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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww ...  that was a wonderful update😳.
Read it twice already😆!
Your description of the place where Manveer were staying was beautiful ...  I would love to visit a place like that.
Uday teasing Manyata about Jai , got him the desired result😉  ...  and Manyata tuned in her adventurous side😆!
Now ...  is Uday really having breathing hassles or is he pretending😕?
(I'd bank on PRETENDING😉) ...  and I'm sure Manyata would discover THAT once her mouth covers his whilst administering CPR😉!!!
It was a lovely update ... (which I wished was longer😳).
Do continue soon,
thanks for the PM😊.
 
 
PS - Thanks for taking the decision of posting your updates  ONLY in English😃  ( my Hindi is rather weak😆).
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Posted: 10 years ago
Vibha where is dis place matheran.never ever heard about such a hill station.

den very cute update.really uv is ill or another prank of his. seems like a prank. hehe manyata doing cpr to revive uv.

wanna to read further.conttinue soon.thank u so much for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice lovely update di...
Thanks fr pm n update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey.. Vibha..
The chappy was amazing..
Tanya is a sweet girl..
And I am happy that she loves Kabir...
Chalo ab usko bhi koi mil gaya..
He would not be left alone..
Manyata's bungee jumping fear was sweet..
And Uday convincing her by making her jealous was even more sweeter...
But I hope Uday becomes fine soon..
Afcourse woh toh ho hi jayega..
She is giving her a kiss...
Sorry sorry... she is just helping him as a stranger...😉
Update soon..
And thanx for the PM..
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update dear, loved it
& sorry for short comment,
as i'm not feeling well
i hope u understand
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Posted: 10 years ago
heyy,the place is really beautiful!!!!! loved the taniya and kabir part😊 aha,mnyata is jealouss😉 bunjee jumping gr888👏👏 udayy,i guess he is faking it to scare her😉😉 plzz do update soon,will be waitng😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Cute update as well 😊

But I think Uday is not at all unwell 😆

He is doing this on purpose to have more fun with Manyata..isn't it? 😉

"sure my lady..your one n only hubby at your service, i will never let you go" 

Sweetest line from the update...😊

I love the change of your writing patteren

Though I am managing Hindi but still I feel comfortable reading the whole story in English 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
Whoa.😊 A really nice update.😃 A sweet one.😃
I wish Tanya can help Kabir.
Uday Manyata scene was really sweet.😊
Thanks a lot for the PM and please update soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Its very nice part... Continue soon... Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update...loved it...manveer scene was awesome...is uday really in danger...i think he must be acted...omg manyata going to kiss him...i think tanya starts fall for kabir...thanks for pm...