SS:Khud ko tere pass He ..no age of LV*COMPLETED* - Page 2

nice dear .please continue soon👏

Oye Hoye...
Title se pyaar hogaya...
Nice concept...
Loved it.
Jaldi continue karo.

amazing start piya :) loved it

amazing concept sweetu.

Very interesting dr but to small...
updates soon

Amazing.
Continue soon.

Pyaar kabhi bhi age ke hisab se nehi hota...

Pyaar to bass, yun hi ho jaate hai...

Aur 15 saal ke difference to kya hua? Ek dusre ko samjh ne ke liye age kabhi fact nehi hota...

Ek dusre ke sath dene se koi bhi fasla tey ho sakta hai...to ye age kya cheez hai?

Aur iss baat ki kya garuntee hai ke same age ke insaan ke sath shadi karne se hi koi khush rahega?

Very excellent concept aapi! Continu sooon!!!

PS: Arjun ji...Riya se puch hi lo!!!

thank u frs :-
NOTE:-
guys mere arjun ko etana old kyu bana diya yr..
riya bhi to young ho sakti hai..
Arjun age:-33
Riya:-18 now ok..


PART=2
Khud ko tere pass he paaten hai..(no age of true lv)

SCENCE-
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Arjun unwhere his feeling for his wife,
He stil thinking she lvs her ex bf..
Arjun stoped his suv outside his house,
(arjun opened door with his key)
he steped inside,
(door close kerne ke baad arjun coach per baid jaata hai)
he closed his eyes as wanna to give some realex himself..
.
(as he closed his eyes,the past memory comes in his mind)
.
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Scence shift:-The day of his marrige,
Ra-to ar-arrengemt kaphi achhi hain,
Arjun hv not interest so he didnt reply
Arjun n rathore just came here to attends riya's wedding,
(Riya ka sam or arjun se kya realation hai,jald he pata chal jayega so thoda saber karo)
(It was lv marrige)
Riya was very happy today,Finaly her dreams comes true
(riya apne room main ready ho rahi the or balki gher vale shadi ke tayari main lage the)

.
Riya's baba came near to sameer n arjun,
Sam n arjun:-congratulation mr roy..aaj to aap bahoot khush lag rahe hain,
.
Roy-khushi ke to baat hai,
ladki ke shadi jo hone bali hai,thank u so much jo aap dono apna kimati time nikal ker yahan aye,
.
Ate kyun nahi riya ke shadi jo the,
.
Roy-ye din bhi aap ke vajah se aya hai ,verna hame to umeed he jhud de the,

.
Ar-yeh to hamara pharj tha..
.
(All looks happy but very soon that happiness gonna be fad)

In marrige holl -all geust r gathered,
sam n arjun also sits their respective sits,
but arjun mind is going far away from there,
--
(loll fb main fb )
it was the day when arjun saw her first time,
It raining outside,arjun drive his suv on the road toward his house,
his car stoped in mid way

What the hell ye gady ko bhi abhi kharab hona tha,
i hate rain ,
(he bang his hand on door)muttered under his breath,
but on the other one girl is enjoying in the rain,
she roming here n there like a small kids n dancing in a rain..
Sudendly arjun graze fell on the girl,
He dont no that time why his heart wanna to saw her face..
he clean the window using his hand n looks outside the Suv..
She was like a buterfly which roming here n there..
he not able to saw her face
(Her face opposite yo him )
She opened her boths arms n looked up n start roung n round..
Ar-(In mind) i dont know why i wanna to saw her face,
she looks so..he didnt find the particular word,
He continusly admiring her beauty,
(its very odd for arjun but today his heart start betraying from him)
when she turned toward him..
he was memrised by her beauti..he cant off his eye,
He even didnt know when he opened door of his Suv
n comes out,
just wanna to saw her proper
.
(she joined her both palm n collect some water, n spread her face)
.
Arjun coudnt stoped his smile after saw her antics..
ek dam pagal hai ,bilkul pagal,
When she flashed her dimple smile..
Its imposible for arjun to take off his eyes from her,
.

he didnt know after fifteen years such a long time..
why his heart again feel happiness,
he snaaped out his thought when his mobile start ringing,
.
main yahan car se bahar(he was totaly wet bez of rain)
ye mujhe kya ho gaya tha,
he frustraed run his finger on his hair damm,
.
He turned n start repairing his car..
after few minute he heared her screeming..
Arjun imedeatly turned n saw two boys r trying to filart with her..
Boy-are baby barish main akele akale ..kaho to hum bhi..
One boy hold her hand..
n she protest but all vain..
.
Its rised arjun's anger.
how dare they tried to touch her,
Arjun moved




Edited by ll_piya_ll - 11 years ago

angerly toward them..
on the other..
Boys-hey babs..thats not fare akale akale..
Girl-just shut up otherwise its not god for u,
She rised her hand wanna to slaped them..
but one boy hold her hand ,n pulled her toward him..
she tring to free herself but all vain..
one boy rised his hand wanna to touched her face..
but some one hold his hand in mid..
1Boy feel pain..
Ahhh..
it was non other then arjun who hold his hand tightly,
N give one tight pounch on his face..
1Boy again creemed in pain..
Ahhh...
2-boy who hold that girl,
put one knife around her neck..
but arjun hold the sharp edges of knife..
its hurt arjun ,blood start drooped his hand,but he didnt care..
he pulled girl toward him,
she banged arjun broad chest..n almost lost her balanced,
for balancing herself she hold his shirt tightly..
.
Arjun give one kick n the boy fall on the ground..
.
(loll ap sab to achhe se chante hai ager arjun se pitenge to kya hoga..Both runs leaving behind arjun n that girl)
.
she stil holding arjun's shirt,
(not hugging)her eyes r closed..
On the other arjun's eyes fixed on her..
She looks like a kids..yes for him,she is to younger then him..may be 17 or18..
.
her wet cloths..showing all her curves ,she looks
perfect ..
even wet skin added more in her beauty,
After such a long time he again started to loosing his controled,
yes he didnt know what happening with him,
his eyes stil fixed on her,
.

he runs his hand on his hair..
(rain abhi bhi ho rahi hai or dono ek sath barish main bheeg rahe hain)
Ar-vo log jaa chuke hain,
(Very softly)
.
She opened her eyes n looked him..
Ar-(lost her eyes..her eyes hav a capability to lost someone in her eyes..)
Roshani ke jaane ke baad ,again his start started beating..
.
Thank u..she said(like sweet maledy)
arjun snaaped out his thought..




Edited by ll_piya_ll - 11 years ago