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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Ufff... Pari na pari na...
Daaaruuunnn...

Haye... Ibke romance se to mai v blush karne lagi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Last part.Part 3B.

As he leaned down,he shifted her hair to her left shoulder,now,completely,
revealing her back.
He leaned down and placed a soft,wet kiss on her neck.
As he placed the kiss,she moaned slightly,"Arjunn..."
he held her by her waist,tightly,being her support.
She felt his left hand around her waist,tightening his hold and his right hand,entwining with her right hand.
She felt at heaven.
She,immediately,turned and hugged him back tightly,never to let him go away from her.
He also responded to the hug.
He also hugged her tightly and hid his face on her shoulder,Both of them tightened their hug.
A silent tear rolled down from Arjun's eye,which wet her back.She felt it,but,to her surprise,Arjun kissed it away.
Again,she moaned.
Arjun: "Rone de aaj humko,
        Tu aakhein sujane de,
     Baaho mein le le,aur,
Mujhko bheeg jaane de,
Hai jo seene mein qaid dariya,
Woh chhut jayega,
Hain itna dard ke tera damaan,
Bheeg jayega."

she was immensely touched by his words.
Arjun(whispering to Zebbie in the hug): I am sorry.I am really very sorry,Zebbie.Mujhe maaf kardo.I know,mujhe ussdin apna limit cross nahi karna chahiye thha,par...
Zebbie: Ssshhh... Arjun... Beete baatein ko bhul jaiye aur aane wale khushiyon ke baare mein sochiye.Aur,mujhe aapke aansu se sakht dushmani hai.Aapko aakho mein aansu,mujhse bardasht nahi hote. I love you,Arjun,a lot.
Main apko kabhi bhi chorke nahi jaungi.
This was enough for him to understand that his Zebbie has forgiven him,truly from the heart.
BG Music:
"Dard mein bhi yeh labh,
Muskuraa jaate hai,
Beetein lamhein humein,
Jab bhi yaad aate hai...
Beetein lamhein...
Chand lamhato ke,
Waaste hi sahi,
Muskurakar mili thi mujhe zindagi,
Teri aaghosh mein,
Din thhe mere kate,
Teri Baaho mein thhi meri raatein kati...
O o o o o ...
Aaj bhi jab woh pal,
Mujhko yaad aate hai,
Dil se saare ghamo ko bhula jaate hai,
Dard mein bhi yeh labh,
Muskuraa jaate hai,
Beete lamhe humein,
Jab bhi yaad aatein hai."
(I used this Beete Lamhein song in this situation,coz,i felt,in this loving and warm hug,Arjun remembers all the happy moments spent with Zebbie,which brings a smile on his face,even if he is in any sort of pain or sorrow.
All in a nutshell,Zebbie's smile and love is the cure to all his pain and sorrows).

They break the hug.
Arjun leaned a bit to place a kiss on her maang,whic will be adorned by the sindoor of his name.
He then kissed her neck line,very gently,which will be the place of their another emblem towards Life...
Yes,the sacred wedding chain which Arjun will make her wear in their wedding.
He then took her hands on his,and kissed her palms and let his lips linger their for a while,which will be adorned with Arjun ki naam ka mehendi.
He then took her both the wrists and kissed them which will be adorned y the wedding churas.

