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Posted: 10 years ago
πŸ˜›Thanks dear😊
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Lovely update
pls continue soon
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Originally posted by: rachna1970

Lovely update

pls continue soon

Thanks dear
Try my best
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice chapter please update it soon
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Wow what a lovely, sweet and different story Vishu πŸ‘ 

Read all chapters in one sitting and enjoyed everyone of them πŸ˜³

Love this character of Yash, he's so different, naughty to the core πŸ˜†

And the tiff between Yash and Aarti πŸ˜†

Can't wait for the next updates.


Vishu (if you don't mind ) a small suggestion, if possible please put a index of all chapters in the first page, as it'll make it easier (for new and all existing ) readers to search for the next chapters. Cause I had to go through all pages to search for chapters. I hope you don't mind my suggestion πŸ˜Š
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Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Wow what a lovely, sweet and different story Vishu πŸ‘ 


Read all chapters in one sitting and enjoyed everyone of them πŸ˜³

Love this character of Yash, he's so different, naughty to the core πŸ˜†

And the tiff between Yash and Aarti πŸ˜†

Can't wait for the next updates.


Vishu (if you don't mind ) a small suggestion, if possible please put a index of all chapters in the first page, as it'll make it easier (for new and all existing ) readers to search for the next chapters. Cause I had to go through all pages to search for chapters. I hope you don't mind my suggestion πŸ˜Š

First of All Sorry 4 the inconvenience caused in searching chapters...  
πŸ˜›Thanks A Lot Nikki 4 ur Lovely Comments😊
πŸ˜ƒThank u For Ur Suggestion Too Nikki!!!!😳
😳I'll Do as U Say!!!!😳
πŸ˜›& Thank u 4 Giving Correct Suggestion @ correct time!!!!πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by yashuaarthi - 10 years ago
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😊Chapter-5😊
(Next day- Yash Gets Ready & Comes Out Of The House & Talks With His Parents Who Were In The Frontyard)
Yash- My Ma, I'm Leaving...
G3- Bye Yash, Take care,
       Today Even Pls Don't go 4 Fighting with anyone...
Yash- I'll Try Mom...
         Say Bye To Dad Too That I Said him...
SP- I'm Here Yash...
Yash- No,Dad I Thought U Was Having A Bath...
SP- Yash, Am I A Baby To Take Bath In a Bathroom 4 A long Time?
G3- Ok, U Leave Yash...
      He, must Go To college nah????
SP- Ok Yash ,Bye or ur mamma will cut my Breakfast...
Yash- Ok, dad bye...
        Ma, i 4got 1 person!!!!
       Where Is Arpita MAdam????
G3- Yash,
       She got up in the morning & Went 2 pickup Aarthi!!!!
Yash- Early in The morning Even she went to chat with that JKR Aarthi?
SP- Yash,
      1 Small Request my son...
Yash- What Dad????
SP- Pls,
       As ur mom Said I Didn't say u 2 fight with anyone but my request          is  Pls, in the morning even pls don't start fighting nah????
Yash- Yes, dad ur Wish My duty!!!!
SP- That's my Boy!!!!
G3- Both Son & Father continue ur gossips later..
      & Now,
      Yash. Pls Go 2 ur college...
Yash- Ok, ok, Cool Down Ma..
          Bye Ma...
          Bye Dad...
(While Yash Leaves His House 7 Comes 2 The Road Arpita & Aarthi Too Come there , \ Arpita & Aarthi Notices Yash but Yash doesn't Notice them)
(Yash's Neighbors Children Anch, Palak & Payal Stand In front Of Yash's Frontyard...)
Anch- Good Morning Yash!!!!
Yash- Good Morning Anch Sir!!!!
Palak- Good morning Yash!!!!
Yash- Good Morning 4 u too Palak Madam!!!!
          Why r u silent partner Payal????
          Did Anch do u anything????
          Anch what did u do????
Anch- No, Bhaiya I didn't do anything...
Yash- Then Is It U Palak????
Palak- Nai, Bhaiya , I Didn't Do anything!!!!
Yash- Then, Payal, What Is ur Problem Partner????
          Come on Cheer up Partner!!!!!!!!!
          Partners(Points out Anch & Palak) Do u know My Partner's                   problem????
Anch & Palak- Partner, Palak Has A Poet competition 2day & She isn't                          ready 4 it????
                       What can we do????
Yash- Is this The Matter partner????
Payal- Um,,,,,,,
Yash- Ok, I'll Say u A poet...
Payal- Say Bhaiya!!!!!!!!
Yash-I'm Funny.
        I am Funny
        That's who I am
        I'm Funny
        Make U laugh & cry
        I'm Funny
        Do Funny Things
        I'm Funny
        I like To Play With Strings
        I'm Funny
        & I don't Care
        That's What I Like To be
        So Let's Be funny together

        Be funny like Partner...πŸ˜†
        How is This Partner!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Payal- great Partner!!!!!!!!!!!!
          love It Thanks a lot Bhaiya!!!!!!!!!!!!!
           But If I 4get it!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yash- If u think u'll forget say this as u walk to your school!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Payal- Thanks Bhaiya!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anch & Palk- Thanks bhaiya!!!!!!!!!!!!
                      We r so much grateful 2 u!!!!!!!!!!!!!
                     Thanks a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yash- Ok, Uncle & Aunty Now Soon Go To school or the teacher will...
(Yash & The 3 kids Laugh together & enjoys their selves While Aarthi & Arpita Watches this)
Yash- Bye Partners!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
          See u In The evening!!!!!!!!!!!
Anch, Palak & Payal- ok, bye Partner!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(Yash & The 3 Kids Leave from The Place)
Aarthi- Arpita, I Couldn't understand Yash!!!!!!!!!
Arpita- Why Aarthi????
Aarthi- The 1st time I Saw him in The college He was a Funny                          Character, 
           The 2nd time He Seems 2 be a flirt Character,
           The 3rd time He was a fighting cock,
           The 4th time he Was a Interesting Character.
           & Now...
           He was such a cute little baby character with those kids!!!!!!!!
           To say shortly Mostly He Seems 2 Be Rama & Sometimes                   Ravavanan Too...
           Is Yash ram or Ravanan????
Arpita-So, now u want 2 know whether Yash Is Ram Or Ravanan????
           Isn't it so????
Aarthi-Yes, Arpita...
          Pls, Do say me nah!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Arpita- It's Getting late 2 college.
           1st we'll go 4 college & there I'll say u about Yash!!!!!
          & Then U Decide whether Yash Is ram or Ravanan.
          Ok, Aarthi????
Aarthi- Ok, Arpita,,,
         But U must say me the story.
         ok????
Arpita- of ,course.
Aarthi- Ok, come let's go... 
Edited by yashuaarthi - 10 years ago
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Thanks poonam di😊
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wow it was soooπŸ‘
waiting for next update 
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Hmm sounds intersting n cool dear every body falls in love with one another

Ch1

Yash is smart chap n P n aakash could not amke it he sounds cool n aarti oh she is beautiful which even yash can resist so he said dil se tht i love you but later corrected n call her sister.. offfo

P had a nice slap wow 1st chapter me hi

Ch2

then meeting n making n yahs is so cute repeating himself n then aarya cute fight oh so nice dear love it  really i can imagine hpow cute they must be looking adorable

but they cant deny the spark they felt they go on n on with ch3 really poor arpita stucked in between this two crazzzy people

n then SP uncle came n met with her future daughter  in law

later in schindhiya mansion all i can read all around is aarti n y not as g3 correctly said yash she is the one ..wow CH4 is nice

                really i enjoy reading you story will look forward to next one