maanvi ...mai tumhe le jaane ke liye thodi na laya tha??😕 (with this he closes the door behind him)

M : uhh??? karan ye tum kya kar rahe ho?? Plss mujhe mazak pasand nhi ...!!chodo jaane do (she trys to push him)chodddooo ...jaane do mujhe ...😭😭

He gets aggressive n a thuuddd ..he slaps her hard...n blood oozes out from her dried lips.. she catches her cheeks n tears form in her eyes..

K : shhhssshhh...chup bilkul chup...😡(he shouts) tum yaha se bilkul nhi jaogi..!!

M : karan ye tum kya bol rahe ho?? Plss.. mujhe jane do..tum aisey kyu kar rahe ho?? Uss din toh tumne hi mujhe uss ladke se bachaya tha...!! Phir ab kyu?? Karan pls...😭😭😲

K : (shouts) chuppp!!... he ws a hired man...!! Usne mere kehne par wasiey kia..!!😡

M : (shocked) kyun par?? K : kyunki mai tumhare paas aana chahata tha..!! (moves closer to her...n she steps backward...feeling scared)

M : karrraan!! Tum aisa kyu kar rahe ho???😭😭

K : kyunki mai virat se badla lena chahata hu...(he tells her the reason y??..maanvi is shocked)ab yahi soch rahi ho na ki mai aisa kyu kar raha hu?? Kyunki mai ussey barbadd karna chahata hu..uski popularity ...uska naam ...uski Zindagi... uska sab kuch ...!! Ussey mai ye badla zaroor leke rahunga...!! Usne jiss tarah se mera career khatam kar dia ...usi tarah mai uski Zindagi kharab kar dena chahata hu... he has to pay the price for my career...!! Usne itni aasaani se mera career bigaad dia ...ab bas tum dekho how I spoil his entire life...!!!😡(still moving closer to her)

M : kyaaa?? Par tum mu...😕😭

K : shhhshhh let me complete...!!! Ye soch ri ho na ki maine phir tumhe kyu kidnap kia hai...tumhe pata hai mai virat ki zindagi ko barbaad karna chahata hu...uski priced possession ko ...uski main support ko...aur pata hai vo kon hai ?? ...TUMMM...tumse virat bahut pyaar karta hai ..!!(maanvi shocked...as no 1 knws except J, Vi ,Vm...) hai na??? chownko mat ...mujhe sab pata ..hai !!! aur agar tumhe kuch hua toh virat ye bardash nhi kar payega ...ye mujhe bahut acche se pata hai...agar mai tumhe uski zindagi se hamesha hamesha ke liye nikal do toh...virat toh waisey hi barbaad ho jayega...aur mujhe apni khoyi hui popularity waapas bhi miljayegi ...!!hai na accha plan !! EK TEER SE DO NISHAANE... 😈😈😈(smiles wickedly still moving closer to her)

Maanvi ws in shock all the while..!! 😲😲

M : (tears flowing+scared)tum...tumm ..tum virat ka kuch nhi bigaad saktey !!! vo tumhe nhi chodega!! Vo hamesha jitega...ye yaad rakhna..!! tum uska kuch nhi bigaad saktey ..! (yelling) tumhe kya lagta hai ki virat mujhe yaha akela chod dega? Nhi... vo mujhe dhund nikaalega ..!! vo mujhe jarur dhundega..aur tumhe toh vo ...uhh!! (she was taking step backwards as karan ws stepping towards her...and finally she hits the wall having no place to move backward she gets scared more...😭😭)

K : maanvi ...tum mere bare mai aisa sochti ho maine ye nhi socha tha!! Ek baat yaad rakhna..mai kuch bhi kar sakta hu...!! Hmm ..possibility hai ki ..virat tumhe dhoond ne aaye ..par yaha tak pahunche hi na!! bich raastey mai hi uska accident ho jaye...aur vo direct...😆😆😆

B4 he cud complete he got a tight slap frm her...n he got angry...!! He caught hold of her hair with one hand n with another ...holds her cheeks tightly😡

K : hw daree u??? mai tumhe kabse sahe ja raha hu iska matlab ye nhi ki tum apne limits cross kardo...u will pay for the consequences miss . maanvi choudary...!!!u dare not ..mess up with me... virat ka accident bhi kara sakta hu...par voh kya hai na mujhe ussey tadapte hue dekhna hai ..!! usey pal pal marte hue dekhna hai ... mai virat se badla lene ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hu ...kuchi bhi ...suna tumne??? Kuch bhi...tumhare saath kisi bhi haadh tak guzzar sakta hu ...!! So dnt provoke me...!!

