TS : One Night in Manhattan (REPOSTED) | Madhubala

-Dil-

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Aakriti

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Posted: 10 years ago

WOW Dil !!! 👏

Truly wow !!

I loved reading it !!

I m really fascinated by the way you write 😆

Awesome !! 👏

One should never ever lose hope in something specially life.

And the overnight change in both of their lives...twice for madhu actually proves the fact 😃

Trish !! Omg !! U made her such a bi**h !! 😲

And madhu's generous offers 🤣

That was a real shock to me too 😆..i can understand rk's state 😆

and his prank 🤣...

Awesome dil !! 👏

PS: Yayy !! I m first !! 🥳 🥳

I m really happy !!

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Love

Aku <3

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-Ronnie-

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Posted: 10 years ago

Yay!!!!!

Finally you came back!!! and with a bang!!
loved it! The fact i liked the most is that you didn't rushed it...
it went on a pace where we could understand both their emotions properly!
Super super update by an excellent writer!!
loved it Dilu ❤️

keep writing
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🤗 Edited by ronnie30 - 10 years ago

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ennishet

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome OS, Dil!

But I'm pissed off! It felt abrupt at the end and incomplete. I'm warning you ... I want part 2 or I stop talking to you. It can just be exclusively for me. 😊
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sush

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Dil this is one of the best i read till date ! 😊

such a beautiful os..👏

Wow wow wow :)

i thought this Madhu is so different...

wht was tht..i mean ...tht V- Mission 😆

but it was just 4 a night..she was the same sweet gal. !!😃

RK...hmmm...a gentleman...awww..such a cutiepie !!😳

Loved both the characters...n the story was superb...Life can surely change in a moment 😉 !!

thank u for this OS :)

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Angeena

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome! It was very very cute.

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Kanchi

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Posted: 10 years ago

Really missed reading your work.. And am so glad that u thought to pen down just then hehe!! Divine play😉!! Well loved the so innocent Madhu and her very innocent talk with a stranger. Loved Rishabh even more for his gentleman ship and his sweet gesture towards this stranger lovely girl. Well this OS had immense captivating freshness and some unknown innocence to it😊Edited by aDarkAngel - 10 years ago

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trolldemortx

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Posted: 10 years ago

Dil! Whoa :)
BACK WITH A BANG! :D

Loved it Dil :) I honestly have nothing else to say! You know how much I love your work :D

Keep writing :D

Steph loves ya <3
xxx

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