OS: Hero's Welcome | Madhubala

DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 10 years ago

What you are about to read is Donna Paulsen approved

OS: Hero's Welcome

The OS is now on my blog, just follow the link: http://storiesndreams.wordpress.com/2013/05/04/a-heros-welcome/

I hope you like it and please press the like button and leave your reviews, kind or otherwise there.

Thank you.

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Pritt B

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Posted: 10 years ago

That was one of the best OSs I've read in these forums.

Wow.

It was full of every emotion possible. Joy, fear, distress, sadness.

The beginning was so sweet and perfect and happy. It put a smile on my face and I was not expecting that end. Nearly put me to tears.

You sure know how to write well. You've got a talent, a gift, and I'm actually super glad I get to read your writing Jassu. You amaze me. No one will be able to ever compare to your writing and ideas.

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ElOqUeNcE

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awsom!! As always! Hats off to yr writing skils!!

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Sweety

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome.. Wrapped up in brutal reality, striking the blo*dy heart strings,making the heart feel tugged in wrenching pain..your stories are not for weak hearted ones😳

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetdear
Awesome.. Wrapped up in brutal reality, striking the blo*dy heart strings,making the heart feel tugged in wrenching pain..your stories are not for weak hearted ones😳

Thank you. That was a great compliment. I don't want to go all Bukowski on you but, the world is needs a rebirth; too much sadness and guilt traps to accept the wrongs for what they are. Okay, that was pretty emo.

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