FF Fake Nikkah or Real?update on pg. 31

I apologise in advanced if it is bad.

Fake Nikkah or Real:

Zoya stood in the middle of the room dressed in a dulhan ka jodra. she looked around the room, it was surround with candles and rose petals, and in the middle of the bed Red rose petal were spread in the shape of a Heart. Zoya thought to her self how did had she gotten here. Today she and Mr.khan had gotten married in front of all his family and appi and jiju. It was supposed to be a Fake Nikkah yet it felt as though it was real. 

Najma came frm behind " Bhabi come lets get you ready. Bhaijaan is coming". 

Asad dressed in a cream coloured sherwani was looking absolutly ravishing. As he made his way to his room, his heart was beating so rapidly as if he had just run a marathon. This was supposed to be a Fake Nikkah then why did it feel so Real?

He stopped outside the room. He didnt know if he was supposed to knock first then enter.

Zoya sat in the middle of the bed. The wait for Asad was making her insides feel jelly like. she could hear his footstep as he made his way to the room. then slowly slowly the door opened, she looked up from under her ghunghat, and the sight she saw made her throat dry and her heart beat 10 time faster.

Asad slowly stepped inside, the sight that caught his eyes made his knees weak. zoya sitting in the middle of his bed dressed in Red, his favourite colour. he eyes were only locked on zoya's. he slowly started walking towards her. he had only taken few steps when a shattering noise stopped him in his way. he looked around the room and saw that the whole room was adorned in candles and rose petals, and the shattering noise was a glass candle holder which was now shattered on the floor in millions on pieces.

ok guys there is more but i want u guys opinion.

i hope you guys like it then i will continue.

and im sorry if there are any mistakes. 😊

part 6 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3565422?pn=17 (edited)

Part 7 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/85094588�

Part 8 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3565422?pn=21

Part 9 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3565422?pn=25�

part 10 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/89707969

part 11 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3565422?pn=31

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