Arya . what do you think?

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Hi all how are you.


I am Samra.

a few of you know me others not but hope to make
real good friends here on this forum too. I am making this post here so that arya fan can see my work too. please atleast give it a read once and see if i am worth writing it or not. i have been writing it on fiction forum but not many people are reading it so i thought of posting it here so every one can see it atleast once and judge my writing. i will wait for your judgement.

            
  
   



             




Their fire of love and passion is hidden
under the veil of black , Shadows of
their past





PROLOGUE


The muffled cry meant the woman was still alive. Yash
shindiya tightened his grip on his gun and moved cautiously forward , his eyes
frantically searching the shadows of the building.the only source of light was
the dim moonlight coming in through old stained windows.

Another distorted sob. They were near . he felt his heart
pound. He sensed more then he heard. His fbi partner mike was next to him eying
him cautiously. He was not in favour of yash to lead this operation but there
was no time to argue or wait for backup forces so they moved in while the rest
of the team was on their way.

Blood. Mike whispered . yash increased his strides they inched near
the last room. Yash raised his fingers and signaled.

one 

two 

three

And entered the room with mike covering him. FBI they
shouted together.

Yash ' s breath struck in his throat. The victem's mouth had
been covered with duct tape her hands bound. There was a silver blade on her
neck.

Prashant stood behind her hiding in the shadows.

Drop the knife. Yash said
I will cut her... He yelled back

The woman made a sound and he presses the knife deeper
resulting in a thin line of crimson appearing on her pale throat.Yash felt a
drop of perspiration roll down his throat.

Prashant listen to me .

Go away.

U know I wont . that's why you are here. So leave her.


So that you can send me to prison . 
don't you know I m schizophrenic

and not murderer.


You don't have to kill anyone today. We can take you to your
doctor you trust him right.


I dont trust anyone.

Yash's patience was thinning. He was about to loose
it and then he did the grave mistake of looking into the victim's eyes. The
same eyes that had always looked at him with so much love and affection were
now full of fear . tears were spilling from her eyes.

I don't want no doctor. I want arti.

Yash kept looking at arpita. The moments they had spent
together revolving in his eyes.he froze.

Mike who had seen the exchange elbowed him slightly to bring
him back. Yash broke the eyes contact.

If he wanted to save love of his life . he would have to act
professional.

I want arti... prashant yelled again

We can call her . our team will bring her in 15 mints first
you drop the knife


so you can kill me
never. She gave you my journal didn't she. She betrayed me for you. Now both of
you will suffer. 


She cares about you . she love you. She wants to help you.

Hearing this prashant laughed crazily his each shake making
nicks on arpitas throat. 

Yash assessed the situation arpita was acting as a shield to
prashant if he missed the shot even by millimeters his bullet will hit arpita.

And just then he saw as well as heard the saw the helicopter
with sniper in position targeting where prashant was standing.his team had
arrived it took him a few seconds to realize the consequence.

He shouted...Nooo...

Everything happened
in a blur. The window pan behing prashant gave away wth the bullet Yash lept toward arpita prashant fell and the
knife dug into arpita's throat. She fell like a broken doll. He reached her
pulled her up. Her blood was oozing and splashing all over her and hm. She looked
at him one last time and then left the world silently. 

Nooo

They heard the splash
Prashant had fallen in the water. Mike put a hand on yash's
shoulder but yash just sat there with arpita in his arms. He had gone mute.
  
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Yash Schindiya

  
 


An ex FBI agent. who used to be the soul of every party.Full of love and happiness. The best in his feild.. GIrls used to go crazy to have a glimpse of him. Don't worry Be happy used to be his moto. An ideal son an deal dad. ideal brother. ideal husband.The purpose of his life used to be to keep his family . High ambitions. but then one day everything changed and his only purpose to live was to die.
For him life meant breathing and breathing only.And that too only for his angels like kids. 



Aarthi  Schindiya


A bubbly fun loving girl, Married to prashant dubey... she was a family oriented girl her life revolving around her husband and son but then one day her whole life changed forever.She became a practical mom . living for his son only. afraid of her own shadows. she started living a nightmare
                           Kratika behind the scenes on the set of Punar Vivah




Ansh, Payal ,Palak




their three adorable kids



The rest of the characters are the same as in the show.










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Oh! Helo dear.. I'm your story follower re.. πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³!!


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Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Oh! Helo dear.. I'm your story follower re.. πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³!!



yup one of my 6 regular commentor. how can i forget you thaks for the support buddy
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hi dear
is this a new thread for the story πŸ˜›
nice start buddy.
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Originally posted by: ssch

yup one of my 6 regular commentor. how can i forget you thaks for the support buddy


πŸ˜†.. Ya I am! πŸ˜‰ No problem.. Keep Rocking! πŸ˜ƒ
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thyanks a ton SAmra .. it really means a lot for us as AAryans to see great creative minds n hearts pouring their hearts in words as FF... thanks a ton pal.. a big jadoo ki jhappi...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Originally posted by: RA17

thyanks a ton SAmra .. it really means a lot for us as AAryans to see great creative minds n hearts pouring their hearts in words as FF... thanks a ton pal.. a big jadoo ki jhappi...πŸ‘

thankyou and thanks for the idea. lets see if it works😊
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Wonderful FF... Please continue soon.
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continue soon
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