Virman FF : Tere Aane Se...NOTE pg 104

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Laveniya.

@Zion.Writings

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: innocentmanvi1
lovely update cont inue sooon i want a passionate love story some what karan forcing manvi to marry him and manvi is majboor virat came to knw this tpe of story but yes if not than i will surely wait for ur piece of idea u put in story

uhmmm..mine is not like tht ...may be u all must have read similar to this but trust me..the emotins will be xactly the different...

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#352

that was fab 😃
the dance sequence the blushing the admiring staring sessions the romantic nd beautiful moments thruoughout the party specially tht song making the whole thing wooowww 😃
karan nd his evil plans this is gonna be damn intetesting ...
update next part sooon

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niki795

@niki795

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#353

awesome update
loved it
karan planning something evil
by the way thanks for dedicating lavanya
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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niki795

@niki795

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#354

fav scene:

its the starting of the update
heels scene
the way virat says not to put her heels and to put her heels only when he is around

sorry for not pasting the actual dailogue

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#355

Awesome update dear...
And beautifully portray of dialogue... Nice
Waiting 4 next part
Update soon... 😊 thank u 4 pm

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pink1

@pink1

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#356

nice update waiting what karan
make a plan against them update soon

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nia333

@nia333

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#357

NICE UPDATE
WAITING EAGERLY FOR NEXT
UPDATE SOON😊

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tinni04

@tinni04

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#358

awesome update😊. continue soon please

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virmanfan013

@virmanfan013

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#359

hi! lavanya

it was an awesome update and i really loved it. everything is written very beutifully. aww virat is so sweet he said her that he can't stand if anyone catch her instead of him oye hoye😳 pehla pehla payar ha pehli pehli baar hai😉 🤣

wow they danced togather and everyone admired them as a couple yeh toh hona hi tha haina.

now abt karan madam dare you seperate virman then i'll burry you alive in this earth. ok according to my suggestion i want karan hurt manvi and virat to console her or protect her from karan's evil mind samjhi ya samjhao 😳

thanx for them. do cont soon. take care😊