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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi guys i am new here! I never knew about this forum but because of deep di(deep_tanha) i came to know about this! Thank you deep di! I wrote some poems in d3 forum n some in fan fictions but now got a right place to post my poems! So here is a poem! Description about the poem is after the poem! Here you guys go!

THE LITTLE GIRL

She was walking down the streets

With a candy in her little hands

Her hair tied up in two ponies

Leaving behind some falling strands

She was walking submerged in herself

Not knowing the cruel world

She was too cute, she was too innocent

That cute small creature happily twirled

But then she noticed people around

Those big eyes frightening her

Some giving her disgusting looks

And some passing comments at her

That little soul was being accused

But no one dared to come in front

The tears made their way on her cheeks

She ran away from those hurting taunts

She never again laughed nor did she even smile

But what was that little soul's fault?

She was happy or that she was a girl

May be both by world's default

Was it our mistake? Was it our fault?

We all need a big change

We girls don't want tears

Can't we ask for happiness in exchange?

I know it didn't come up well because just penned it down!

Description- here i am describing about how a girl in india is gazed when she is twirling in happiness or laughing or even smiling! We say that now we are 21st century but all restrictions for girls are like 19th century! I am trying to express questions of a girl that why do we girls don't have freedoms like boys? Why are we always being accused even when the fault is someone else's? Why always girls have to suffer? Why those angry looks make an innocent girl cry? What was her fault at all?

That was all! I hope you all guys liked them!*fingers crossed* i don't know anybody in this forum so i am sending pms to my friends! Oh sorry forgot to introduce myself! I am Aditi, you guys can call me adi or cutie!

Love Aditi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing Poem, Aditi..
I really appreciate it...
The thought with which you have penned it down is what I appreciate the most...
So true..
Why do Girls have to suffer???
Really loved the poem, dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice poem mirchi
yr humehi itni sufferng ku
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice poem with a great thought..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey.. adi cool one..
infact I would say it was really nice to go through the entire poetic lines👏

those were really touchy lines as we can feel about that girl who is being gazed and teased.

Superb thought of putting them down ur pen.
really well 😳

keep up the good work.

well done 👍🏼

Riti
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome poem you described very beautifully , its to heart touches mg plz keep writing
Posted: 12 years ago
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it was a emotional and heart touching poem. We live in 21st century,and ya the time has changed a bit,gals r given their rights,but today also if a gal wears short dres,she is asked the charge of one nightout,seems gals have no self respect.today also gal is not safe while walking alone,she ll raped if she is late in night,gals are used as toys,used and threw.

i dont know when people will change their mentality.and will understand the feeling of girls.😭

aditi...can i copy your poem to my fb plzz...will credit you...
but if u permit then...scrap me or pm me
Edited by shanaya-taarey - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
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great poem...you r an awesome writer.keep writing more😊
Edited by shanaya-taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was an amazing and emotional poem!! The thought behind this poem is too good! Yes, why do have to bear the brunt of others mistakes??We are a democratic nation and in the 21st century then why are girls bound with so many restrictions?why are we not safe in the world??When are all these questions going to get answers?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing poem cutie shai kha girls are most precious gift of good ...

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