*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11 - Page 98

Originally posted by: ranogill

i started to read your story today...i can only say one word... beautiful

reading your story this weekend. Thank you for keeping me distracted and happy-- I really needed it right now.

its wonderful!

You are an amazing writer dear Wiwy,
From the first part till the 11th all were very beautifully written.
Arnav is same but with different exercise...
Their first meeting ...
The bed was in very bad condition..lol...aur woh bhi without playing cricketwa...
The dizziness she felt...
He was enjoying...
The first laughter they shared after that bed fiasco...
The second meeting...
At RM the pool side and the first kiss...
Mamaji n Mamiji are back...I think they are going to be a problem.
Mr Aman, interestin
g character...very helpful person for both siblings .
Oh Shyam and the mention of Shyam Babua was in very much gussa...
I think he is already possessive for Khushi...
Poor girl, when will she realize the true Color of him? NK has soft corner for Khushi..hmmm.and the second kiss...
Anjali ne toh apni aurse kaam kar dikhaya...Ms. La ke baarein mai Jo kaha..
Phirse ladai...n ...the accident...
The rain...the hug...
By the way...you have woven all the dialogs very beautifully...

Thanks a lot...
It's time to read further...

Lol really good update 

I read all the 11 chapters togther!! So beautifully written !!

i just started reading ur story... its amazing... wow...

hehehe I must admit when I read the title something else came in mind but all that flew out the window the minute I read the first chapter...def bookmarking

bookmarking😛
I will post detailed comment SOON😳

Was going through some old comments. Emotional...😳 and joyful 😃 feelings...

Edited by wiwy - 10 years ago