RaHi & Friends FF: Hum Mar Jayenge(Pt 15 on Pg 42)

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Dis is a combined work of me n Yusra😊.


Part 1

The buddies r outside Panchi's hospital room along wid Panchi's mom. Inside d room, Panchi opens her eyes n moves her finger. D nurse sees dis n comes out teln evry1 dat Panchi has regained consciousness. Her mom n buddies gets very happy. D nurse gets happy n says dat they can meet her. Except Ranveer, evry1 goes inside.

"Beta, tuje dard to nahi ho raha hai na?" asks Panchi's mom.

"Nahi mom," replies Panchi.

All d buddies hv a good time chatting wid Panchi.

"Aunty, aap hum sabka photo lijiye," said Juhi handing her her cell.

Panchi' mom is abt to take d photo butdoes not finds RV in d camera.

"Ranveer kaha hai?" asks Panchi's mom.

"Ranveer nahi aaya kya?" asks Panchi realizing dat RV is not around.

"Ranveer Janab ko hum bulaakar laate hai," said Samar n went out.

RV was  standing outside wid tears in his eyes.

"Janab, andar chaliye," said Samar.

"Main kya muh lekar andar jau?" asks RV wid tears in his eyes, "Maine jo uske saath kiya hai uske baad vo mujse nafrat karegi ."

"Janab, aisa kuch nahi hoga. Panchi Sahiba khud aapse milna chahti hai," said Samar wid a smile.

RV wipes his tears n goes wid Samar inside d room.

"Ranveer," says Panchi wid a smile.

RV goes n sits near her. He breaks down.

"Ranveer, rona band karo. Ab to main thik ho gayi huna," said Panchi n hugs RV.

RaHi sad music plays in d bg. Others go out to let them talk. Panchi also breaks down. They broke d hug n RV caress her cheeks.

'Bin Tere-Reprise' starts playing in d bg.

Teri nigaahon ke, teri hi raahon ke
Kareeb se gayi zindagi
Tujhe kyun dekha na, tujhe kyun jaana na
Shikayatein karun ya nahin
Thami hai yeh saansein, bari hai yeh aankhein
Sahu kaise ab yeh faasla
Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere
Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere
Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere
Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere

("Mere paas sirf tu hi hai. Kyu aayi tu beech me? Agar tuje kuch ho jaata tha to?" asks RV still in tears.

Panchi is abt to say sumthn but a doctor comes n says dat she needs rest.      

"Panchi, tu rest kar. Baad me baat karte hai. Main tere paas hi hu," says RV.

They wipes each other's tears.

RaHi stares @ each other.)                                         

"Panchi ne Ranveer ko maaf kar hi diya hai qki vo usse bilkul naraaz nahi hai," said Juhi.

"Sab kuch Ayesha k vajah se hua hai," said Piddhi.

"Humne unhe APC ki trophy bheek me di hai. Vo KD aur Ranveer ko use nahi kar paayi to usne humaara coin chheen liya KD k haath se," said Kiya.

"Humne, KD Janab aur Piddhi Janab ne Ayesha ki pungi baja hi di uske khaane me jamaal ghota milakar," said Samar n evry1 laughs.

"Par humaare saath cheating huvi hai. Ye trophy humaari honi chahiye thi," said KD.

"Right, mehnat tune kiya vo coin dhundne ka aur benefit unki team ne liya," said Bobby.

After 2 days, Panchi returns to RA but in d hall she gets surrounded by Ayesha n her team.

"Welcome back, Fatso," said Ayesha.

"Tumhe hum miss kar rahe the qki tum bhi loser gang se belong karti ho," said her bf.

Ayesha's team laughs around Panchi while she is getn upset. She tries to go but d boys comes in her way while d girls laughs. RV sees them n gets angry.

"Stop it," said RV angrily going near them.

"Ohhh, aa gaya iss fatso ka idiot hero," taunted Ayesha.

"Just shut up," said RV angrily, "Tumhaari vajah se maine Panchi ko bahot hurt kiya. Tumhaari vajah se Panchi ki ye haalat huvi hai. Tumne to muje Panchi k khilaaf b bahot bhadkaaya aur uska naam galti se b leta to tum bekaar me gussa ho jaati thi."

By dat time all d buddies came.

"Kya ho raha hai yaha?" asks Bobby.

"Ye sab muje tang kar rahe the fir RV aa gaya jab usne ye dekha," replied Panchi.

"Tum sab koi aur kaam nahi hai kya dusron ko tang karne k alaava?" asks KD annoyingly.

"Lagta hai tum bhool gaye ki maine tumhaara hi coin kaisa chheena tha jisse tumlog haar gaye," taunted Ayesha.

"Tum sabki yahi aukaat hai cheating karke jeetna," said Piddhi.

"Kiya ne sahi kaha tha ki humne tumhe APC trophy bheek me di hai. To tum sabko humaara thanks karna chahiye," said Juhi.

