Virman FF : Tere Aane Se...NOTE pg 104 - Page 6

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Hello guyzzz..!! im back...thank u all for ur lovely comments ..Im really shocked.. is it so good???? actually i was gonna upload after 2 days ..par free tym mil gaya so...😊 ( guyzz maanvi doesn't knw tht virat is a super star..she stayed in York 3 years and in these 3 years oly virat became a super star ..so she has no idea who is virat vadhera...and nor virat knws maanvi...he doesn't knw tht she is jeevika's sis though he knws jeevika has a sis who is completing her studies in NY ..he had neva seen her ..nor her pic..!!.)forgot to mention this earlier...😊

Virman FF : Tere Aane Se ...

Part 2...

Birds chirping ...cold climate n a girl sleeping clinging to her duvet...sun's rays fall on the girls face n her sleep gets disturbed 😕. She turns to othr syd ...n the girl is none othr than MISS.MAANVI CHOUDARY !!! she ws peacefully gonna dooze off again bt her phone rings n the ring tone of the cell irritating her..she tried closing her ears with her pillow ..bt in vain 😲.. and it rings again ...the ring tone of her cell exactly described her ...kudiye ni tere brown rang ne munde pat de ni sare mere town de(honey singh)😆... wrinkles form on her head...n she sees the caller ...and she xclaims ..

M : DIII!!!! 😊(she picks up the call...)

M : ha di bolo!! (in sleepy tone)

J : maanvi!! Maine tujhe 37 baar call kiya !! kya kar ri thi tu...tu thik toh hai na !! (in concerned tone)😲

M : meri amma!! Mai thik hu... fikr karna bandh kijiye..mai aur kya kar sakti hu...sooo ri thi di apne meri neend kharab kar di...!!!!

J : mannu kitna soye gi?? Waisey teri flight kitne baje ki hai???

M : Di!! Sone do na ..flight 12 baje ki hai!! Aap tension kyu le ri hu..

J : (seeing her wrist watch)mannu mai tension iss liye le ri hu kyunki agar tu abhi nhi uhti na toh tu flight miss karegi..

M: uhhh!! (not understanding wat jeevika meant)

J : ab 9 baj chuke hai...!!!!!🤢

M : jumping out from her bed...KYA???? DIII!!!! Pehele nhi bata sakti aapp...maine toh alarm rakha tha ..Baja kyu nhi ye alarm...searching for alarm clock...

Now maanvi was in her full avataaar !!! she ws running all over the place searching for this and that..!! n evn talking with jeevika..nw she ws huffing...!!

J : mannu shant!! Saans toh le ..!!

M : di tym nhi hai ...aap pehele nhi bata ...aapko pata ...mai late ...uhh ...tooth brush kaha hai...meri bag...??

Maanvi herself was not knwing wat she ws blabbering...!

J : ( hell lot confused) mannu kya bake ja ri hai??? mannu rukh ..saans le...(stern voice)

( hearing her di's stern voice she suddenly stopped ..)

J : chup bilkul chup ...breath in ..breath out... (Manvi was following what her di ws telling)

J : ab sunn...mai phone rakh ri hu...tu tayar hoke flight pakadne bhaag .k...?

M: (nodded in yess...)

J : gungi ho gyi kya??🤢

M : chup karne ke liye aapne hi toh kaha tha...😃

J: uhhh...tu bhi na..chal bye..!!

M : bye di!! (she hung up the call)

..n she shouted bhaaggg maanvi ...!! She quickly got ready n left for airport with her luggage...thank god ..cz flight was late by 1 hour...due to technical prblms...

She was sitting at the waiting lounge...n she went to flashback ...wher she n her lovely di...wer happy n she cherished her childhood moments...fr few minutes...thn she remembered the day when she got admission in new york's university...she was very happy n so was jeevika ...but later when they realized tht they wud be separated for 3 years...she stuck to the word tht she is not going...bt thn latr her di made hr understand tht it is important for her career n etc...bt maanvi being maanvi ws very stubborn ..thn jeevika promised her tht she wud call up her every day nearly 20 times n every weekend they wud video chat...thn this girl sumwher ws pacified..n she agreed..

