MSNT ~~thread 2~~ UPDATE on pg148part99 KITNA DISTRB KAR RHE HO - Page 23

as usual very good and very romantic, itna romance aap kahan se laate hain, hayyy! is romance pe main toh fida ho jati hoon, Ram apne naughtyness se baaz nahi aate hain, aur Priya bhi ek mauka nahi chhodti hain, good one, plz continue ASAP, do PM me next time

Originally posted by: shamavi

haila veena maate kya update dii ho aap😳

achha alga raya ko raya ke rroop mein dekkar

continue soon😳

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

as usual very good and very romantic, itna romance aap kahan se laate hain, hayyy! is romance pe main toh fida ho jati hoon, Ram apne naughtyness se baaz nahi aate hain, aur Priya bhi ek mauka nahi chhodti hain, good one, plz continue ASAP, do PM me next time

Hi...aayi m...lol..actully na main aane wali nhi thi...qki mera ek bht bada problm h main balh ki bate thodi seriously le leti hu kabhi kabhi qki m bade dil se ye serial dekhti hu aur shayad isiliye mujhe har hal me bade achhe lagte hain...aur aajkl public ne bht deemag khrab kar rakha h...mujhko samjh nhi ata h ki jab cheeze hazam nhi hoti hain to log khane kyun baithte hain..aur public hamesha ye kyun bhul jati h ki serial bnane wale to aise hi bnayege apko nhi dekhna h to channl change karo ...top k serial aate hain...diya aur bati...sarswatichandra...aur pta nhi kya kya...wo dekho...q dekh kar aur phir serial ka mazak bnate hain log...mazak m bhi bnati hu...lekin m kabhi nhi kehti ki bade bore lagte hain ya bade bekar lagte hain...ya m nhi dekhungi...khair...meri ek isse bhi badi problm h ki m dekhe bina bhi nhi rh sakti aur bole bina bhi nhi rh sakti...qki evntully mujhe kuchh na kuchh to mil hi jata h bakwas karne k liye bhi aur imagine karne k liye bhi...aajkl mujhe sabse bura lagta h jab log kisi ko appriciate karne ki bajay humiliate karte hain...anchal ki burai karne se anchal ka talent thode hi khtm ho jayega...use to jahan kam milega wha karegi hi...aur anchal ki jagah koi bhi ata to wo amrita ko nhi match kar sakta h...par iska ye mtlb nhi h ki anchal ko galiya di jaye...ab jo serial me ho gya h uske bad peehu chahe jitni bhi bar badle iski to 100 % grnty h ki ab wo amrita kabhi nhi ho sakti...pr jo bhi hogi wo balh me aane k bad apne ap achhi ho jayegi qki bade achhe lagte hain...h...aur sakshi ram ki sangat me to har koi best ho jata h...& anchal i tell u only one thing always accept challenges & do ur best...duniya ki to adat h insan ko peechhe khinchne ki ye to insan ki himmat honi chahiye ki wo kaise inka samna karke age badh sakta h...waise bhi ye gana sirf sunne k liye nhi bna h..samjhne k liye bna h:..kuchh to log kahenge logo ko ka kam h kehna...bhai public agar bate nhi karegi to aap famous kaise honge...ek kahawat h ki jab log apke bare me bate kare tab samjhiye ki aap tarraki kar rhe hain...qki log apko notice kar rhe hain..so chill aur achhe se kam karo...aur han...public balh ko bht kuchh bna rhi h parwarish 2..& whatevr...chalo ye bat i accepted...pta h bhagwan ne do badi hi kamal ki cheeze bnayi h...duniya aur ghadi...dono gol h...jahan se shuru hoti h whi akar khtm hoti h...serial aur zindgi bhi waisi hi h...jahan se shuru hote hain ghumphir kar whi aa jate hain...anyways...balh parwarish hi kyun h...mujhe to wo kahani ka next season lag rha h...aur m itni inspire ho gyi ki leap k bad maine kahani ka shruti aur parvati wala pura episode ek bar phir se dekh dala..aur pta h main do cheeze bhi notice ki...dono me sirf itna fark tha ki usme itna jyada bharosa karti thi ki bharose se uski beti bigad gyi aur isme itna jyada daubt karti h ki usse bigad jayegi pr bigdegi to jarur tabhi to bachhe sudharo abhiyan chalega...obiously na...ab parents bane hain to aur kya karenge bhai..??..kheti to karenge nhi..bachhe hi to palenge...aur romance hi karna tha jindgi bhar to shadi hi nhi karni chahiye thi qki shaadi hogi to barbadi bhi hogi aur abadi bhi hogi to kam badhenge bhi aur batenge bhi...to moral of the story ye h ki public decide kar le ki use chahiye kya??..agar morals dekhna h to dharmik serial dekhe...agr sirf entrtainment chahiye to ajkl ki pictrs dekhe qki usme sirf yhi hota h story to kuchh hoti nhi...aur agr moral entrtainment lesson sabka complete package dekhna h to bade achhe dekhe...qki sab kuchh dekhna achha hota h...aur hum is sawal ka jawab bhi dene layak ho sakte hain ki serial dekhte kyun ho tumlog??..to agr prwarish type ka to keh sakte hain na ki hamara serial sirf bachhe paida karna hi nhi seekhata palna bhi seekhata h...lol..i mean sirf entrtainment hi nhi deta lesson bhi deta h..  ..aur mere to serial dekhne ki aajkl aur bhi wajah mil gyi h...ek to aajkl meri priya bat bat me meri trh kehna seekh gyi h ki bade achhe lagte hain...dusre cvs ne mujhe thoda seriously lete hue mera vm bhi dikha diya..teesre mere subject psychology ko bhi ghusa diya to litrally m to ajkl serial dekh k ud rhi hu...duniya kya karti h mujhe fark nhi padta mujhe jo kehna hota h keh leti hu koi sune ya na sune...aur mujhe jo dekhna hota h wo m dekhti hi hu...koi dekhe ya na dekhe...khair mujhe pta h dekhte sabhi hain bas faltu ka scene bnate rhte hain nhi dekhne ka...khair back on track..dekho mujhe kuchh sochne k liye na bas ek line ki jarurat hoti h...mtlb bas mujhe chingari mil jaye aag to m khud hi laga dungi...au mujhe wo chingari mil gyi precap yar...ab usme ek line mil gyi ki ram muh se priya ne itne dino se priya nhi suna...ab dekho meri glti nhi h han...serial walo ne khud ne mujhe chheda h to main to chali rambabu se priya ka nam bulwane ab is nam bulane ki rasm me kuchh ovr ho jaye to dnt blame me...maine socha to nhi tha ki m after leap k bad bhi koi update dungi...pr jaise bade achhe ka nam hi bade achhe rakh diya h to wo bade achhe hi lagte rhenge...waise hi...jab iska nam hi maine socha na tha rakh diya h to chahe jitna bhi sochu...atlast karungi to whi jo maine socha na tha...to chale nam bulwane...??...rambabu ko bada shaukh h na apna nam priya k muh se sunne ka ab priya ko bhi shaukh ho gya h...to rambabu b ready..& han please try to do somthing diffrent ok...  qki public aajkl bht khisiyayi hui h serial k sath sath ise bhi padhna band kar diya na...to mera khun aur kam ho jayega...qki phir m apni bhadas kahan nikalungi yar...badi mushkil se adha kilo wajan badha h..to m ekta ki trh public ko bore karne ka risk nhi le sakti...use to trp chahiye pr mujhe to pyar chahiye yar...ufff...ktna lamba likh dala..ab updates me kya likhegi bewkuf ladki hattt...