"Thanks aur tum losers ko? R u crazy?" asks Ayesha's bf n laughs.

"Kyu? Sach kadwa laga kya? Losers hum nahi tumlog ho. Pehle tumne KD ko rishwat dene ki koshish ki clue k iye fir Ayesha ne Ranveer se clue jaanne ki koshish aur tum dono ye sab karke fail ho gaye to cheating par aa gaye," said Kiya.

"Tumlog ye trophy deserve hi nahi karte aur tumhaare paas ye jo trophy hai na vo humaare vajah se hai. (poiting to Ayesha's bf) Tune team k faayda k liye apni girlfriend ko Ranveer k saath natak karne k liye kaha aur Ayesha Ranveer ko kiss tak karne jaa rahi bina koi sharam ke. Ye kaam sirf tum jaise fattu log ka hai," said Bobby.

"Mind ur language," shouted Ayesha.

"Pehle aap sab tameez se baat kijiye," said Samar, "Aap sab 1 ladki ko dekhkar use tang kar rahe ho bujhdilon ki tarah. Aap sab me itni himmat hai hi nahi aap sab hum sabka saamna thik se kar sako. Cheating se jeet aap sab ne iss baat ko saabit kar hi diya hai."

"Stop all dis fight," shouted a voice n all turned their aside to find JJ.

"Sir, ye sab humaari insult kar rahe hai," said Ayesha.

"Start tumne ki thi," said RV.

"Ranveer thik keh raha hai, Sir. Ye sab muje akela dekhkar tang kar rahe the," said Panchi teln him wat all happened.

"Sir, ye cheating se APC jeete hai," aid RV.

"Sir, ye jhoot bol raha hai," said Ayesha's bf.

"Maine sab sun liya hai. Tum sab ne cheating ki hai isliye tum sab disqualify kiye jaoge," said JJ.

"Wat?" said d Ayesha's 2gthr shockingly.

"Tum sab ne thik suna. Tum sab disqualify kar diye gaye ho to APC firse hoga aur tab fairly winners decide hoga," said JJ.

"Sir, aap aisa nahi kar sakte hai," said Ayesha.

"Dis is final," said JJ firmly n went 4m there.

After JJ goes, Ayesha's team gets angry for being disqualified n APC to be held again.

"Tum sab ne acchha nahi kiya hai," said Ayesha angrily.

"Humne kya kiya jab Jaitley Sir ne khud humaari baat sun li? By d way, cheating tumne ki hai aur APC jeetne k liye tumne kya kya kiya ye sab jaante hai," said Panchi in a serious tone.

"Shut up, u fatso," said Ayesha.

"U bloody out of shape figure. Tum kaunsi size zero ho? Ye tight-fitting clothes me tum weird lagti ho aur uppar se ye hafte bhar ka make-up 1 baar me karke jisme tum chudail lagti ho," said Kiya taunting her while her buddies laughed.

"Don't u dare insult my girlfriend," shouted Ayesha's bf showing a finger to Kiya.

RV puts his finger down n says, "Start teri girlfriend ne ki thi. APC firse hoga ye jaanne k baad tum sabki fat gayi hai qki tum sab fattu hai especially tu aur ye teri girlfriend."

"Guys, just stop it," shouted Panchi.

"Pehle tere iss hero aur baaki doston ko samjhaa ki apni had me rahe," said Ayesha's bf angrily while pressing her chin hard which pains her.

Panchi is scared n she hides behind RV while crying. RV is now fuming in anger seeing Panchi crying due to Ayesha's bf misbehaving wid her.

"Saale, teri himmat kaise huvi ki tune Panchi k saath battameezi ki," said RV angrily n slaps him.

Ayesha's bf also slaps him n they starts fighting. Panchi tries to stop d fight by cumn in between but Ayesha's bf pushes her n RV catches her before she was abt to fall on d floor n hit her head which was already injured. D buddy girls takes Panchi to their side. RV gets more angry n starts punching Ayesha's bf. D boys 4m both d teams hold them back to stop them 4m fighting anymore.

"Janab, shaant ho jaaiye," said Samar.

"Isne meri Panchi k saath battameezi ki aur use dhakka diya agar main nahi bachaata to Panchi ko aur chot lag sakta tha," said RV.

Panchi luks @ RV as he says all dis. RaHi happy music starts playing in d bg. RV also luks @ her n they stares @ each other for some time.

"Tum sab ne jo humaari insult ki hai uski keemat tum sabko chukaani padegi (pointing to Ranveer)khaas karke tu Ranveer aur teri ye heroine Panchi. U all r going to pay for all dis," said Ayesha's bf in anger.

D buddies luks @ him shocked.                                

"Apni bakwaas band kar," said Ranveer angrily.

"Ranveer, jaane de na. Bolne de use jo bolna hai," said Panchi to calm him.


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I am loving this concept..

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Start is great..

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Start is great..

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awesomeee start👏 Thank u😊
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hate this ayesha and her bf🤢 Me too🤢😡
continue soon😃
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