my new ff preview ,new pr in pg 3

Posted: 2013-03-15T14:07:21Z
an story with diff after parde wali ends surely after it ends but ur comment will decide this ff fate LOL

the story starts and where ram engagement was finally fixed and then when he was about to put ring on soo called fiance who was some stupid model suddenly and kids come and says papa "kya kar rahe hoo?"(typical ekta style) he was like papa and me
then comes the situation when priya enters saying ye aaapki ka bachha hain i had enough of handling her single hand and need some rest and tell u take care of her and goes off shocking ram tries to talk but no use and his engagement breaks off..

the kid was totally over ram and all goes angry over ram ram even refuses saying it was not his kid(how mean) priya was lying and no one was ready to believe ram even get slapped by that girl where he goes to specify things and pihu giggles as ram had no other choice other than to take her .pihu jumps saying papa pit gaye aunty ne slap kiya

when he return back they sit on sofa and sleep of there as ram keeps thinking and trying to ask pihu and all.when ram mom come down(Krishna mom) get shocked as both were sleeping in same style and with karaaate she thinks it is sure for ram the morning both at same time ask for aloo ke paraaathe

with no other go he goes to priya who says because of him her engagement broke of with rajat(yes yes it is rajat as i wanted rajat to wave bye to priya in serial which din't happen so i am making it her)

did u people like the preview please give me ur valuable comments 
Edited by shamavi - 2013-03-18T13:21:32Z
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Posted: 2013-03-15T14:10:25Z
aaawwwhhh its so cute kid entering total ek style ...

its good that ram didnt got engaged to any stupid model...

priya and rajat no ways...

how can i forgot ram geting a slap nooo waysss still find it funny...

cont soon count me on...

till i get my exams scheduleWink
Edited by taashu11 - 2013-03-15T14:15:48Z
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Posted: 2013-03-15T14:10:40Z
loving it plz cont soon
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Posted: 2013-03-15T14:20:13Z
Fab.. Dear...update soon
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Posted: 2013-03-16T07:45:49Z
Yaar preview to bahut hi intresting diya hain..ab wait nahi hoga pls start this ff soon..waiting eagerly
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Posted: 2013-03-16T07:55:57Z
its really funny
But i didnt like two things
ram getting slapped and involving RajjoAngry
Thank god he didnt meet priya in the last scene and start his dukhbhari kahaniDead
i hate him even if he his in same frame with priya(puke)

cont soon its your story anyways
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Posted: 2013-03-16T07:57:11Z
omg thats totally a hilarious one  do continue this ... :) best wishes 
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Posted: 2013-03-16T08:16:17Z
preview is superb  &fantastic...getting greedy wants this ff to start as soon as pssblSmile
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