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Posted: 12 years ago
Doing peek-a-boo 😆 Since mrng



















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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey dear... I am really sorry but I will not be able to update today...
A lot of the update has still to be written... I will pakka try to post it tomorrw!!
I really didn't know that people were so waiting for this story... makes me really happy and charged to finish writing!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mints23


Hey dear... I am really sorry but I will not be able to update today...
A lot of the update has still to be written... I will pakka try to post it tomorrw!!
I really didn't know that people were so waiting for this story... makes me really happy and charged to finish writing!! 😊

😭😭 u didnt finish writing yet and wont update today😭😭

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Posted: 12 years ago
heya...read this whole story in a go...and i have instantly fallen in love with it...will u please send me Pms so i can read ur story :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hmm! I was about to write one week ova update kaha hain? But I read the posts so oki take your time :)I'm waiting! :D

Cheers
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow, wow, wow!


It was brilliant, my words pale in comparison, trying to write how much I loved this chapter but unable to find the words... I so so enjoyed this chapter, was smiling though out...it was such a feel good chapter, with everything in it!

But really the fun, the joy and the excitement that ran through this update was amazing.

I loved how she is so concerned about his fainting and how very rightfully she does not allow him to drive but instead decides to go on Dhanno. Loved how her innocence makes him look at her adoringly even the fact that she has named her scooter and introduces him to the scooter as though it was an important person in her life, makes him smile

I loved how Arnav very sportingly rides on Dhanno, realizing her expression of disappointment and hurt of his earlier reluctance and apprehension, and he would do anything to keep that smile on her face and so Arnav, who was used to all kinds of fancy vehicles, sports bikes of the latest models, for the first time in his life, deciding to go with the flow and the moment and ends up on Dhanno. And of course for that smile!

And his first time comment! Pun intended? Ha ha .but I like where this sentence takes her thoughts.and I loved how she knows exactly what he is up to , no fool is our Khushihaving noticed his smirks at the success of his plans.and love how she just indulges him and plays along! So perfectly suited are they..she knows that he faked his fainting and this Ashadan project was just an excusesmart girl! But she too, finding his excuses and him adorable goes ahead with her plan and decides it would be fun to get him to ride pillion on Dhanno, knowing or rather thinking that it would serve him right for trying to fool her, but I dont think she realized that he will give in and call her bluff so willingly, surprising her for sure. Making her wonder why he was doing what he was

And of course there was that chance of sitting close to her and touching her that was the cherry on the cake.loved how one touch a simple and innocent (hmm!) one, makes them both feel exuberant and aware of each other. I love how he curbs his desires of holding on to her knowing that it would not go down well with her respecting her background and her simplicity and with her he would not take any chances, he did not want to rush her and push her away with his forwardness.he was ready to take it slow. I love that he is so sensitive to her feelings. I loved how she is not oblivious to his touch and prays to DM realizing what havoc it was playing with her senses.

I loved his thoughtful at the choice of the restaurant he takes her to, not wanting to overwhelm her or intimidate her by taking her a fancy eatery where she might feel out of place. Wanting her to feel relaxed and at ease with him.

It was so sweet the way he decides to start with a neutral topic and talks about the project and the children with such passion.and I loved how he noticed that she is getting all emotional and stops to check if she is okay and she rewards him with telling her about herself, her life and her childhood, leaving him even more in awe of her and her spirit. I love how every little things about her thrills him and how she makes him feel and I really like that it is mutual.

I loved that even watching her eat he is mesmerized by her.and loved how the talking goes on, he genuinely interested in what she was saying.and the surrealism of the moment where the ASR is engaging so willingly in this mundane conversationhe is right he is a goner, this girl is going to make him do stuff that no one would expect or imaginejust being with her, watching her laugh was enough for him!

I loved how she tells him about her earlier perception of what she thought he was and then realizing the sadness in his voice, and also of coursing getting to see him up close and personal (Very) she knows that she has been wrong and I am glad she tells him and is equally tuned into him and sensitive to his feelings.relieving him!

Love how he teases her that they should keep meeting so she gets to know him betterand then publish an article on his innocence, not leaving out any chances here!

Love how time flies without either of them realizing, and she is so late for work, getting up to leave and offering to pay, and of course he not accepting it.love how they leave it at when the meet next time.I am waiting for that next time too!

Love how Sumer tapkos there, and is subjected to Arnavs wrath and irritation and love Arnavs jealousy and possessiveness.of his best friend, fearing that Khushi might get interested in Sumerseeing how excited Khushi gets to see Sumer and the great rapport they share.so strong are his feelings of his angel! A jealous Arnavhot! Hot! Hot! Love how he calls Khushi my girl.

But Sumer genuinely happy for Arnav just was teasing him about wanting to play cupid, but then realizing his interest and seriousness in Arnavs feelings for Khushi, which so far he has never felt for the numerous women he has met or dated.decides to get serious too and promises not to mess with him and keep his distance from her, much to our jealous angry lovers relief!


Ooh the precap.Mints UPDATE!

P.S- Love the dedication...! Love you too baby! And C you too!

P.P.S- I love the attention to details and how everything fits in so perfectly...

P.P P.S - I do love dal, but now you are my Biryani too!

Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Arnav stood speechless with shock,
At the yellow Vespa in the car Park.
He'd hoped to take Khushi out,
But about THIS, he had his doubt.
Her reasons, he could not question;
His weak state had got her attention.
Thus, introduced to Khushi's Dhanno,
He smiled, deciding to go with the flow.

Although Arnav loved bikes with a passion,
This scooter would be an aberration.
Trying to think of any excuse to avoid,
Getting on THAT scooter for a ride.
Not wanting to seem too snobbish,
He didn't want to go against her wish.
Then he saw her look of distress,
'Twas enough to make him say yes.

