tum jo aaye zindagi main baat bangayi virman ss

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys
scroll down for the story i wrote after a looong time.🤪hope u like it




manvi-a very cute bubbly girl who lives her life to the fullest.(like me) she loves her friends like hell.always supports them.she is an orphan


virat-copy paste of manvi cute handsome hooot looking guy.(drooling)(of course not he is all nia's)



KAHAANI SHURU




In a winter morning in mumbai there was an angel still on bed trying to get rid of her tiredness.

trrring!trrring! GOOD MORNING!AAPKI ALARM BACHUKI HAI AUR AAPKI TIME HOGAYI HAI OFFICE JAANE KAAA. that was her alarm.(she set her alarm like that. u know she's diff naa)


manvi-ufff! kya hai yaar ? teekse sone bina deti hai yeh alarmy.(she calls her alrm alarmy)ab uthi hoon.sone ka mood bhi gaya hai.

her phone rang. without seeing the caller id she picked it up.

manvi-heeelllooo(with a sleepy voice)

anamika-oye manvi ! kahaan pe hai tu ? teri show start honewali hai yaaar jaldi aaoo

manvi- abhi time kya hua hai ani

anamika- time? tum time poochrahiho/tum abhii tak sorahihai na/ mannu time 9 bajrahi hai aur tumhar show 10 bhaje shuru hogi jaldi kar

manvi-kya 9 baj rahi hai aaj toh main gayi kaam se. accha main phone rakti hoon tayaar hona hai mujhe bye bye byeee.(she kept the phone)

anamika - helloo hello !! phone rakdi yeh ladki bii naa badi badmaash hai.

manvi went jhatak to her washroom took a bathe had her breakfast and left for her office
around 9;45 she arrived . she got in her cabin.and prepared fo what she was going to say it was 9 55 by now.

anuj- manvi you are on air in 5 minutes . ready?

manvi- always.

anuj- great cool then ( he left the place)

it was almost time and anuj cam again

anuj- manvi you are on air in 5,4,3,2,1,and gooo



manvi-good morniiing mumbai.main hoon aap sab ki pyaari manvi.aur sunrahihai radio masti.and welcome to my show breakfast with mannu.main aap logon ki saath abse yaani ki subah 10 bhaje se duphai 12 bhajetak rehti as you all know and this is an information to those who dont.well hum shuru karte humara din ek bohot hi ache se song ke saath.sung by amit trivedi and written by swanand kirike here is for you a song from kai poche (she was singing the next line and then the song played) roote khwaaboon ko manalenge that is manja from kai po che
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JQq5q1ppNB0

manvi - hey guys welcome back to breakfast with manvi.hope u enjoyd th es song. well jaise ki aap jante hai ki main har subah ek topic pe baat karti hun aur aap ki bhi rayi poochti hun toh kyun na hum topic opinion shuru kare. toh teekhe aaj hum baat karenge pyaar ke barame. aapko jo bhi lagta hai pyaar ki barame toh please call to 88976 and tell us ur opinion.aur aap mujhse song dedicate karne keliye bhi kehsakte hain. toh isi baath pe ek gaana ho jaye.toh teek he sung by falak shabir and written by kumaar a song from i me aur main starring john abraham,chitrangada singh and prachi desai. sajnaaa ( she sang it )

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SmFPeepvPCs

manvi- welcome back.and jaisa ki maine aapko aaj ki topic batayi hai umeed hai ki aap mujhe batayenge apki opinion.aur yeh dekiye humara caller no 1 tayaar hai. hellooo.and welcome to breakfast with manvi.

person-hello manvi ji. my name is rohan

manvi- rohan . toh kya hai appki opinion pyaar ki baare main?

rohan- i love to love. mereliye pyaar ek aisi feeling hai jo life me ek hi baar ati hai.

manvi- waah waah.toh thank u rohan aapki opinion keliye. waise ek baat puchu/

rohan- agar mein naah kahu to kya app nahi puvhenge?

manvi- of course not main toh phir bhi puchoongi. so my sawaal to u is that have u ever fallen in love????

rohan-yaaar yeh kaisa sawal hai yaar manvi main apni papa ke saath khada hoon yaar.

manvi-hahahaha. ab aap mamma papa girlfriend yah biwi ki saath khade ho, jawab to aapko dena hi padega rohan jee.

