Surprising Poetic Corner: Silent Sun-quake - Page 45

superb...deep,  depth

Originally posted by: daydreamer...

ab aap hi batao main aapki tareef ke liye konse words use karoon...jitne mujhe aate they voh sab toh maion use kar chuki...😆

amazing poem...very subtle in form but firm in its message...loved it...👏

Chahe Har Pal

Akhain job ho nam...
Kesh job ho kaliyaan jaise
jo alangan korna chahe...
woh manav ko nehi!!
woh ehesaas ko...
Aur jina chahe har pal...
Har pal...dil ki saari bateen batake

 

Originally posted by: Niaksharma

Superb poems dear...
Fab...
Thanks for pm...
Liked them very much...

welcome dear⭐️

amazing. ..
love it...
awesome. ..

Beg alms like all royal things
They're short-lived just as
well.
In the era of evolution- Impulse & emotion remains unchanged!!

Insightful lines and very deep :)

awesome as usual...!!! <3

One more blast..Just loved it..Talks of jupiter..

Each line amazingly and perfectly written..

Great work

Thanx for PM

Prateek
 

It was a very beautiful poem!!!

amazing👏 👏 👏

Its awesome...