Part 69

"o teri to tumhara kya hoga??"

last update main rampriya k pyar par chhodi thi aur aaj bhi unke pyar se hi shuru karungi...to aplog man lijiye...anyhow leap ho gya...priya ghar ki jimmedariyo me busy rambabu office ki...phir dono ekdusre k sath manage kar rhe hain...but evntually h to pati patni...to insan apna pyar badal sakta h apni nafrat badal sakta h par apni fitrat kaise badle yar...to indono ke rishte ki khubi hi inka ladna jhagdna h wo na ho to maza khtm ho jata h to chahe kitni bhi samjhdari kyun na dikhaye ye pr jab tak bachpna nhi karenge inka aur hamara dono ka pet nhi bharega...to rambabu priya pihu ko surprise dene pahonch jate h...rambabu ko achanak dekh kar priya shock ho jati wha to kuchh nhi kehti h par andr h to sahi bht kuchh jo use kehna h...aur phir dar bhi to gyi thi ki akele bachho ko pal rhi h bachhe kuchh bhi karenge to sara blame to uspr hi ayega...sabhi kafi enjoy karte hain priya wha to kuchh nhi bolti h..even ghar aake to bilkul hi kuchh nhi bolti h...to rambabu ko lag hi jata h ki madm ka mood garam h...wo bat karne ki koshis karta h priya ignore karne ki koshish karti h...finally rambabu thoda laudly bolte hain...

Ram...priyaaa..kya h yar???abhi to sab kuchh theek thak tha...achanak kya ho gya??..

Priya...achanak kuchh nhi hua h...aur apko to theek thak hi lagega...jab apko char char bachhe akele palne ho to tab na pata chale...

Ram...are yar tum itna gussa kyun ho rhi ho...?? Bachho ne kuchh kiya kya?? 

Priya...bachhe kya karenge aur bachhe kyun karenge???..aapne kabhi socha h bachho k bare me...kabhi dekha h ki wo kya karte hain kya nhi??

Ram...are yar to kam hi kar rha hu...bachho k liye..

Priya...whi to...kam hi karte rahiye jindgi bhar...bas kam hi sab kuchh h...ghar pariwar bachhe kuchh nhi sirf kam...h na

ram...are yaarr

priya...please mr.kapoor mujhe lagta h jindgi me aur kuchh rh hi nhi gya h...main bachhe pal rhi hu aap kam kar rhe hain hamari life bas yhi reh gyi h

ram...to isme kya burai h...??..aur isme itna bhadkne wali kya bat h??