rohan-abhi tak to nahi but i hope i will.

manvi-chaliye koi baath nahi try keejiye.bye rohan thanks a lot for calling.arey bhai ab woh ta rohan ka opinion ab aapka kya hai? arey opinion. chaliya jaldi se phone karke batayiye sirf 88976 pe. bhandi ka naam hai manvi aur aapke liye pesh hai 2 super romantic gaane woh bhi back 2 back

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bVC2Tn3GbvE

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TsEp59EMtOs




aaaj keliye itna hi. ill continue if u guys liked it. throw all the chappals u want to am ready

precap:

virat calls manvi for telling his opinion about love( vese virat bhi orphan hai)


PART 1 = PAGE 1

PART 2 = PAGE 1








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Posted: 13 years ago
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guys one more thing

this is anamika


this is anuj
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it continue soon and PM me😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovee it girl manvi as rj a totally diff concept cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow this an awesome concept i've always wanted manvi to do sumthin lyk that cuz i think its really cool cnt wait for virat to call manvi bt i got a feelin that virat's opinion on love is gonna be negative n if it is then wat will manvi say ooohhh cnt wait to see plz do pm me wen u update really wud luv to read it further 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 2


AB TAK: in the last part u read that manvi wakes up late and anamika calls her to go to office as her show is in 1 hour.she rushed to her office and over there anuj comes and informs that she on air in seconds.he does the countdown and she is on air. she gives a topic every morning to discuss to make everyone feel fresh in the morning.she gave the topic love and a caller rohan called and gave his opinion about love.AB AGEY DEKHIYE HOTA HAI KYA.😉

KAHAANI AGEY





manvi- hello! and welcome back to breakfast with manvi.toh wo ta super romantic gaane saans aur saiyaara.dono mein katrina kaif hain actress but actors yani ke hero alag hai.ek mein sharukh aur ek main salman. haye haye kaash mein hi katrina hothi.well yeh gaana specially dedicated thi saare katrina kaif fans ko.ab un fans ko meri taraf se ek special thofa hai. main aapko ek question doongi aur aapko uski correct jawaab dene pandenge,aur agar aapki jawaab sahi hai toh aapko milenge a gift hamper worth 10,000.toh guys ready hain sawaal keliye?nahi?accha toh hum ek kaam karte hum ek super amazing gaana sunte hain aur phir back to question kyun?toh teekhe sunte hain a romantic song from gajini(evil laugh).

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y9YIX_E1Vtl

manvi-toh bhai woh ta my fav of the movie gajini.aur remember the sawaal jawaab session.your question is did katrina kaif recieve a nation award for best actress for acting in namastey london??????? toh humara agla caller hain tayaar toh dekhte hain ki kon hain woh.hellooo welcome to breakfast with manvi of radio masti. may i know your name please?

...- hi manvi .and i am viren.actually aaj mein hi nahi mera bhai bhi apni opinion bolne wale hain.toh kyaa apko koi problem hai?

manvi-arey viren, mujhe kya problem hogi? main toh bohot khush hun ki aap dono ne phone kiya. toh sunte hain aap dono ke rayi.so who's first?you or your bro?

viren- i guess i'll start off.

manvi- cool then.

viren-meri hisab se pyaar har jagah hote hain.har tarah ki hote hain.jaise ki mabaab ka pyaar,dost ka pyaar, bacho ki pyaar,biwi ya pati ki pyaar,girlfriend ya bf ki pyaar.but am talking about true love which happens only once in ur life.aur mein chahoongi meri life ki pyaar bohot intelligent ho(just then he saw jeevika standing waiting for bus),jab bhi koi mushkil mein ho wo uski madat kare(jeevika helped a blind man cross the road just after a nanosecond he finished saying the line) jo bohot khoobsurat ho(jeeevika's hair was flying everywhere).pyaar bohot hi khoobsurat feeling hai(and just add any romantic lines if u can from ur mind pls am not that romantic type)

manvi-uhuuu.hmmm.mr.viren vadhera kamaal kardiya aapne toh.aapki baat sunke toh shayad har ladki aap ko imagine karrahahoga aap unhe sharukh style mein propose karne ki.hahaha.i love you opinion.toh mr viren if u've finished it's your bro's turn right/

viren- yes of course.bhai ye lo.

