Arhi FF#9: Mind Games *Ch 13 pg1, NOTE pg35!* - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
Awesome
Loved it
Final rituals to flight to Japan
Salman khan movie
The kisses
The beautiful house in Japan
Khushi in lingerie seducing Arnav

Looking forward to volume 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Superb update. am not good in putting feelings into words zats why I gave short comments.but I can say I love your stories so much.am also glad u mention Mauritius bcoz its my country.waiting eagerly 4 MG vol 3.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
congrats 4 d new thread...great update...loved it...arshi honeymoon...house in japan is awesome...khushi arnav singh raizada...arnav wants 2 make khushi comfortable...brilliant update...der love,der passion...loved arshi... beautifully written...cant wait 4 MG vol 3... loved d surprise and precap...thanx 4 d pm...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
When I first saw your PM I was like PM from TINA impossible and than I was like OMG TINA update MG and I was jumping with joy.
The update was just amazing.
I love how it started with all their talking.
I love how they both were doing the mind talk the whole time.
Hahahaha Khuhsi saw him changing LOL.
Khushi is really in need for desire.
At the end when I thought that Arnav would be the one in need but it was all opposite and it was Khushi who giving him a little sleep and than she will wake him up to get more from him LOL.
The update was amazing and the whole time I was just...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Their passion is always at peak...can't gt enough of them...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Finally they are on their honeymoon !!!

Hope they have a really romantic and sexy one !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
amazing update..
ya plz update alternative update soon...& do pm me...
Omg precap is hottt...
update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Awesome update Tina !!!! Perfect ending to a wonderful story ... Will be eagerly waiting for the alternative ending in the blog !!!! Also the MG Volume 3 :) Atlast they are alone and on their honeymoon !!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
dis was super awesome 😊
waiting for vol 3 to start..n yeas precap 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You won't be spending the entire 3rd volume on their honeymoon, right? (Because I love your stories - they are different and entertaining...I don't want too much romance to kill the story :D)

Are you still going to show how Buaji doesn't love Khushi as much (Cause you mentioned how Buaji hugged Payal when the Raizadas said that it was Khushi's turn to enter the RM first)?

Good VM, but the song wasn't my type :D (Although I was able to see the MG scenes)

Good luck on your Shameless ebook! Let me know once its out. BTW, are you using a publisher to publish it or are you self publishing? I got approached for one of my stories - I still don't know what they saw in it (I think its all trash)- so I wanted to know if it is worthwhile to go into the whole publishing thing...let me know if you have any advice.
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