Arhi FF : Peek-a-boo #1 [ Completed ] - Page 15

Originally posted by: crazy-ash

wow! this is beautiful!

literally! i wont be lying if i say i m already head over heels for this ASR!!😆

and really REALLY lookin forward for the next chap!!!

thanx for the happy reading moment and the pm!

Originally posted by: marleylerner

And enters KKG with a bang! As always. Loved her character and the description of her life. That's the essence of khushi-never back down. And of course the dhak-dhak begins the moment she lays eyes on Arnav. The scene with the little girl was so cute

So hopefully next chapter they come face to face? Waiting to find out...

Thanks for a great update😊

Originally posted by: 1chilly

How I love your stories! Ill always be grateful to Vandy for recommending your work to me.

This story is just my kind of romance.

I am a diehard fan of Shahrukh and his romantic films and this story tzkes me to that dreamland where the hero sees the girl and falls for her at first sight. Haay!

I loved it when Khushi fought with the car owner and got the money or her headlight out of him.

And hen she saw Arnav for the first time. I could actually picture the scene as though I was part of it.

This is the strength of your writing. You make the reader part of your story. I feel the same emotions as your characters.

I have a feeling this is going to be among my favourite Arshi romance. Just love it.

Waiting eagerly for the next update.

And thankyou so much for the special mention. Gives me such pleasure.

Originally posted by: Afya

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What a beautiful introduction to Khushi and her first impression of Arnav! 👏. I was an avid reader a decade ago, Mints but as life got busy, never got time to read. Now, reading your stories gives me the same pleasure. You write so beautifully!

I loved how you started with the description of Chandni chowk and its streets. You transport your reader to the streets right there.😃

Love your Khushi...Love how she wants to give back to the Ashram that fed her. And yet feels free to pursue her dream...of writing😉

Loved Payal as her friend. When one has such good friends such as Payal and Akash, who needs family?

So, in your story she is Sharukh's fan?😆. Salman's archrival!

Loved 'dhanno'.😛 That's uber cute! Loved how she got the guy who was at fault to pay for his mistake, not deterred by the crowd that had gathered.

And haye! She sees Arnav Singh Raizada and is bowled over by him! Who wouldn't?😳

Mints, You are such a superb writer. I am so happy I get to read your works.😊

Originally posted by: PhenoixTears

Wow amazing update mints and thank you so much for mentioning my name. Its actually my pleasure to appreciate all your effort and these wonderful stories you write. First chapter was all about Arnav and this one introduced us to Khushi and what a wonderful introduction to both of them! Even though it showed the sharp contrast of their life and how they differ like chalk & cheese in terms of social status, still they are two individuals who are happy in their life and love the people around them. Love the way you wrote Khushi's reaction after seeing Arnav for the first time, she was completely spellbound and awestruck. You know one can sketch Arnav's picture by reading the description of Arnav you gave by Khushi's point of view. Fantastic chapter, exceptionally well written and I loved it. Eagerly waiting for next now, continue soon 😊

And I loved the poem by Chitra, I dont know how she wrote whole chapter in such rhyming as well as poetic ways, you are immensely talented yaar! Superb!

Originally posted by: _disha_

Awww... awww.. and a little bit more awww !!! I dont think i am done awwing yet !😆

[YOUTUBE]http://youtube.com/watch?v=Ykk0BExvBYc[/YOUTUBE]

Originally posted by: Angel2001

Oh I can totally imagine Arnav giving a thousand watt smile and increasing Khushi's dhak-dhak's all the way more! ;)

I liked the way you've described Khushi

Great going :)

Ps: can't wait for both of them to interact

Originally posted by: SPraba

OMG MINTS THAT WAS AN AWESOME UPDATE. YOU HAVE KEPT US ON OUR TOES. CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATES. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. AM GOING TO PESTER U TILL U GIVE US THE NEXT UPDATE. PERFECT DESRIPTION OF KHUSHI AND THEN HER DHAK DHAK. WELL I AM EXCITED. THANKS FOR THE PM DEAR.