Maanvi was shocked n tears wer escaping her eyes...!! she was crying badly...

M : aahhhaahhh ...chodo dard ho raha hai.. chodo ...!! (she lifted her hand to hit karan whn her eyes fall on her bracelet...n she remembered his words "isme ek transmitter hai" she frees herself from karan some how...and moves aside ...😊pheww finally ussey dikh gaya ..! dancing time guys )

M : tum mera ya virat ka kuch nhi bigaad saktey ..!!! kuch nhi ...samjhe..!!😡

N she turns to other syd ...facing her back to karan...

Here in headquarters...

Rescue team member - rm

Rm : sorry sir we r trying from long time but v r unable to trace it as the transmitter is off...(I knw this cant happen but pls...dnt hit chappals...this is needed for the track plss..jhel lo mujhe aur iss crap ko🤢🤢🤢)

V : pls try it once more...pls..just one try..!! 😭(in a shattered tone)

Rm: srry sir v cud have but...v r unable to do it...

Vi : koi aur raasta nhi hai kya??😕 Rm : sir agar transmitter ek baar on ho jaye toh kuch ho sakta hai..!!!

V : aur kuch nhi ?? Rm : srry to say sir but... NO!!

Vi : viraat tu tension na le...maanvi mil jayegi ... karan usey kuch nhi karega..!!

V : bhai !! mai ussey protect nhi kar paya..(tear from his eyes fall...) bhai ...I cheated upon the promise I gave her...!! 😭😭😭(hugs viren ) ...

V : (viren aparts n) ... Virat dekh ...hum ussey dhund lenge ...tu himmat mat haarna...police is tracing her na...??!!! so tu bas apne aap ko sambhal, ussey kuch nahi hoga...!!!😭

Abandon place ...

Maanvi here turns to another syd n shifts the diamond once n waits for 3 secs as virat had told...and then flips it as to start the recording...

Here ,virat in headquarters...

After calming down ...virat ws continuosly looking at the cell phone and walking to and fro...😳😳

V: (thinks)maanvi ..plss bracelet ko dekho plsss... he sees his phone again...😭

N to his happiness his phone beeps...he quickly checks it...😃

Yess ...virat received a msg from maanvi ...but ..the location was not there...!! He got confused😕😕...he consulted the RM...(rescue team member ..) he said

Rm: shayad waha signal coverage nhi hai ...!!shayd kissi mountain ya dense forst type region hai !!isiliye blank hai ...par ab transmitter hai toh v can trace the location...n he quickly started his job...😊

Virat had no words to xpress tht hw happy he ws feeling...tht nw he cud save his maanvi ...😊

Vi : dekha virat ..maanvi ..ne transmitter on kar diya...ab v can save her..😃

V : hmm... virat was impatiently waiting for the location to get traced ..when his phone again beeps...and he sees n he ws more than happy to c that the speaker was on now...!! He quickly ..connectd it to the lappy n ws hearing wat ws happening ...wer she ws..!! 😊(oly he ws hearing the convo..)

Here in abandoned place,

Maanvi turned to karan within 8 secs..n she said..

M : tumhe kya lagta hai ..ki tum mujhe iss pahadi ilake mai laoge...iss purani si factory mai rakhoge ...toh virat mujh tak pahunch nhi payega??vo jarur pahunchega ..!! aur tumhe toh vo chodega nhi !! ...vo mujhe bachane jarur aayega...!!😳(smart girl na?? giving clues to virat...😳😳😳)

V (to himself) : good maanvi aur clues do...!! Common...

K : bhool jaao tumm!! Iss janam mai toh bilkul nhi ...!! Vo sirf tumhare saath natak kar raha tha...vo tumse nhi apni jaan se pyaar karta hai...vo yaha nhi aayega tumhe bachane...! n u better get it..!😡😡😡😡

M : hhhahah...tum ussey nhi jante...tum mujhe kahi bhi chupa do... vo mujhe jarur dhoond lega..!!😊😳

Karan comes closer to her...