His words though, held a double entendre,
On which, Khushi could not but help ponder.
Wondering if the mighty Laad Governor,
Was actually openly flirting with her?
She had seen through his clever ruse,
The Ashadaan project was just his excuse.
Then shed known his faint was pretence,
He seemed to think her naive or dense.

He seemed so happy at having fooled her,
His plan it was to have lunch together.
She smiled inwardly at his obvious ploy,
She'd decided to go along and enjoy.
But Khushi had a bit of mischief in her too,
A scooter ride she would put him through.
Riding pillion would be an experience surely,
Unforgettable and unusual for ASR certainly.

The joke however was on both of them,
They'd not bargained for what was to come.
Sitting together in such close proximity,
Was playing havoc with their sanity.
His hand on her shoulder was pure torture,
As she felt several currents pass through her.
She barely could focus on driving safely,
While they sped through the streets of Delhi.
She felt every jerk and every jolt on the ride,
Especially with her back, when he did collide.

To Arnav, this ride was indeed, a revelation,
Sitting so close heightened their attraction.
Dhanno definitely was proving very worthy,
Much more so, than his splendid Ferrari.
Not wanting to scare Khushi off, however,
Lunch at a local cafe, he suggested to her.
Hoping to make her comfortable with him,
He escorted her into the cool confines within.

Lunch together had been a wonderful idea,
They'd exchanged so much personal trivia.
Khushi saw the reality of this young man,
Hiding behind the facade of wealth and elan.
Arnav discovered her unending appetite for food,
And also heard the story of her lonely childhood.
There was a feeling of mutual sympathy,
Leading slowly to understanding and empathy.
It was a time for happy, carefree laughter,
Filled with sounds of their merry chatter.

All too soon, it was time for her to go,
A squabble over the bill did then follow.
Khushi letting him settle the bill finally,
She promised to pay the next time surely.
Her words were like music to his ears,
Putting aside every one of Arnavs fears.
Hope it gave him to see her once again,
His joy at this, he could barely contain.

Once more sitting pillion on the scooter ,
When he heard a voice, oh-so-familiar.
Sumer stood looking at them in shock,
Arnav froze, sitting still as a rock.
He looked at Sumer bursting with amusement,
Who now chatted with Khushi in merriment.
Arnav was irritated by their easy banter,
Was he getting jealous of best pal, Sumer?

Khushi went off on her scooter all alone,
Sumer driving Arnav to the parking zone.
A few jokes he cracked at Arnavs expense,
Until he saw that Arnav was really tense.
Sumer assured him he would not interfere,
From him, Arnav had simply nothing to fear.
Amused Sumer was, at Arnavs jealousy,
This meant that he was taking this seriously.
His promise managed to restore the peace,
The tension between them did then decrease.
Thus, discussing business and matters mundane,
To collect Arnavs car, they drove to Ashadaan.
Edited by chitrajay - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Finally u updated it😡😡
U knw na i love dis story 😭
Loll a dncng arnav is always a treat to watch and here his Angel agreed for lunch wid him dis would be a only a life tym oppurtunity for him 😆😆 And much to his unexpectation he couldnt drive 🤣 loll bcz of his fainting drama but dat also soon turned a treat for him hehehe yeaahh bcz he was seating so near to his Angel wich a suv cnnt prvd hayeee the sudden break arnav jumping on khushi and the elctric current passing btwn dem was so awesome it feels lyk i m reliving ipkknd wid dis series 😊😊
First tym yeaahhh Khushi kumari gupta bought every first tym in arnav life 😉😉
He cares abt her so much mannn he is truly head over hels in love wid khushi
His cte angel was to be the end of him 🤣 🤣
I m so hapiee she finally said her a lilttle past to arnav so dat he could knw her better 😳😳
Awww the silent admiration was so cute and superb i was soo happy reading iit 😃😃 Arnav watching his Angel 😛
Finally khushi asked arnav about his lifestyle telling only dat she have read only on magzines and tv and dis surprised arnav loll dis angel think like at him 😆😆
Urgghhh sumer why no
Par it was fun reading it bcz it made arnav more jealous watching his angel talking to his best freind so freely and happily 😆😆


Eeeksss damn intresting precap and u took a break dii 😡😡 wrng tym diii not done come back
Edited by Barun_Gf - 12 years ago
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Loved it, Mints. It was so light-hearted and as always, beautifully written.😊

Arnav thought he was taking her for a ride, but she literally was.😆. Loved the fact that she saw through his little trick. ASR on a scooty was a brilliant idea, Khushi.👏

Loved their first date. Arnav talks of Ashaadan not realising Khushi grew up there too. Loved how proud she is of where she came from. She doesn't see the need to hide the fact that she came from reduced circumstances. Love her for that. She also tells him quite frankly what she thought of him...and how her views had changed, which understandably pleases Arnav.

Finally they both are comfortable in each other's presence. Some of the guards are down.

The only thing Arnav remembered from their chatter, was that she had said there would be a next time... 'They would discuss the details of the project next time. She would pay for their lunch, coffee or dinner the next time.' There would surely be a next time! This thought thrilled him,
My favourite lines from this one. His heart dancing in joy when he hears her say ' the next time'.

And poor Arnav! What he dreaded actually happens!😆
Sumer sees him on a scooty.

Loved their conversation...The guy doesn't seem to entirely trust his friend. Sumer must be a very big flirt then.😛

The precap is quite interesting. Can't wait to read more.😊
Will wait for your return from holidays.
Edited by Afya - 12 years ago

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