Originally posted by: ForbiddenFruit
Res! Y m I evr not first! *pouts* running to read d chappie! Unres later!
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*gives a Happy Dent wala smile* aaahaaan! Cn life get any better dan dis? Me,my hot chocolate , n choco chip cookies...n an update frm jassu at 1:30 in d morning!
d'awww you make me blush
Sooo...m so friggin happy dat u did continue dis story!
blush again. merci
Dis part is e1 better dan first! First reason being...*blush tomato-red*...a half-naked Rk...n second reason...hell it just is bettr dan first part.
why thank you. I largely agree.
I love dat u bother to explain d rituals n customs n stuff in so much detail. Saves d bother of googling it.
hmmm good to know. it is hard work. this story is hard work. so much research.
Dis chaptr made me a little nostalgic. D whole hot -boiling- water -on poor poor rk -n creating a small River Nile in d kitchen scene w as sooo effing roflingly funny! (Shit ...I think I woke up Mom...I was laughing so hard) Anyways...I meant dat scene reminded me of my favorite couple
Arnav n khushi's chai-wala scene.
never saw that scene but I am glad I could help. okay, deep breaths.
hell, what are you doing eating at this hour?
And ...oh! How cn I forget? D going blank wen staring into his deep dark eyes stuff dat u put in dis chaptr! Given ur usual sarcastic style...m sorta surprised but happy dat der was a teensy weensy bit of mushiness in d chaptr!
when in rome😉
And lol! Madhu running lyk Road Runner away frm a half naked Rk...hahaha...guess dis incident is going to make d air thick wid awkwardness nw,huh?
maybe. he was the one who decided to grope her. he was the burning holes in her chest. I blame him😆
Flustered n wet Madhubala+ a half naked Rk= awkwardness explosion!
tots amaze!
P.S: oh shit...I didn't mean dis to b an essay! Yeah-hooo...do update dis soon! I likes dis ff! Bherrry much!
Awww🤗 will do.
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