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~A TORN RELATION~

PART 21

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Geet cried and asked maan to leave her but his grip was sharp to hurt her…

Geet : leave me..

Maan : why are you afraid to know the whole truth..do you know that it was a mistake that I did by calling a girl in my room aur tum wahan aaagi thi… did I call you geet bolo.. kisne bheja tumhe bolo… tell me who sent you geet

Geet didn't know what to answer him for her he was the person who is responsible for her condition.. she didn't knew that what made her to go in that room she faintly remembers that piece of paper which made her to go in that room..that was payal whose name was written on the paper.. still nothing came as a realization in geet's mind her mind and thoughts were clouded with maan ..she knew him as the culprit … she was hurt and he was responsible..

Geet : you are hurting me.. leave me…

Maan: aur kitna dard geet do you know that day I not only burnt you in the fire that was burning me inside but I killed the maan who knew to love..she killed the maan and that dead maan killed you.. that maan killed his own love by his hands.. I killed my love with my own hands..his words were so deep etched with love ..his unsaid love but before it could have blossomed into the flower it was crushed by him..

His hands left her shoulder and she couldn't digest the fact she was numb..his words were like poison to her ears where they should be soothing ..it was his vulnerable declaration of his love.. his questioning was baseless somewhere he wanted to provoke her to tell the truth but that never came.. geet looked at him with those emotionless eyes and left the room..

Maan saw her leaving him..

Yes , he questioned her..he asked her about her presence that day ..but he cannot drown now in his remorse he cant ..

This is not the perfect time to express his guilt he had already wasted most of his precious time in ignoring her in keeping her away from the him..and today this deadly truth had shattered his life.. the love that he wanted to shower on his wife ..on his geet was smashed with his own hands .. her emotionless figure made him enraged ..maan looked at the empty space ..this empty room was cursing him ..this empty space was making him restless..

Geet left the room her tears were falling like droplets of water.. warm tears were soaking her tears .she was looking at the vast garden..this life was killing her.. she looked at the empty space..there was some empty space in the garden.. she looked at the space and now she don't know what to do… his words were making her restless..

She sat on the mud.. it was wet with the effect of the heavy rain.. sobbing hitting herself she was getting restless…

Geet : I didn't do..anything..kuch..nahi kiya maine… nahi pata kisne kiya.. her words were less than the pain..the unbearable pain was killing her within .. she was already weak and this mental pressure was making her to hurt herself more…

Geet : I didn't know..i didn't know maan… nahi pata…

Here in the room..maan composed himself..the tears which left his eyes seeing her made him restless.. she was in this position because of him…

Maan : I cant loose myself.. aur waqt nahi nahi mere paas… hamare paas… geet I cant undo anything but will not leave them who played with you… I didn't knew kyun kab kaise hua nahi pata geet..i asked you..sirf pucha tha tumse… I want a normal life and she too deserves the same…

Maan : I cant loose myself in the guilt geet… I cant .. my guilt is not important than you geet.. I want you and baby to be safe… maan you cannot loose your love , you love her maan…

Maan searched for geet in the whole Km but she was no where … maan 's each breath was anticipating her presence..she was no where ..what did he do..why did he have to question her..in his anger he burst out on her..

Maan was about to leave the mansion when he saw her lying lifelessly on the wet mud..she was shivering and her eyes were still having some tears.. maan ran towards her and took her in his arms..she was cold.. he looked at her she was in pain.. this was the mental pain that she was going through…

Maan patted her cheeks to make her awake but he just heard faint sobbing…

Geet was shivering in his arms she was unconsciously uttering the words that made him shocked…

( what words will say afterwards…)

Maan immediately scooped her in his arms and took her inside…

she was cold and murmuring in the sleep.. maan patted her in her sleep..

Maan: shhh calm down geet.. shh geet sleep baby…

Geet : nahi.. wo nahi.. usne kiya .. I didn't knew anything… maan she asked me to be there..believe me..

Maan looked at her sleeping form there were still the tension lines on her face..the way she was holding his hand ..if she hated him then this wont be her reaction..

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Dearies don't judge the book by its cover…maan's behavior is compeletey justified..dont worry I will make him repent.. and being maan he is not expressive na…

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priya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#698

half truth has came out and now waiting for geets side who sent her to the room

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Wow waiting for the creep's dulai by Maan for messing with Geet.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Painful...😭 😭

Both r suffering...Hope kuch sach samne aaye...

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