K : tum chup ho jao...!! Mujhe majboor mat karo...😡(karan was a complete psycho personality !!😆😆 )

M : apni ..haar ke baarey mai suna nhi jaa raha?? So sad...!! Poor u...apne aap pe taras kha lo..!!tum itna gir saktey ho apne badley ke liye ye koi soch nhi sakta...chii!!!

N thts it...maanvi had provoked him to his limits...

K : basss 😡(he shouts at top of his voice n slaps her hard...her cheeks wer already oozing blood due to previous slaps n now it ws bleeding more..) kaha tha maine...chup ho jao...par nhi ...😡😡

Here virats blood was boiling ...he heard the slap n he ws feeling like killing karan thn n there...he closed his fists...to control himself..!!😕

Rm : location trace ho gaya...!! Ye Chandigarh ke pahadi ilako mai se ek hai ...!!the one on the west...n to our convenience ...yaha se bahut najdeek hai ...bas 20 mins...I guess😊

Virat quickly got up n was gonna leave...but he stopped...he told viren to go home as it will be much of mishap at vadhera mansion ...n he knew tht all wer tensed...so he sent viren to home😊...he first refused to go cz he knew virat needed him ...n he will not be able to control himself whn he sees karan...eventually viren agreed evn...as he ws tensed for VM n J n evn for the choudary's ...virat sat in his car ...putting ear phones ... to listen what talks wer going on btwn maanvi n karan...the police force evn left behind virat...

Virat ws driving at a high speed ...he ws in very much rush to reach to his love ...to save his love from that devil😳 ...those evil eyes...as he knew he cud go to any extent to take revenge...virat ws able to hear everything...

K : tumhe ..bahut trust hai apne pyar par toh dekhte hai aaj ..kiss mai jyada takat hai !! mujhme ya tumhare uss do kawdi ki pyaar mai...!! 😡 (maanvi gets scared due to this line...)

He pulls maanvi closer...n starts to misbehave with her...she screams

"aaahhh chodo mujhe aaa ...leave me " with this virat's heart ws racing he didn't knw ..nw what is gonna cum next...!!he increases the speed ...oly whn it was possible...!!!!!!😲😲😲

V : maanvi bas kuch min aur ...pls maaanvi..!!! im sorry...talking to himself

M : chodo mujhe ...trying hard to push him away ...bt he ws way stronger than her...

He was trying to kiss her ...and he succeded in brushing his lips on hers for a second...and a THUDD!!😡😡😡😡😡

Manvi slaps him... "hw dare u !! hw dare u kiss me..hw dare u... hattoo durr mujhse" she hits..him twice or thrice ...🤢

And he pushes her on the floor...with this her back gets bruised badly due to the hard push on the rough floor...😭😭

Virat was shocked beyond his expectations...his blood boiled lyk the oil in hell... His eyes turned red...he himself didn't knw due to rage ...or due to pain ...he driving rashly over the road ...he didn't care about anything...!! 😡😡(it was already ...1:00 am)

K : ab kaha bach ke jaogi ..!! he leans on her n she revolts like hell...tears form in her eyes...😭😭

She screams..."viraaatt" with this scream it felt like virats soul was dragged out of him😲😭...he felt helpless

M : viraaat ..pls mujjhe bachao...!!

K : vo nhi aayega!!!

He catches her hand and kisses her on her neck ...cleavage ...nape n crook of neck ...she ws trying her level best to push him...but she cudnt...he tried to kiss her...but she turning her face here and there...n revolting like hell...she cried... "chodo mujhe ...u will get killed today ..chodo mujhe... agar virat ko pata chala na toh... u will get killed for sure...chodooo"she was weeping badly ... virat was not able to bear more n he pulled out the earphones he ws wearing😲...tears flowed from his eyes...tears...of pain ..tears of fear losing his love😭😭...he tried to reach the spot as fast as possible...😭

wanna knw wat next ?? stay tuned to Virman FF : Tere Aane Se ...

phewww...quite long one naa ?? ok so i will stop it here...pata chale ..mai likhti gayi aur lavanya di mujhe maar daale...!!🤢 leave your opinions...important for di...!! 😃


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Posted: 12 years ago
sunoo i want to say something if u dnt mind 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
loved it...finally manvi ne bracelet dekh liya😃
hope virat jalde se waha pahuch jae
continue soon
thanks for the pm
Edited by virman.lover - 12 years ago

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