FF - Till death do us apart ,chapter 15(pg 42) - Page 3

Very nice.

page 3 is shining with this chapter.
first there is Meera struggles to survive . good discription indeed . I felt in that forest at night 😕

then comes our hiro . Why is he in a hurry ? thank God he stops the jeep in the right moment . I thought he is going to hit her and they spend a month in a hospital 🤢

now I wish the jeep won't move again 😉 Edited by awida - 10 years ago

Saba .. I think if you post this chapter in new post it will get the attintion of all of us.

😛 Nice one Saba...Labu the last part 😉  Edited by SahanaG - 10 years ago

Originally posted by: awida

Saba .. I think if you post this chapter in new post it will get the attintion of all of us.

Originally posted by: SahanaG

😛 Nice one Saba...Lubu the last part 😉 

Saba!

Awesomeness! My only complaint- Its too short :( please oh please write longer chapters if you can; FFs are the only respite when the serial is going through a difficult phase.

I loved every bit of it...great job!

Its just incredible saba! 👏 👏 👏 The last  part was soo filled with emotions..loved it..

Awesome Saba! 😃 👏 👏 thank you for continuing wid dis FF! 🤗
Nd yes I'd ask for 1 small change only-MAKE THE CHAPTERS LONGER!!! 😉 nd loved da last part specially...wish our Arjun nd Meera met in a similar fashion...
And da next chapter is full of so many possibilities... sth better think of dan da
Crap episodes dese days...
So thank you Saba! 😛

Originally posted by: monalika

Saba!

Awesomeness! My only complaint- Its too short :( please oh please write longer chapters if you can; FFs are the only respite when the serial is going through a difficult phase.

I loved every bit of it...great job!

Thanks mona, I am so glad you liked it 😃

Originally posted by: SuperChillz1

<font size="2" color="#cc3333">Its just incredible saba!👏👏👏The last part was soo filled with emotions..loved it..</font>

<font size="2" color="#cc3333">Your way of expressing feelings in characters is amazing.😊</font>

<font size="2" color="#cc3333">Update soon and PM me when you do😊😊😊</font>

That's too much for a first time writer, itna tarif mat Karo guys , I have to write more chapters also but I am so so overwhelmed by your comments, thanks for liking it this much 🤗