Priya...main apko kuchh bol hi kyun rhi hu??..apko to kuchh fark hi nhi padta h mujhe to lagta h main bas is ghar me ma ban k rh gyi hu...mujhe to sirf do hi cheeze sunayi deti h...ya to mrs.kapoor ya ma..qki meri khud ki to koi pehchan rh hi nhi gyi qki mujhe priya kehne wale insan k pas to mere liye waqt hi nhi rh gya...

Ram...priyaaa

priya...oh wow apko mera nam yad h main to bhul gyi thi??..qki m to apna nam ab sunti hi nhi hu...apko yad h last time apne mera nam kab liya tha???..

Ram priya ko dekhta rhta h...wo bolti ja rhi hoti h gusse se lal hoti ja rhi h...wo priya k pas ata h...aur use pakadta h...

Ram...sshh..achha sant ho jao...i am sorry ki maine itne dino se tumhara nam nhi liya...actully...u told me...main exactly kitne dino se tumhara nam nhi liya???

Priya...mtlb???

Ram...are tumko yhi problm h na ki koi...i mean m tumhe priya nhi kehta hu...theek h to main aaj sab din k badle tumko priya kahunga...btao...exactly maine kitne dino se maine tumhe priya nhi bola...??

Priya...mr.kapoor..

Ram...are yar bolo na

priya...pta nhi...mera deemag bht khrab h aur mat khrab kariye main ja rhi hu...

Ram...pehle bta do..phir chali jana

priya...ufff...kya h ye...pta nhi...shayad 6 mahine pehle bola hoga...

Ram...o teri..tumhara kya hoga??

Priya...kyun??? Dar gye itne dino ka badla kaise chukayenge???

Ram...han dar to gya par apne liye nhi tumhare liye

priya...mere liye??

Ram...han...tum handle kar paogi ??

Ram priya k forehead k corner pr kiss karta h aur kehta h...priya...priya uski trf dekhne lagti h...

Priya...mr.kapoor kya kar rhe hain??

Ram...tumhara nam le rha hu...(ram phir se priya ko kiss karta h aur uska nam leta h...jitni bar uska nam leta h utni bar alag alg jagah kiss karta h...kabhi forehead par kabhi gardan pr kabhi cheek par)

priya...mr.kapoor ...koi dekh lega bachhe aa jayenge pls...

Ram...kamal h yar...abhi tak keh rhi thi ki main tumhara nam nhi leta ab le rha hu to lene nhi de rhi ho...abhi to sirf 10 hi bar hue h...6 mahin me 182 din hote hain...182 dino me kitne ghante kitne minut kitne sec kitne pal hote hain...aur meri sanse to har pal tumhara nam leti rhti h...to 6 mahine ka hisab karne me...6 mahine aur lagenge...aur mujhe aise hi tumhara nam bulate rhna padega..

Priya ram ki taraf dekhti h..aur muskurane lagti h...

Ram...nhiii...mujhe koi problm nhi h...agar tum 6 mahino tak apne bachho k bina rh sakti ho to main ye continue karu???

Priya...mr.kapoor...aap hamesha aise hi karte hain..har bat ko bas hasi me uda dete hain...mere bare me kabhi nhi sochte na...

Ram...ye galt bat h yar..tum bhi to bachho m itni busy rhti ho...jab bhi m aata hu to kabhi khus kabhi pihu kabhi koi kabhi koi...tumne kab meri dhadkane sunne ki koshis ki??..karti to pta chalta ki meri har dhadkan tumhara nam leti h...lekin mujhe to lagta h tum hi nahi yad karti...

Ths part was too awesome...

Contn soon...

after many days u have update 

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Baap re baaap itna sara pravachan. Jai ho veena maate. Maine to saans rok ke poora pravachan padh liya. Baap re ekta aur CVS ki , aanchal ko if ke readers ko , aap ke update readers ko bhi bade acche se Suna diya. Chalo iske baad agar aap kI khoon ki maatra badh gayi ho to congratulations..jai veena maate. Aapse koi nahi jeet sakta.

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Thank u veena.

Veenananda ,aapki gyanopashid ke liye dhanyawad.

🤣 jitna logo ko padha aaj sari frustration nikal di..
Hats off to u veena badhaas bhi kitni ache se likhi hai sabko dho dala ache se.. 👏 iss bar sabki laga di ek sath.. 😆 😆
Mujhe niche scroll karke dekhna pada ki update kab shuru hai par puri baat padhe bagar niche nhi ayi mein... 😛 😆

Kya baat hai apki ff ke Ram babu bahot hi romantic hote ja rhe hai.. 😉
Acha idea hai biwi ko manane ka bhi or sari kami puri karne ka bhi.. Lage raho😆 Par ram babu tabhi action mode mein aate hai jab priya garajti hai...lol

Iss baar toh mera comment bhi tumhari bhadas ke liye zyada lamba hai update se.. 😲 😆
Chalo bahot sara pyaar hamari taraf se taki tum khush raho or tumhara khoon or wajan dono badh jaye.. 🤗Edited by vironikajain - 10 years ago