Originally posted by: Rarepearl
this was super cool Ankie! u're rite v all love da Mangalpur incident, though it makes us cry everytime but still, dats da only way v get to see our Asad wid his guards all crumbled n shattered, cox he cant take Zoe's pain. u've written an absolutely fantastic part. it's sad to see Asad going all crazy for her. I cud get da whole scene in front of me, it wud hav been hell for him widout Zoe. I hope da dr's save her, warna Zoe k saath Asad is gonna die too. giv a nice ending, just like v all want in QH.
love,
Nimra.
How i love Mangalpur, and how i love going back there 🤣 Thanks sweets, hope it was worth it 😳
Originally posted by: anoo67
do you have to ask so many questions at the end of the first part?now i will have to sit down and figure it all out right now or i will go crazy.or wait till your next update which will be soon i hope.btw, bahut mazaa aaya.
Ahaha! Intelligent! Yuppies wait for the next part thats all i can say 🤣
Originally posted by: loveQH
Loved it Ankie di!!! Aaj kuch zyaada hi mood mein ho!!! Its just Awesome!!! But cliffy!!! Chalo koi nahi, but you have to update fast! Thanks for the pm!!!
Nahii yaarro, i am always in mood. i just feel lazzie. 🤣
Thanks sweets, hopefully it was worth your time. 😳
Sure keep stalking meanwhile 🤣
Thanks sweets 😳
Thank you! 😳
Keep stalking! You soon may be gifted a new part 🤣 Thank you! 😊
Originally posted by: Asya6
Ankie didi if you don't continue this I'll either haunt you in your dreams or come and injure you (I won't kill you cause then who'll make us laugh and give us gutter memes and posts?).
So yes I want to you to continue this.
And please don't kill Zoe. I know you won't!
I'm sure this is your conspiracy as you've been planning it since a long time. Well you are lucky as you will get to meet Asad if you've planned it ;)
Ahhaha! Already you guys are still haunting me for my incomplete SS 😭 🤣
YEa yea yea it is all mine 🤣 ahhaha! Yeaa right i want him to kill me, he already has killed me, buss apne uss sexy sexy hatthon se ke baar afsdghagetyijagah, mujhe woh bhi Qubool hai! ☺️
Originally posted by: ASYA.INSHI
Ok yeah so I thought Id get there and be on page one..
Wrrank
Dammit stupid Netball training!😡
Awesome TS!!!! oh and remember what you commented on my FF Kambhakat Zindagi??
That you hate me for Cliffys!! 😆
Well at the moment, In my ff and your Ts, Zoya is in hospital, Asad is crying and shouting. Tanveer is a b***h... 🤣🤣🤣
Nice going!!!
And remember I will not update mine till you Update YOURSZ!
so keep Pming!!!
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE yours... 😆
This is known as Emotional attyachar 🥱
Update urs first cause i started a new one! 🤣
And we all love doing this isnt it? 😉
🤗
I so so sosososososooso love Mangalpur abb sabko pata hai! 🤣 Thanks sweets 😳 Hope you had a great bday 😳
Originally posted by: aditi061
I should have expected this only! You only know how to torture people!
Tell me one thing! Will the world crash down if you stop giving those cliff hangers?
Why are you hell bent to make me a heart patient at this tender age?
But no, all the highness cares about is torturing her readers!
Yeh galat baat hai!😭😭😭 jao mai ni comment karungi! pehle give me second part fir i will think of commenting!
All the time i get to hear. 'Ankie i love you, you know how to make people smile'
Trust me! 🤣 'Ankie go die' 'Ankie you are soo bad' 🤣 Now these comments make me feel soo good! ahahahah! this is what i am 🤣 Ahhaha, okay okay princess, i soon will update it just for your lengthy wala comment 🤗 😳
Originally posted by: shreya11mehra
u knq wat allah miyan ki kasam muje us magalpur k dahaad wale post k baad se yakeen th..paka wala k CVs jb track bnaege...pta nh...par Ankie to jaldi ye track bna degi...
bakhuda mere yakeen ki izzat rk li...
vaise very nice post...
ab yh end mat krna...varns huggy k jagah jutte chapple faikugi...
verrryyy nice update...
biggy hug darling🤗
🤗 Ehehehe, Ankie is soo predictable nay?! 🤣
Originally posted by: life4me
Hi Ankie I just love you for this. Beautiful piece of writing it touched my heart. You are an amazing writer.
Zoya has to survive because of her jahpana. Cant wait for more please update soon.
Thank you soo much sweets, it means lot to me, no i am not at all a good writer. i need to improve. nevertheless thank you soo much 🤗
Sure keep stalking 🤣
Originally posted by: risingsea101
You left me hanging...
Continue I wanna read more!
Beautiful TS
Guess what?
I loved loved loved loved loved loved(and so on) it🤗
Thanks for the PM Ankie and continue woman!
😆hehe,thanks
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Far! Seriously? You did?! and why there's only one post from you today? I so want that chocolate wala icecream, givmeee!! 🤣
Originally posted by: s120
Your love for the Mangalpuri Asad is totally reflected in this story 😆 Jokes apart, you've portrayed the emotions very well and its nicely written 👍🏼 But why a cliffhanger
Continue soon
Thanks sweets, i love emotions right. 😳 Thanks once again, Mangalpur is my fav track, i always trace back to it no matter what 🤣 Yupp keep stalking 🤣
Originally posted by: shonajain
Ankiee first of all standing ovation to ur writing and dear I LOVE YOU for dis seriously
it was stupendo fantabulously fantastic TS:):*:*
and yaar plzzz update kardo, sat-sun are already torture and den no updates is another...plzzz update kar do...meri puppy jaise face par rehem khao...:D;);)
Partner, where were u all these days? I missed u, and app mujhe ek shayari nahi sunaigi?! thank yo usoo much, aur meri bhaddi si writing ki itni tareef karne ke liye another tight wali hugy 🤗 😆
I would say, keep calm and read on, cause there's more to come 😆
Originally posted by: asya143
Luv u luv u luv u!!
It was so wonderful..👏
But I hate u for being such a cliif hanger😡
Continue it soon else I will die of Imagination only😉
LOL thanks sweets 😆
Thank you, keep stalking 🤣
Thanks Tintin. TS stands for Two shots, or sometimes even three shots 😳
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