FF - RaYa - Second Chance overview on pg 149 - Page 8

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Nicely pen down...

Go ahead...

Kashmkash do insaanoan ki when they say yes to a guy/girl for marriage

written very well...

thanks for liking
I think that in arranged marriage kashmakash is very normal and if the marriage is taking place in a later age then it is very much apt, aur mera manna yeh hi ki iss rishten ki yehi khoobsurati hain, ek dusren ko bina jaane zindagi bhar saath nibhane ka faisla, iss me kuch toh baat hain

can u update the index in first page of ur FF..

very very nice update, how both of them took their decisions, the last line said by ram to priya while dropping her back, and in the end the last thought in their minds befor sleeping, too good 😊

Originally posted by: D4BALH

can u update the index in first page of ur FF..

will definitely do that, thanks for the suggestion

ur story is fantastic and going very nicely.

Originally posted by: gupta90

very very nice update, how both of them took their decisions, the last line said by ram to priya while dropping her back, and in the end the last thought in their minds befor sleeping, too good😊

thank u so much that u like it, infact I was bit skeptical about the last line, but thought to give a try, thanks for the comment

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

ur story is fantastic and going very nicely.

Ram ko bolo jyada soche nahi because hame pata hai woh Priya ko zaroor kush rakega.

explain each things very nice

wanted to see how they talk to each other in their second meeting. exited

continue soon.

thank u for liking the update, there won't be any official second meeting but meeting is in the store and it will definitely be fun and masti in it, so keep reading

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

thanks for the comments but am not satisfied, I want more and then only I will update, shaadi toh hogi par usse pehle thoda masti bhi toh honi chahiye, aur thoda awkwardness and embarrassment bhi hoga, thoda aankhon aankhon me baatein bhi hongi, si guys for that u all have to wait, and have to comment

Hmmm aankhon hi aankhon mein ishara ho gaya
Waiting eagerly yar continue soon

I promise the patience will bear good fruit, kyunki sabr ka phal hamesha meetha hota hain

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

I promise the patience will bear good fruit, kyunki sabr ka phal hamesha meetha hota hain

Chaliye aap khati hai to maan lete...jaldi update karo...