Virman FF : Tere Aane Se...NOTE pg 104 - Page 40

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Posted: 12 years ago

OMG...!!! aapne galti se kuch galat toh nahi type kar dia na update mai ?? apne virman ko itne jaldi mila dia di...but knwing u personally ...ab aap un dono ko alag karne ki koshish jarur karogi hai na ??

coming to the update...i was flying in the air...it was fab loved it ...i just loved it... ..the part wich i loved the most was...

viraat was saying all this coz he ws waiting fr clock to struck 12..as he had said tht he will say it after 1 day..on a beautiful day for maanvi...and noticing maanvi's expression...virat ws enjoyin it...she was getting worried n virat ke mann mai ladoo phoot rahe the...😆

i know this is narrators part...par mujhe yeh bahut accha laga...!! 😃



TEKO yaakeen nahi aata na ki maine unhe mila dia ??? 😡 nahi maine kuch galat type nahi kia...!!! sab sahi hai ...

zameen par aaja ...!! hawa mai udna acchi baat nahi ...mai tujhe zameen par giraane waali hu bahut jald...!!! twists are waiting dear...!!! now i knw u r gonna kill me when u see me...but kya kare ..mai AADAT SE MAJBOOR hu 😆😆😳

oh ok...i will consider this one also ...in the game...

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Posted: 12 years ago
I am back from the lala land, La La Lavanya 😆 The update was mindblowing and that kissing part was unexpected... I hope to read more of those scenes in future! 😳 Update ssooonn!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .LiveLaughLove.

I am back from the lala land, La La Lavanya 😆 The update was mindblowing and that kissing part was unexpected... I hope to read more of those scenes in future! 😳 Update ssooonn!!



hahhahaahah la la lavanya ...tht ws funny...!!!🤣 u hope to read more of such parts ?? OMG writing this oly i ws not knwing hw to write it...and u expect more from me ?? i really think i can't write anymore than this...agar mai romantic likhne jau na...toh it will be a funny update instead a romantic one...so pls...dnt xpect more from me...!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update
loved the way maanvi came out of the car thinking virat is in love with someone else
the confession was awesome
the part where maanvi said to jeevika that she was the first one to wish her was lovely
happy that virman finally confessed their love
thanks a lot for the pm

my favourite dialogue

V : ha toh ?? uss kisi ka naam janti ho??(she keeps quiet)mai batata hu... Voh bahut acchi hai ..vo mera bahut khayaal rakhti hai ...vo meri dhakkan ki tarah hai...vo nahi toh mai bhi nahi...usne kab meri zindagi mai aakar ..mujhe badal dia mujhe khud ko nhi pata...usne aakar..meri puri zindagi khushiyo se bharr diye...vo hawa jaise aakar ..mere rooh mai sama gyi...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nrithyao

amazing update
loved the way maanvi came out of the car thinking virat is in love with someone else
the confession was awesome
the part where maanvi said to jeevika that she was the first one to wish her was lovely
happy that virman finally confessed their love
thanks a lot for the pm

my favourite dialogue

V : ha toh ?? uss kisi ka naam janti ho??(she keeps quiet)mai batata hu... Voh bahut acchi hai ..vo mera bahut khayaal rakhti hai ...vo meri dhakkan ki tarah hai...vo nahi toh mai bhi nahi...usne kab meri zindagi mai aakar ..mujhe badal dia mujhe khud ko nhi pata...usne aakar..meri puri zindagi khushiyo se bharr diye...vo hawa jaise aakar ..mere rooh mai sama gyi...



glad u liked it...thanks for participating... 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lavanya_sweet



hahhahaahah la la lavanya ...tht ws funny...!!!🤣 u hope to read more of such parts ?? OMG writing this oly i ws not knwing hw to write it...and u expect more from me ?? i really think i can't write anymore than this...agar mai romantic likhne jau na...toh it will be a funny update instead a romantic one...so pls...dnt xpect more from me...!!!


U Ur reply is even longer than my comment! Lol.
Thanks! 😛 Han, I do hope! 😉 Buahhahahaaha!! Then write a funny one which would turn into a romantic one! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved it
finally virman confession
update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update..! loved their confession and Virat's nautanki...SImply Nice..Waiting for next nThanks for the PM!
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Posted: 12 years ago
amznggg updt.. fnly virman confcd
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awespome update!!!!!!!!!
Confesion and Wish part was really amazing
Loved it
Thanx 4 PM😊
Continue sooon

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