Tears started to come out of Zebbie's eyes.
Yes,she was being loved by her Love.
Arjun felt her tear drops on his face,and leaned over to kiss away the away,and in that chance,placed a sweet kiss on both of her eyes.
Arjun(to Zebbie's tears): Tumhe koi haq nahi hai mere Zebbie ke aakho mein rehne ki,samjhe ya samjhhau?
She smiled at his antics.
Oh,My!!!!
Her smile...
How much he wished to see that beautiful smile of hers which took his heart away.
He didnt take anymore time.
He pulled her for a sweet and a soft kiss.
At first,he thought,she would feel bad,thats why,he parted a bit.
Zebbie didnt allow him.
Zebbie: Tumhe Haq Hai...
He got his answers.
Again,he pulled her for their first kiss.
It was a passionate one.
Zebbie was enjoying this beautiful moment of her life,no,actually,the beautiful moment of their life.
After they parted for some air,she hugged him and kept her head on his chest.
He hugged her,as tightly as he could.
Now,their hearts' were beating at the same rate,chanting each other's name.
Arjun: I love you,Zebbie,a lot.
Zebbie: I love you too,Arjun,khud se bhi zyada,apne jaan se bhi zyada.
Arjun: I promise,aage se waisa bartav nahi karunga tumse.
Zebbie: I know that,Arjun. Just consider that incident as temporary loss of anger.
Thorw that matter sfom your brain and heart,and,let me stay their,forever.
Arjun had no replies.
He was amazed at her words.
He smiled and turned her towards the moon.
Now,her back was facing him.
He hugged her tightly from the back and kissed her cheeks,neck line,jaw line,etc etc...
He held her by her waist,tightly,and covered themselves with Arjun's warm black jacket.
"Hum huye poore yahaan pe,
Iss chand aur Khuda ko gawa rakh ke,
Hum huye poore yahaan pe,
Iss chand aur Khuda ko gawa rakh ke,
Tumhare saath bitane hai jeevan ke saare haseen pal,
Ke,main tumpe apne jaan ko nichavar kardu,humare pyaar se."

Thus,Arjun and Zebbie,re united,keeping the God and the Moon,as their witness of Love.

The End.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
It was simply DIVINE...

Kono katha hobe na...

Out of d world... U dragged me to d dreamland...

Wow wow... Hell romanttic...

One of your best writings...

Proud of u darling...

Awesomeee...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: ankita2804

It was simply DIVINE...

Kono katha hobe na...

Out of d world... U dragged me to d dreamland...

Wow wow... Hell romanttic...

One of your best writings...

Proud of u darling...

Awesomeee...


yay...
My bhabi aka Anki commented...
Love you,Anki,for that.
I am happy that u loved it.
When i was writing the last two parts,i was simply imagining myself in thw hole situation.
I was literally blushing at the romantic moments of Zebbie+Arjun=ZebUn.
*blush*.
Ab apni bhabi se kya chupana...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
me completely in dreamworld...shayd wahin pe rukuhungi...!!!!!
awesomeee!!!!!!!!!
full on romantic thaaa...!
lovely work !
every min felt the romance...baht aacha tha loved it!
for u!!!👏👏👍🏼
and a bow from me!!!!hum aapke aagaye chukthe hai...!👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Aww...
Thanks for the lovely comments.
I appreciate ur love from the bottom of my heart..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Mujhe aur comments chahiye,please.
Iss bacche ki khwaish ko puri kardo.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Wow di...
Great update..
Thanks for pm.

I loved the bro- sis relation of zebbie and rathod.
You really expresse arjun's emotion and his pain very well.
Wow its tooo
romantic one...
I m blucsing.
Finally zebbie forgave him. And in such a romantic manner ...i just loved it...

The intensity of her is well explaind as she cancel their plan ...
The bg u used was too appropriate..
Especially that ' rone de mujhe ...'
that line stole my heart..

Do write more like this...

Just loved..

Sorry fr late cmmnt ..
Bt aaj exam bahaut accha tha..

And

''''congratulation''' , goldie

Edited by Vampire-queen - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

Wow di...
Great update..
Thanks for pm.

I loved the bro- sis relation of zebbie and rathod.
You really expresse arjun's emotion and his pain very well.
Wow its tooo
romantic one...
I m blucsing.
Finally zebbie forgave him. And in such a romantic manner ...i just loved it...

The intensity of her is well explaind as she cancel their plan ...
The bg u used was too appropriate..
Especially that ' rone de mujhe ...'
that line stole my heart..

Do write more like this...

Just loved..

Sorry fr late cmmnt ..
Bt aaj exam bahaut accha tha..

And

''''congratulation''' , goldie


thank you so much,my entertainment queen.
Good that ur exam was accha.
Agar Zebbie Arjun ki hai,toh Arjun ke saare gunaah maaf.,kyunki,Zebbie Arjun ki thhi,hai aur humesha rahegi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Ohh realy grate ending..
arjun crushed himselfff...
n so finaly zebbie..cancel her plane..
arjun n zebbie momemt is grate..
grate job dr...