She stil remembers the night when she n jeevika were crying 😭clinging to each othr ..tht ws the day b4 maanvi moved for New York..!!

She smiled on the bond she n her sis share...and a tear rolled on her cheeks...she wiped it n said...😭😭

" BAS KUCH GHANTE AUR DI ..PHIR HUM EK SAATH HONGE HAMESHA KE LIYE.."

And with this her flight ws announced ..n she boarded the flight...

And here in Chandigarh

Vadhera mansion...

Virat got up ..from the bed ...he didn't even knw whn he dozed off to sleep after returning from the cottage (which is away frm city pollution etc etc ... remember??) n he felt his eyes paining...yes his eyes wer aching a lot...n they wer swelled...he went to washroom fr getting ready for the day...he stood in front of the mirror..n he noticed that his eyes wer still red ..

V : virat tu aisa nhi kar sakta ...tu apni zindagi uss ladki ke liye nhi kharab kar sakta... he said remimding himself..

He splashed cold water on his face ...

V : kyu kiya tumne aisa kyun???... Virat tujhe uske bare main nhi sochna hai..!!...bhul ja ki voh kabhi teri zindagi mai thi...bhul ja ki who teri kuch thi bhi...agar tu ye kar payega toh teri zindagi sawaar jayegi... He kept on remimding himself saying this...

He went to breakfast table and saw maa n bro presnt there...they looked worried for him

But virat normally in his jovial mood went n sat on chair ..😊n wished his family... they got surprised by his behavior...but then they understood tht he is trying to move on..

Vi : bhai !! so tu kaisa hai??

V : mujhe kya hoga ?? mai bikul haata kattaa hu..(giggle)😆

Vi: virat tujhe pata hai mai kya puch raha hu...

Vm : haa beta ..bolo na..

V : maa.. bhai ..mai thik hu ..mujhe kuch nhi hua hai .mai apni zindagi uss ladki ke liye kharab nhi karna chahata ...aur aap dono ko meri fikr karne ki koi zarurat nhi hai..aur plzz aaj ke baad koi bhi uss ladki ka iss ghar mai zikr nhi karega..pls mere liye ...

V & Vm : ha jaise tum chaho..hum yahi chahate hai ki tum khush raho..!!!😛

N they had a normal break fast...

Vi: virat mere client .. Mr ahuja aane waale hai ..so pls tu unhe jake pick karle airport se...agar tujhe aaj koi recording na ho toh...

V : sure bhai!! Aaj mera koi recording nhi hai aur aaj office mai bhi koi khass audition nhi hai ...

V : woh 12 baje ki flight se aane waale they..par unki flight ek ghante delay ho gyi..hai so 2 baje thik unhe lene pahunch jana...k!!

V: ...k ..so mai unhe pic karne chale jaunga..!😊😊

That's it .. this was the second part ...i knw this part was lame but once the story takes off it wil be alryt..thn 2 im asking... how was it ?? (aapni aadato se baaz nhi aaungi na) 😆do leave ur opininons ..very important to me..all criticizing also welcum whole heartedly..😛..cz this FF is fr u al n ..u hv the ryts to crrct my mistakes...guyz pls if u need.. pm then pls buddy me...and yea if ur cmnnting fr the first tym on my ff..thn pls mention if u want pm or not..and if "pm" is not mentioned then u all wont get pm...cause I will be confused ..i shud pm or not... 😊 bye see u soon...with third part...!!!!

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

finally manvi's introduction haan she is the hyper types of gal interesting ...
and virat being all positive is soo goood😃
and virman gonna meet at the airport yaay excited for that and am sure its gonna be blast...
awesome update ...waiting for the next one plz make it fast plz plz 😊

oh...first comment already!!! thns ...thank god u liked the update ..!! i dont think it ws tht good...it ws lame in my view...!!! no fun element nthng...any hw once the story gets into track ...it will be fyn...😊