parde ke peeche hain kuch anoke riste3 pr-51,pg147 - Page 97

Really Lovely ending..."parda uth gaya raya ki zindagi se...nd mai parda gerra raha hu iss ff ka" really touchy lines...really miss ur ff...ple start a new ff asap..love thz ff..thank u :-)

I will wait for your next write up,

it was a wonderful update dear.and the finishing superb...love the happy ending and the part very much when priya's biological father also understood his fault.and plz write more .waiting for ur next ff.plzzz

Aww cant believe this is my last comment here ... loved the very very Happy ending ... nani ka drama ...sweet n short shaadi description ...bonding between Priya n Ayesha ...rohan neha vikram elements ... and of course RAya ..do pm me whenever you start another ... keep rocking ... 

lovely update👍🏼
raya beautiful journey of life with 4 kids 😳
rohan is so cute
but why are u ending it 😒😔
pl continue if possible 😊

thanks for all the lovable comments😊🤗

Hi hi u r crazy yaar char char bacche
Priya ko to bacche paida karne ka machine banaya tumne. Kuch zyada nahi hua. Ha ha
Sab ka patch up karwadiya kuch zyada hi fast forward hua hai.
Any ways thanks for entertaining us with wonderful writing.
I wish u r next ff should beat century. All the best.
Thank u.
Love u.

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Hi hi u r crazy yaar char char bacche
Priya ko to bacche paida karne ka machine banaya tumne. Kuch zyada nahi hua. Ha ha
Sab ka patch up karwadiya kuch zyada hi fast forward hua hai.
Any ways thanks for entertaining us with wonderful writing.
I wish u r next ff should beat century. All the best.
Thank u.
Love u.

hehee be happy sirf 4 hain daadi gave ashirwaad for 100😆

Originally posted by: shamavi

hehee be happy sirf 4 hain daadi gave ashirwaad for 100😆

Hi hi daadi ki ashirwad ka asar hai ye char bachhe.
When r u starting new one?

shams
start ur other ff soon