...-hello manvi

manvi-(she felt like a heartbeat skipped her heart.)hello. main manvi hoon yeh toh aapko pata hai par main aapki naam toh nai jaanti hoon na . toh batayiye ur name and start

...-i am virat . virat vadhera.i totally agree with bhai .pyaar bohot saare tarike se hosakte hain, beauty se, intelligence ki wajah se, ek ladki ya ladke ki dil ki wajah se ya phir...

manvi- ya phir???????///

virat- ya phir kisike awaaz se.bina unke chehra dekhe.bus awaaz se hi pyaar hona.

manvi-arey waaah!!!!! kya baat hai. dono bhai ki jodi hai bohot achi.and virat ab tak ka sabse pyaara waale cute waala opinion aapkihi ta. thank u so much for calling. bye guys.

viren and virat-byeee!!!!!!!!

manvi- toh voh ta THE VADHERA BOYS toh unke liye ek song special se.
so enjoy the track.make some niose for the vadhera boys.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lyWHtKq1PcQ

manvi felt some thing wird after keeping the call. but she ignored it.


meanwhile

viren and virat- desi boys...(dey were singing with the song except for they said vadhera boys instead of singing desi boyz.)

viren-pasand hain na tumhe ussey?

virat- kissey bhai?

viren - oh hello!!! zyaada innocent mat bann main sab janti hoon.

virat- haan bhai i like her.but don't know whether it's love

viren- yaar u love her. believe me. chahe toh love test karale yaar.

virat- bhai love test ? seriously???????

vadhera boys-hahahahahahahahah

at the radio station

manvi-welcome back guys.to woh ta desi boyz from the movie desi boyz.we have a caller so let's seee

caller-helloo manvi

manvi- hello ji. welcome to breakfast with manvi of radio masti.aap ka naam?

caller- am ishaan

manvi- suhaana ka ishaan ya kisi aur ki??(suhana and ishaan were a couple in a serial called " sasural gendha phool"

ishaan- am katrina's ishaan in my dream and in real life am dimpy's ishaan.

manvi- toh dimpy's ishaan kya aapki love mariage hui thi? aur agar love marriage thi toh kya aap unki dimple dhekke ishq wala love hui.

ishaan- manvi ji aap bhi naa. haan humari love marriage hui thi.par main use pyaar dimple dekke nahi balki behaviour dek kar ki hai in fact unhe dimples hai hi nahi.

manvi accha toh dimpy ko dimple nahi hai? koi baat nahi sawaal yaad hai aapko?i'll repeat the question.did karina kaif recieve a national award for best actress for acting in namastey london?

ishaan-no?yes yes yes no no no no.

manvi- ishaan decide first yes or no?

ishaan- no no no no

manvi- ishaan am sorry but yeh galat ...nahi hain

ishaan - thank u manvi

manvi-aap ek gift hamper jeetey hain 10,000 ki. congratz and thnx for calling.lucky caller.shayad issey kehtey hain lady luck.toh aajka humara yeh last caller hain. hellooo.welcome to breakfast with manvi of radio masti.

caller-hellooo.

manvi-may i know ur name pls

caller-varun

manvi toh varun hey kaunse class mein padte hain aap?

varun-12th. aapko kaise pataaki main school main huun?shayad awaaz se honge.maine actually phone kiya hain ek song dedication keliye for my friends.

manvi- ok varun what are ur friends name?

varun- abhinav,aarti,avinay,anush,vinay,and vishwa.

manvi- great toh kaunse gana.

varun - character deela.

manvi- toh kyaa aapki sach main character deela hain?

varun - no(laughing)

manvi - ok don't worry hojayega.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2et1Zj5W95w

manvi - toh aaj bhi mujhe special request singing hi mila hai aur gaana hai lambi judai from jannat. toh i am starting to sing 1 2 3 4 go
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3HPNivHlAQs(imagine manvi singing it in radio station)


precap-

virat manvi meeting. what'll happen?will they recognize each other?









Edited by virmanrox8542 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I really lyk the concept of ur story n I luv the title
That is sooo cute virats fell in love with manvis voice nw that I'm sure will lead to pakka wala ishq wala love
Im really enjoyin this manvis bindaas character
Nice n lovely update plz do continue quickly
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnx a lot for ur support guys

i'll continue it. especially after seeing how many views i have ofcourse i wll
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey it was fab plzzz cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It's fab story...plz dear cont soon

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