Arjun Story: Alvida!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Guys... I have officially LOST it!!! Have school tom and it's 1 o clock... AND i am here.. STARTING A NEW STORY!!! Kya karoon? itna accha idea aaya k bas raha nhi gaya!!!

So here it goes:

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Prologue: Part 1 Pg 1 
Edited by Arjunkibehen - 10 years ago

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CHARACTER SKETCH 

ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte:

Riya Arjun Rawte:



ACP Shaleen Suryakant Rawte:


Undercover Specialist Sanjana Mukherjee

ACP Sameer Dhamsingh Rathod:

Ammunition Expert Ayesha Sameer Rathod:


Dr. Armaan Malik:

Dr. Riddhima Armaan Malik:

Tech Expert Shreekant Sen:

Commando Chandrakant Patil AKA Chotu:

Forensic Expert Liza D'Cruz:

Research Specialist Roshnii Mukherjee:



Edited by Arjunkibehen - 10 years ago
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Prologue Part 1
She stood in front of the door and took a deep breath to calm herself down. Right now, here, this moment could change her whole life. She would be taking the most important decision on her life. She remembered the oath she had taken when she had joined police force. She took another deep breath. Then she knocked on the door. Tap.. tap..!

Man: "Come in!"

She went in.

Girl: "good morning sir!"

The person sitting behind the large desk looked up to find the person he was least expecting and this surprise was visible on his face.

Man: "Oh! Good morning. Please have a seat! I wasn't expecting you so soon."

Girl: (smirking) "I can see that on your face sir."

Man: "You really are very sharp."

Girl: "And that is why I want you to send me on this mission, commissioner sir. I can do it!"

Commissioner Sir,: "I know you can. It's just that it's too dangerous. Also, you'll be all alone. Tumhaare saath aur koi nahi hoga."

Girl: "To kya hua sir? I can handle it. Mujh mein itni kabiliyat hai!"

Commissioner Sir: "I know that. However, main is fact ko bhi ignore nahi kar sakta ke vahan par agar tum akeli gayi to 99% chances hain k zinda vapis nahi aaogi. Kya tum sach mein apni poori zindagi issi tarah gawa dogi? Afterall, tumhaara bhi ek poora parivaar hai. Onke baare mein bhi to socho!"

Girl: "Sir, main onke baare mein hi soch rahi hoon. Issiliye ye karna chahti hoon. Aur sir, ye mera aakhri faisla hai. Humaare paas iss mission k ilaava aur koi chaara nahi hai."

Commissioner Sir: "Plz ek baar aur socho. Thoda intazaar karo. Shayad aur koi raasta nikal aaye!"

Girl: "Sir, Intazaar ka phal is case mein meetha nahi hai. Khatta hai. Aur intazaar karne k baad bhi agar meri family main se kisi ko bhi kuch bhi hua to main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paongi. Mujhe ye karna to hai sir! Aapke saath. Ya aapke bina!

Commissioner Sir: (shaking his head but sighing in defeat at the same time) "FINE! Ab agar tumne faisla kar hi liya hai to theek hai. Main iss mein tumhaara saath doonga. Magar, ek baar jo tum is mission par chali gayi to incomplete mission k saath vapis nahi aa sakti!"

Girl: "Incomplete mission ka iraada hai bhi nahi sir."

Commissioner Sir: "Magar hum tumhaari family se kya kahenge? After all, Vo sab bhi Police officers hain. Hum jhoot nahi bol sakte. Akde jaayenge. Especially tumhaare bhai aur pati se!"
Girl: "oska plan mere paas hai sir... Bas mujhe aapka saath chahiye."

Wokey Guys... I know I posted after long.. was a bit buzy!

Plzz "like and comment on it!!

Love ya all!!!
Edited by dashequalsd3 - 11 years ago
devildiva21 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow interesting cs...
waiting for the story...
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
interstingg CS

both shaleen and arjun are der...!!!

waitng for update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice cs dear . Continue soon:-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Interesting CS...
Both Shaleen and Arjun are here!!!!
This is gonna be one heck of a best story.
Jaldi shuru karo.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love it so far..
Especially the character sketch :)
2 Arjuns? I'm in 😉 😆
Hope you update soon!

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Posted: 11 years ago
I loved it! Please continue soon 😃 So much suspense in just one prologue.. Im sure the next part is going to be outstanding. Awesome character sketch too. Two arjun... thats interesting. I cant wait for it Edited by supreet_dmg - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow
arjun ji n shaleen ji together
int very int...!