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New AbhIya FF:The Toxic Affair(pg68,Chpt10,Nov7) - Page 34

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Posted: 9 years ago
UPDATED on page 47 
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Posted: 9 years ago
So...you broke my heart at three different places in your updates.
Guess which ones? :P

I loved AbhIya in this update. Both of them, aargh I just cant express how I love them.
Piya determining to stay away, then that time she just told Abhay it was just her job. It was honestly gutwrenching.
As for Abhay, I dunno but I feel this is going to be my favorite Abhay in all ur work.
The way he came to office knowing the snide looks passed at him and all and when he threatened to dump that water on that gal's head :D :D
also when he wondered if piya is just after his money...poor guy needs love so badly and no wonder he feels awful now.
Love how he defended Piya from that creep.
Precap 1- sounds ominous.

Precap 2- sounds yummy!
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey why did u stop it here??? uhh I cant wait for next part😳
well I must say awesome update
very nicely written, I feel bad for piya, her father left her😭
abhay is also going through pain bcz of his mother
loved how abhay protect piya😳
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic Update!!!
Loved it...!!!!


Their attraction is intoxicating...thanks for the PM!!!


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Posted: 9 years ago
WOW!! brilliant update dear...loved it...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
thank god finally god update
mind blowing update
poor pia what a life she has πŸ’” πŸ’”
her own father sold her so disgusting 😑 😑
tanushree part was emotional
she didn't get love from her husband
that's why she start eye candy business
on the other way abhay suffer πŸ’” πŸ’”
all the peoples r talking abt him & his familys 😑 😑
love the way abhay gave answer that girl πŸ‘ πŸ‘
abhay was missing pia but pia ignore him πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’
finally abhiya meet πŸ€— πŸ€—
but abhay was hurt by pia's cold behavior
oh hell that men trying to force pia 😑 😑
thank god abhay came on time πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ
oh wow pia kissed abhay 😳 😳
so pia agree to spend 1 week with abhay he was so happy πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
firstly happy eid to u tanzie.

secondly what an amazing update. god i hate pia's father like anything..how can he do that to his own daughter and she was too young to understand anything. pathetic men he was.

both abhay and pia have are bonded by pain . i liked how abhay dealt with the ppl in his office. it must have been so hard to keep calm and get on with things normally.

pia ignored him and he came to her rescue again. it was such a painful situation for pia that even after everything she undergoes she can't even say anything against it or stop them.glad to see abhay helping her and also treating her with respect.

tanushree fell in luv with a wrong guy and kind of paid for it as her life too has been ruined. i wonder who is the women she hates so religiously.

looking forward to see how abhay would decipher pia in the one week she has given to him.

precap looks interesting and not just the dancing part but the one where abhay is thinking of making a story inspired by pia.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Happy Eid!!finally u updated.It was jst amazing lovely I honestly love ur writing style ..loved the whole update BTW thanks for the pm and pls add me in ur pm list πŸ˜ƒEdited by BLUEPARROTS - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Happy Eid Tanzie!!
Woww amazing update dear PiYa was avoiding AbHaY n he was missing her

PiYa has such a painful past 😭
AbHiya meeting was awsome n now PiYa is agree to spend a week wid AbHaY 😳

Precap luks very interesting plzzz update soon

It was really fab dear 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
A really really good update, 
Abhay's state of mind and Pia's fears were described so well. Pia's past story broke me completely. 😭 hate hate hate her father. πŸ˜‘