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Hey everyone,
It's sunshine! I'm writing a a small os starting from the last scene in kyih on friday (u no when simi and raj meet kyih song in big?) This is sort of a continuation of that. Hope u enjoy. Here we go!
OS SILENT TEARS
She steped out of the car with her friend Dimpy. She started to remember the first time she and Rajveer had met. His tractor badal had crashed the sleek silver car and they had started to fight. Those were sweet memories. But now, nothing was left of them. Just her heart,broken into thousands of pieces which she was trying to mend . She looked up and saw her love, the tall handsome man who stood in front of her. It was her Rajveer. She walked up to him and they had an eyelock. Sounds of the nearby tractors shook them and finally came into reality. She slowly lifted her hand towards Rajveer's cheek. She wanted to cry her heart out. But instead, she quickly realised what she was doing and stepped back. ' Nahi, nahi , NAHI!!!!' she said stepping back in horror as she realised he hid his love from . She thought' kya hoga agar mera plan kamiab nahi hua?' What if she lost her love forever?
She ran away like a cheetah , crying her heart out. Her screams must be heard alk aroung the village. 'Simi, simi ruk jao' shouted Dimpy as her friend was running with full speed. 'Madam ji, madam ji, Simran ji, yeh maine kya kar diya!!!?' shouted Rajveer as he and Jaggi ran with Dimpy trying to find his madam ji. 'DEKHA RAJVEER, KYA HAAL HAI TERI MADAM JI KA?' ' TU AGAR USSE APNATA TOH YEH SAB NAHI DEHKNA PADTA' 'WOH TUJSE PYAAR KARTI HAI, TU SAMAJ KYUN NAHI RAH' screamed Jaggi. Meanwhile Simran had reached a hay stack and she went behind it and started to cry even more loudly. Whenever she saw Rajveer, her heart broke into thousands of pieces, as if knife stabbed her heart. Dimpy reached the hay stack. 'Simi dekh, agar tujhe rajveer chahiye, toh hume hamara plan continue karna padega. Uske bad tu rajveer ke saat khushi khushi reh payegi'. 'Ok? Hum yeh sab tere liye kar rahe hai' Dimpy took out a tissue and gave it to Simran. 'Thanks yaar dimpy'. 'Tere bina yeh hota nahi', said Simran. 'Chalo ghar chalte hai, mom dad wait kar rahe hoge' said Dimpy. 'Ab mujhe poora vishwas hai ki humara plan hit hoga!'
'Chal ghar chal.' 'Rajveer kaha hai', asked simi. 'Woh toh chale gaye' said Dimpy. 'Ok' said simi
In his room, Rajveer cursed himself. 'Madam ji aap maane bhool jao. Main apke layak naki hoon. Ho sakhe to maane nmaaf jar do. Tears filled his eyes, and started to drop.
Over at Dimpy's house, Simran said' Main Rajveer ko aapna bana ke hi rahoongi!' she said with confidence.
HSo, how was it? Let me know. Pls comment. Silent readers please try and comment. This os is really sad. Hope to see great track 😳
It's sunshine! I'm writing a a small os starting from the last scene in kyih on friday (u no when simi and raj meet kyih song in big?) This is sort of a continuation of that. Hope u enjoy. Here we go!
OS SILENT TEARS
She steped out of the car with her friend Dimpy. She started to remember the first time she and Rajveer had met. His tractor badal had crashed the sleek silver car and they had started to fight. Those were sweet memories. But now, nothing was left of them. Just her heart,broken into thousands of pieces which she was trying to mend . She looked up and saw her love, the tall handsome man who stood in front of her. It was her Rajveer. She walked up to him and they had an eyelock. Sounds of the nearby tractors shook them and finally came into reality. She slowly lifted her hand towards Rajveer's cheek. She wanted to cry her heart out. But instead, she quickly realised what she was doing and stepped back. ' Nahi, nahi , NAHI!!!!' she said stepping back in horror as she realised he hid his love from . She thought' kya hoga agar mera plan kamiab nahi hua?' What if she lost her love forever?
She ran away like a cheetah , crying her heart out. Her screams must be heard alk aroung the village. 'Simi, simi ruk jao' shouted Dimpy as her friend was running with full speed. 'Madam ji, madam ji, Simran ji, yeh maine kya kar diya!!!?' shouted Rajveer as he and Jaggi ran with Dimpy trying to find his madam ji. 'DEKHA RAJVEER, KYA HAAL HAI TERI MADAM JI KA?' ' TU AGAR USSE APNATA TOH YEH SAB NAHI DEHKNA PADTA' 'WOH TUJSE PYAAR KARTI HAI, TU SAMAJ KYUN NAHI RAH' screamed Jaggi. Meanwhile Simran had reached a hay stack and she went behind it and started to cry even more loudly. Whenever she saw Rajveer, her heart broke into thousands of pieces, as if knife stabbed her heart. Dimpy reached the hay stack. 'Simi dekh, agar tujhe rajveer chahiye, toh hume hamara plan continue karna padega. Uske bad tu rajveer ke saat khushi khushi reh payegi'. 'Ok? Hum yeh sab tere liye kar rahe hai' Dimpy took out a tissue and gave it to Simran. 'Thanks yaar dimpy'. 'Tere bina yeh hota nahi', said Simran. 'Chalo ghar chalte hai, mom dad wait kar rahe hoge' said Dimpy. 'Ab mujhe poora vishwas hai ki humara plan hit hoga!'
'Chal ghar chal.' 'Rajveer kaha hai', asked simi. 'Woh toh chale gaye' said Dimpy. 'Ok' said simi
In his room, Rajveer cursed himself. 'Madam ji aap maane bhool jao. Main apke layak naki hoon. Ho sakhe to maane nmaaf jar do. Tears filled his eyes, and started to drop.
Over at Dimpy's house, Simran said' Main Rajveer ko aapna bana ke hi rahoongi!' she said with confidence.
HSo, how was it? Let me know. Pls comment. Silent readers please try and comment. This os is really sad. Hope to see great track 😳
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