ARSHI FF: HOPE IN RAIN-A STORY OF PASSION, LINK TO THREAD 2{page 138} - Page 5

Intro was reeealy cute. But felt like you are rushing it. Just stop, take a breath and write more slowly.

khushi is really cute n bubbly..

Originally posted by: sanluvug

interesting start.
kushi is purely  sankadevi  in this part.loved their family bonding.
thanks for pm

thnx

Originally posted by: aruni50218

Intro was reeealy cute. But felt like you are rushing it. Just stop, take a breath and write more slowly.

First time effort 👏

thnx

Originally posted by: jisa

khushi is really cute n bubbly..

aww thnx😳

Thats a nice concept!

Ohh my my is dis ur 1st work ?? 😲 😲

Itz superb dear 👏 👍🏼

Soo Khushi having dis dream frm one month ☺️ ...hmmm interesting 😉...but why ??

Khushi family is soo caring 😳

Payal rocks here 😆

n she reached AR ...OMG ...nw Arnav will arrive ☺️☺️

Waiting eagerly dammit 😛 ...Do cont soon
Edited by crizal - 11 years ago

awesome start khushi is totally crazy and super cute and she is going to work at ar love it awesome start well done continue soon thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: kenny_Arhi

Thats a nice concept!

Would like to read more of this one!

Khushi is really crazy in this one🤣

And i love ur style of writing!

Thanks for the PM and do PM me😳

😆 😃 😛 😊 😉 thnx

loved it...