MG OS: DREAM - Page 3 | Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

Sarita

@AnonMSK

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

Nice..wud hav been better if dev too had to pay gor his sins

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karanika_praja

@karanika_praja

Senior Member

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

gr8 😉 lovely

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chhavi

@Shonameet

IF-Rockerz

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

Nice one!
My fav part is that after dream wala part.. Maans reaction & realisation..his emotions were so intense..beautifully described and dialogs were also good.
Luvd it!

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Paramjit

@Paramjit

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

Nice os this was a beautiful story of Mann and geet. Thanks for the pm.

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763540

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

Fabulous...

Loved it...

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551186

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

nice update

do 2-3 parts more

i want maan to repent n punish dev

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